Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Some possible wording changes, the content though looks good.Dismaying that, during this sixteen-year reign, the leader of Mikeswill has led multiple countries - one of which, Mikes Hope, was leveled to the ground due to godly wrath, likely as a result of the leader's maleficence,
“Dismayed that,” rather than “Dismaying that,”.
Interesting - my coauthor brought up the same thing, but I insisted "Dismaying..." was correct, because it sounds more accurate to me. However, it does appear that I have been outnumbered here, so I'll change it.
Scorning Mikeswill's utter, relentless disdain towards this prestigious counciland body, voting against nearly all proposals put forth before it - a belief that is so vile, annoyingly repetitive, and prominent that it ultimatelymanifested towardscaused the regional descriptor of "Anti-Security Council"beingto be made availablebyto the international community,
Couple of small changes here.
I think that’s it.
Fixed. I kept in "body" as opposed to "council" because I feel it works better, but I don't think it matters too much.