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(Draft) Repeal Commend Crushing Our Enemies

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(Draft) Repeal Commend Crushing Our Enemies

Postby Amaabj » Wed Jun 03, 2020 6:34 am

Noting the Hypocrisy of the Security Council passing the Resolution Commending Crushing our Enemies that was Written by a raider, Commending a raider, and Supported by raiders.

Notes that if indeed Crushing our Enemies Controls General COE who Stabilized The North Pacific's Government, Which is an Ally of the North Pacific and the Black Hawks both of which are Condemned Regions.

Strongly Believes that 10+ years of Military accomplishments are not reasons to Commend a nation, especially if they are "Playing a vital role in the foreign policy practices and regional responses of The Black Hawks' Council" Which likely includes raiding and supporting other raiders.

Duly Noting that Despite Two Condemnations the Black Hawks Have not Relented and are still Raiding regions including lately the region SEC Fanatics, a region that has held many of us together. Also pointing out the fact that the author is one of the raiders that commited this Atrocity.

Hereby Repeals the Commending of Crushing our enemies

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Postby Amaabj » Wed Jun 03, 2020 6:54 am

Please GIve your opinions, i know the writing is rather rough and It can be updated. Please don't be afraid to Let me know how it is.

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Postby Electrum » Wed Jun 03, 2020 7:26 am

Amaabj wrote:Please GIve your opinions, i know the writing is rather rough and It can be updated. Please don't be afraid to Let me know how it is.


I'm not going to comment on the content of the resolution since I'm not a gameplayer.

You are needlessly capitalising too many words. Three of your clauses are variations of 'noting.' Also 'The North Pacific' is not a condemned region.
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Postby PotatoFarmers » Wed Jun 03, 2020 7:32 am

Fantastic. So now you belong to the group of people who believe that "if X is in Y, and Y is bad, then X is bad". Surely your text isn't convincing at all, because that is basically your argument. One look at it, and you probably cannot convince anyone much.
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Postby Amaabj » Wed Jun 03, 2020 8:00 am

PotatoFarmers wrote:Fantastic. So now you belong to the group of people who believe that "if X is in Y, and Y is bad, then X is bad". Surely your text isn't convincing at all, because that is basically your argument. One look at it, and you probably cannot convince anyone much.

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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Wed Jun 03, 2020 8:06 am

Weren’t you taught the correct use of capital letters at school?

As far as I can see your attempt does not really address the contents of the Commendation - for example going on about TBH’s current occupation, the fact that they have two Condemnations. They have nothing to do with COE’s Commendation.

Please try harder.
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Postby Awesomeland012345 » Wed Jun 03, 2020 8:12 am

Amaabj wrote:Notes that if indeed Crushing our Enemies Controls General COE who Stabilized The North Pacific's Government, Which is an Ally of the North Pacific those are the same regions and the Black Hawks both of which are Condemned Regions. TNP hasn't been condemned

Strongly Believes that 10+ years of Military accomplishments are not reasons to Commend a nation. How is 10 years doing one thing not commendable

Also pointing out the fact that the author is one of the raiders that commited this Atrocity. the author is not part of the actual proposal
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Postby Amaabj » Wed Jun 03, 2020 8:16 am

Awesomeland012345 wrote:
Amaabj wrote:Notes that if indeed Crushing our Enemies Controls General COE who Stabilized The North Pacific's Government, Which is an Ally of the North Pacific those are the same regions and the Black Hawks both of which are Condemned Regions. TNP hasn't been condemned

Strongly Believes that 10+ years of Military accomplishments are not reasons to Commend a nation. How is 10 years doing one thing not commendable

Also pointing out the fact that the author is one of the raiders that commited this Atrocity. the author is not part of the actual proposal

All duly noted, will re write

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Postby The Notorious Mad Jack » Wed Jun 03, 2020 12:28 pm

This is very odd.
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Postby Cantanasia » Thu Jun 04, 2020 2:02 am

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Postby Zentata » Thu Jun 04, 2020 7:51 am

Still, capitalization. Please capitalize properly.
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Postby WayNeacTia » Sat Jun 06, 2020 11:49 pm

If the grapes were any more sour, the wine will turn to vinegar. Seriously though, this isn't worth the time tit took to write it. It will never even come close to scaring quorum, let alone passing.

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Postby Kromerov » Sun Jun 07, 2020 3:00 am

In my opinion, I would say hold off on this repeal for another few resolutions to pass/fail plus, COE's failures should be highlighted
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