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[Draft] Liberate LASAGNA PART TWO

PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2020 10:54 pm
by United Nations organisation
The Security Council,

Acknowledging, the fact that Lasagna Liberated LASAGNA PART TWO from various raiding organisations;

Contending, that Lasagna has tried to search LASAGNA PART TWO's true residents for a long time;

Disappointed, that a region called as 'ravana' raided LASAGNA PART TWO and has banned and ejected any Liberation movement;

Affirming, that ravana has password locked LASAGNA PART TWO and is using it as a war trophy;

Hereby Liberate LASAGNA PART TWO

PostPosted: Wed Jun 24, 2020 11:21 pm
by Bhang Bhang Duc
Possibly illegal (R4c) for saying the region has an owner. Change that to Founder and you should be okay.

Apart from that why should we be bothered with liberating this region?

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 3:28 am
by Team Leo
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Possibly illegal (R4c) for saying the region has an owner. Change that to Founder and you should be okay.

Apart from that why should we be bothered with liberating this region?

A yo Lasagna part TWO is my allies

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 3:54 am
by Bhang Bhang Duc
Team Leo wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Possibly illegal (R4c) for saying the region has an owner. Change that to Founder and you should be okay.

Apart from that why should we be bothered with liberating this region?

A yo Lasagna part TWO is my allies

I am agog with apathy about who your allies are. Now do you have anything to contribute apart from poor grammar?

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 4:04 am
by United Nations organisation
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Possibly illegal (R4c) for saying the region has an owner. Change that to Founder and you should be okay.

Apart from that why should we be bothered with liberating this region?

Changed to residents as the Founder has already ceased to exist

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 4:23 am
by Bhang Bhang Duc
United Nations organisation wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Possibly illegal (R4c) for saying the region has an owner. Change that to Founder and you should be okay.

Apart from that why should we be bothered with liberating this region?

Changed to residents as the Founder has already ceased to exist

Okay, that’s fine. Now back to my other question; why should we care about the region? Does it have any particular cultural significance, or been around for a long time?

You need to give us reasons in the proposal why we should care enough to vote to liberate it.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:25 am
by WayNeacTia
Team Leo wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Possibly illegal (R4c) for saying the region has an owner. Change that to Founder and you should be okay.

Apart from that why should we be bothered with liberating this region?

A yo Lasagna part TWO is my allies

Awesome. You better get on a campaign to liberate them from the brutal occupation they face. :roll:

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:29 am
by LollerLand
United Nations organisation wrote:Contending, that Lasagna has tried to search LASAGNA PART TWO's true residents for a long time;
And did they find any? Why should the SC liberate a region with no natives or natives that have moved on and don't care about it anymore?

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:30 am
by Team Leo
The Security Council,

Acknowledging, the fact that Lasagna Liberated LASAGNA PART TWO from various raiding organisations;

Contending, that Lasagna has tried to search LASAGNA PART TWO's true residents for a long time;

I think you should get rid of this part
Disappointed, that a region called as 'ravana' raided LASAGNA PART TWO and has banned and ejected any Liberation movement;

Affirming, that ravana has password locked LASAGNA PART TWO and is using it as a war trophy;

Hereby Liberate LASAGNA PART TWO
Well I think this is a good proposal, however I don't think the second line of the proposal is really neccessary.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:31 am
by Team Leo
Wayneactia wrote:
Team Leo wrote:A yo Lasagna part TWO is my allies

Awesome. You better get on a campaign to liberate them from the brutal occupation they face. :roll:

Yeah can you help me liberate it?

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:34 am
by Team Leo
LollerLand wrote:
United Nations organisation wrote:Contending, that Lasagna has tried to search LASAGNA PART TWO's true residents for a long time;
And did they find any? Why should the SC liberate a region with no natives or natives that have moved on and don't care about it anymore?

If you check the Administration page, you would find a lot of nations banejected from the region

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:35 am
by Honeydewistania
Not a mod, but you need to stop quadruple posting. It’s getting spammy.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:38 am
by Team Leo
Honeydewistania wrote:Not a mod, but you need to stop quadruple posting. It’s getting spammy.

My bad. I am greatly sowwy

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:41 am
by LollerLand
Team Leo wrote:
LollerLand wrote:And did they find any? Why should the SC liberate a region with no natives or natives that have moved on and don't care about it anymore?

If you check the Administration page, you would find a lot of nations banejected from the region

For all we know, they could all be puppets and it indeed looks like that.
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Now back to my other question; why should we care about the region? Does it have any particular cultural significance, or been around for a long time?

You need to give us reasons in the proposal why we should care enough to vote to liberate it.
Also this.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 6:24 am
by United England n Wales
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Team Leo wrote:A yo Lasagna part TWO is my allies

I am agog with apathy about who your allies are. Now do you have anything to contribute apart from poor grammar?

Just stop being a grammar police.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 6:26 am
by United England n Wales
Honeydewistania wrote:Not a mod, but you need to stop quadruple posting. It’s getting spammy.

Triple posting, I only see three

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 6:32 am
by Team Leo
United England n Wales wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:I am agog with apathy about who your allies are. Now do you have anything to contribute apart from poor grammar?

Just stop being a grammar police.

Exactly

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 6:37 am
by Team Leo
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:
Team Leo wrote:A yo Lasagna part TWO is my allies

I am agog with apathy about who your allies are. Now do you have anything to contribute apart from poor grammar?

I dont think anyone cares. Stop being a grammar police. It is getting very annoying

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 8:19 am
by Sedgistan
You didn't need to post twice to say the same thing someone else had already said.

Bhang Bhang Duc has contributed far more to this thread than you. He may come across as grouchy and blunt, but BBD consistently provides useful feedback and suggestions on SC proposal drafts, that more people should listen to.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 8:40 am
by Mathuvan Union
Sedgistan wrote:You didn't need to post twice to say the same thing someone else had already said.

Bhang Bhang Duc has contributed far more to this thread than you. He may come across as grouchy and blunt, but BBD consistently provides useful feedback and suggestions on SC proposal drafts, that more people should listen to.

he may have contributed more in terms of tips advice and the like, but Team Leo also created somewhat of a new draft of the liberation draft, which United Nations organisation could possibly find helpful

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 8:55 am
by Team Leo
Sedgistan wrote:You didn't need to post twice to say the same thing someone else had already said.

Bhang Bhang Duc has contributed far more to this thread than you. He may come across as grouchy and blunt, but BBD consistently provides useful feedback and suggestions on SC proposal drafts, that more people should listen to.

My bad dearest leader

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 9:05 am
by United England n Wales
LollerLand wrote:
Team Leo wrote:If you check the Administration page, you would find a lot of nations banejected from the region

For all we know, they could all be puppets and it indeed looks like that.
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Now back to my other question; why should we care about the region? Does it have any particular cultural significance, or been around for a long time?

You need to give us reasons in the proposal why we should care enough to vote to liberate it.
Also this.

The Natives were banjected onsite, any puppets that are in the region are from ravana.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 9:17 am
by United England n Wales
United Nations organisation wrote:
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Possibly illegal (R4c) for saying the region has an owner. Change that to Founder and you should be okay.

Apart from that why should we be bothered with liberating this region?

Changed to residents as the Founder has already ceased to exist

I suggest maybe putting in that they refuse or are stalling on a peace treaty, or something like that.

Also you might want to add that they are threatening to raid lasagna because they are trophy hungry.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 10:04 am
by Farlandiay
I am the Founder of the region Ravana in question, and I think you will find that this proposal has little weight and the premises around it are being miscommunicated. There is an ongoing conflict between Lasagna and Ravana that was sparked by a failed raid by Lasagna itself on Ravana. The occupation and subsequent password of Lasagna Part Two was a response to this initial strike, and is being held only as leverage for Lasagna to accept a peace treaty linked here: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1390576

Ravana is not stalling a treaty, in fact we have routinely and consistently pushed for acceptance of this treaty and an end to hostilities. The Lasagnan Army has caused several offenses against Ravana that de-legitimatize this proposal, including their impersonation of me stating "I am a puppet of farlandiay, everyone go spam the south pacific" and RMB spamming that was reprimanded by moderators.

Ravana is not a raiding force, and this is a war with nuance and violations made by both sides. This liberation proposal is undeserving of approval and is rooted in a false interpretation of events. Beyond that, at the time of the raid, there were no natives in the region. The only nations that resided there were puppets from TBH left over from a previous tag raid on the region. Every ejection was a Ravanian puppet so that the influence cost for a password would be reduced. Government officials in Lasagna have claimed on a dozen occasions on their RMB that they had no association with Lasagna Part Two, that they didn't care about it, and that it didn't matter if we occupied it. To further communicate this point, they even founded 'Ravana Part Two'.

PostPosted: Thu Jun 25, 2020 10:09 am
by Team Leo
Farlandiay wrote:I am the Founder of the region Ravana in question, and I think you will find that this proposal has little weight and the premises around it are being miscommunicated. There is an ongoing conflict between Lasagna and Ravana that was sparked by a failed raid by Lasagna itself on Ravana. The occupation and subsequent password of Lasagna Part Two was a response to this initial strike, and is being held only as leverage for Lasagna to accept a peace treaty linked here: https://www.nationstates.net/page=dispatch/id=1390576

Ravana is not stalling a treaty, in fact we have routinely and consistently pushed for acceptance of this treaty and an end to hostilities. The Lasagnan Army has caused several offenses against Ravana that de-legitimatize this proposal, including their impersonation of me stating "I am a puppet of farlandiay, everyone go spam the south pacific" and RMB spamming that was reprimanded by moderators.

Ravana is not a raiding force, and this is a war with nuance and violations made by both sides. This liberation proposal is undeserving of approval and is rooted in a false interpretation of events. Beyond that, at the time of the raid, there were no natives in the region. The only nations that resided there were puppets from TBH left over from a previous tag raid on the region. Every ejection was a Ravanian puppet so that the influence cost for a password would be reduced. Government officials in Lasagna have claimed on a dozen occasions on their RMB that they had no association with Lasagna Part Two, that they didn't care about it, and that it didn't matter if we occupied it. To further communicate this point, they even founded 'Ravana Part Two'.

Yeah can you give LP2 back now. You are going way too far >:(