The Black Hawks-Asia Embassy and CONDEMN KURIKO

[OOFD]

(DRAFT)


The Black Hawks, a region that is well known for raiding left Asia a few days ago. Kuriko, during that time, made a proposal to LIBERATE Asia. I shall tell you that the Black Hawks rarely password a region. Only the most special ones are passworded. Asia was enjoying our presence. Then, the defenders came in. Asia has been friends with TBH for a long time. Therefore, I think Asia should construct embassies with TBH. Kuriko should be condemned for falsely accusing the Blck Hawks of Imperialism when we refound or let most regions go. In some regions, we are not liked, and I accept that fact, but when we went into Asia, we brought liveliness and activity to it. Asia used to be a dormant region before this. Plus, we were looking for Penny, our discord bot. Our intentions were not to hold Asia as a trophy, or password it, but to find Penny and make it livelier.

[Reploid Productions]

Holy crap that was an impressive multipost, I don't think I've seen an icosapost since the old pre-Jolt forum days! Duplicate copies removed, thread towed to the correct forum.

[OOFD]

Sorry. I have an auto clicker.

[Reploid Productions]

Sorry. I have an auto clicker.

Would recommend against that in the future. Save the auto-clickers for clicker games, not forum posting!

[OOFD]

Yeah. I had it off, but it accidentally turned on! Anyway, I am sorry.

[Aurum Raider]

Holy crap that was an impressive multipost, I don't think I've seen an icosapost since the old pre-Jolt forum days! Duplicate copies removed, thread towed to the correct forum.

icosathanks, Reppy

The Black Hawks, a region that is well known for raiding left Asia a few days ago. Kuriko, during that time, made a proposal to LIBERATE Asia. I shall tell you that the Black Hawks rarely password a region. Only the most special ones are passworded. Asia was enjoying our presence. Then, the defenders came in. Asia has been friends with TBH for a long time. Therefore, I think Asia should construct embassies with TBH. Kuriko should be condemned for falsely accusing the Blck Hawks of Imperialism when we refound or let most regions go. In some regions, we are not liked, and I accept that fact, but when we went into Asia, we brought liveliness and activity to it. Asia used to be a dormant region before this. Plus, we were looking for Penny, our discord bot. Our intentions were not to hold Asia as a trophy, or password it, but to find Penny and make it livelier.

I think you're going to find a lot of opposition to this proposal based on the formatting alone.

The text of the proposal includes a litany of rule 4d violations

I shall tell you that the Black Hawks rarely password a region.

Asia was enjoying our presence.

Therefore, I think Asia should construct embassies

In some regions, we are not liked, and I accept that fact, but when we went into Asia, we brought liveliness and activity to it

Plus, we were looking for Penny, our discord bot. Our intentions

By containing no operative clause it also violates rule 3.

Personally, until you amend the formatting and address the rule violations, I think engaging with the actual content of the proposal doesn't serve much of a purpose.

[OOFD]

Where can I find the rules? I didn't know about them. I will edit this thing.

[Zizou]

Where can I find the rules? I didn't know about them. I will edit this thing.

There's a list of them stickied on the forum
viewtopic.php?f=24&t=8809

[Aurum Raider]

Where can I find the rules? I didn't know about them. I will edit this thing.

You can find them all on a pinned thread in the Security Council forum.

I also suggest you look at other successful resolutions to determine how to format yours.

[OOFD]

ok.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Where can I find the rules? I didn't know about them. I will edit this thing.

Edit it? Burying it would be better. There is very little chance you would be able to edit your blog into a reasonable proposal.

Read the rules, read previously passed Condemnations/Commendations for an idea of format and, more importantly, to see the level of research and detail that goes into one of these.

[OOFD]

Where can I find the rules? I didn't know about them. I will edit this thing.

Edit it? Burying it would be better. There is very little chance you would be able to edit your blog into a reasonable proposal.

Read the rules, read previously passed Condemnations/Commendations for an idea of the format, and, more importantly, to see the level of research and detail that goes into one of these.

Oh, ok. Thanks for the advice Bhang Bhang Duc. This was a foolish proposal anyway. Can a moderator delete this topic, please? I am sorry to have wasted your time.

[Reploid Productions]

Edit it? Burying it would be better. There is very little chance you would be able to edit your blog into a reasonable proposal.

Read the rules, read previously passed Condemnations/Commendations for an idea of the format, and, more importantly, to see the level of research and detail that goes into one of these.

Oh, ok. Thanks for the advice Bhang Bhang Duc. This was a foolish proposal anyway. Can a moderator delete this topic, please? I am sorry to have wasted your time.

Well, we can certainly lock it per request at least.

WA proposal writing is an area of the community with an extremely steep learning curve; so don't be discouraged if your first idea falls flat! If you want to get into proposal writing, it's highly recommended that you spend time reading and participating in other drafting discussions first. More experienced players can often provide in-depth feedback and participating in those discussions can help better prepare you to tackle writing your own first serious proposal draft as you see what sort of work goes into making a successful one. It can be intimidating to be sure, but with time and effort it can pay off.