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Greetings Security council ,I'm here to commend Freedomanica for the following reasons:

For administrating in the best way Fylkirvegr

For being nice and serious to Fylkirvegr's memebers

For endorsing many,if not all of the region's memebers

For giving opportunities to the nations in Fylkirvegr

For helding many embassies between regions


For well-informing Fylkirvegr's memebers about whatever is going on


Freedomanica,after all ,has done a great job
Hereby commends Freedomanica

Nothing in this is at all commendable. Freedomanica might be a good person and might be good at running a region - I have no knowledge on either of those points - but the things they're being commended for in this proposal are things that hundreds if not thousands of other founders have done. These achievements aren't unique or inherently impressive.

While I don't want to put you off writing proposals entirely, I would suggest that you read a few passed commendations beforehand to get a better understanding of the standards set here in the SC.

Not seeing it. Plenty of other regional founders/delegates have done far more than this and haven't been commended.

Going to agree with Drasnia about your draft. Nothing inherently commendable in your nominee and you really need to read a few passed resolutions to get an idea of how such a proposal should be written.

But you do get bonus points for drafting first on the forum.

Well, first off, you’ve got a few formatting issues to tweak.

You probably need to put the proposal between the .[proposal][/proposal].

Spaces always come after commas, and not before commas.

Commendations don’t start off like that. I recommend looking at passed commendations for guidance.

You should also link to Freedomanica’s page on your first mentioning of them.

Drasnia wrote:Nothing in this is at all commendable. Freedomanica might be a good person and might be good at running a region - I have no knowledge on either of those points - but the things they're being commended for in this proposal are things that hundreds if not thousands of other founders have done. These achievements aren't unique or inherently impressive.

While I don't want to put you off writing proposals entirely, I would suggest that you read a few passed commendations beforehand to get a better understanding of the standards set here in the SC.

Sorry,I didn't know how it worked,thank you for telling me