[ON HOLD] Condemn Amaabj

[Cappedore]

The Security Council of the Word Assembly,

Acknowledging that the subject of this report is Amaabj,

Observing Amaabj's previous activity in the region: the Union of Allied States,

Recognizing Amaabj's treasonous activity against the Union of Allied States,

Also Recognizing Amaabj's attempt to publicly humiliate and publicly shame innocent members of the Union of Allied States,

Observing Amaabj's aggressive behaviour inside and outside the Union of Allied States,

Hereby Condemns Amaabj.

The Security Council of the Word Assembly,

Acknowledging that the subject of this report is Amaabj,

Observing the fact that Amaabj has since committed treasonous crimes against his former region: the Union of Allied States.
• Amaabj has been conspiring against the Union of Allied States using threats referring to the raider region of The Black Hawks and other regions such as Antifa, trying to push false rumours that the UAS is fascist.
• Amaabj has been caught in multiple telegrams to the nation of Cappedore to overthrow the government of the Union of Allied States.

Knowing that Amaabj previously attempted to meddle in a UAS Senate Bill Election from his new region, the New World Order at the point where he was banned and ejected from the Union of Allied States. New World Order has a stable embassy with the Union of Allied States.

Understanding that Amaabj has been put on trial in the New World Order after the Union of Allied States informed their government of Amaabj’s treasonous activities in the UAS.

Acknowledging that Amaabj had a plan to flee to the region known as The Hallowed Hideaway after his ejection from the Union of Allied States who soon denied him entry.

Hereby CONDEMNS Amaabj.

The Security Council of the Word Assembly,


Conceding that the subject of this report is Amaabj,

Examining the fact that Amaabj has since committed treasonous crimes against its former region, the Union of Allied States.
• Amaabj has been conspiring against the Union of Allied States using threats referring to the raider region of The Black Hawks and other regions such as Antifa, trying to push false rumours that the UAS is fascist in an attempt to smear the region’s reputation.
• Amaabj has been caught in multiple telegrams to the nation of Cappedore making threats to overthrow the government of the Union of Allied States all which Cappedore then sent to governmental officials in the UAS.

Understanding that Amaabj previously attempted to meddle in a UAS Senate Bill Election from his new region, the New World Order, at the point where Amaabj was banned and ejected from the Union of Allied States. It is to be noted that the UAS has had stable embassies with the NWO for some time now.

Recognizing that Amaabj has been put on trial in the New World Order after the Union of Allied States informed their government of Amaabj’s treasonous activities in the UAS.

Acknowledging that Amaabj had a plan to flee to the region known as The Hallowed Hideaway after Amaabj’s ejection from the Union of Allied States. THH soon denied Amaabj entry into the region.

Hereby condemns Amaabj.

(He sent the above message to 5 of his embassy regions, all messages mentioning The Civitas Islands.)

^ (That one was sent in one of my forum threads "Drew Durnil broke nationstates" in a smear attempt)

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Is that it? You’re going to have to provide a lot more reasons and detail as to why the SC should Condemn this nation.

At the moment this is tissue thin

[Cappedore]

Is that it? You’re going to have to provide a lot more reasons and detail as to why the SC should Condemn this nation.

At the moment this is tissue thin

It's a work in progress, yes. I'm putting it here because this is the initial draft.

Thanks for the feedback, though. There are plenty more reasons and I can supply evidence through pictures on these forums if it would so please the SC.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Is that it? You’re going to have to provide a lot more reasons and detail as to why the SC should Condemn this nation.

At the moment this is tissue thin

It's a work in progress, yes. I'm putting it here because this is the initial draft.

Thanks for the feedback, though. There are plenty more reasons and I can supply evidence through pictures on these forums if it would so please the SC.

Well you get the bonus point for drafting here first. However, please make sure any evidence presented happened in NS. You don’t get Condemned for things you said or did in Discord or anything else off-site.

[Cappedore]

It's a work in progress, yes. I'm putting it here because this is the initial draft.

Thanks for the feedback, though. There are plenty more reasons and I can supply evidence through pictures on these forums if it would so please the SC.

Well you get the bonus point for drafting here first. However, please make sure any evidence presented happened in NS. You don’t get Condemned for things you said or did in Discord or anything else off-site.

Yeah, I'm aware. Only telegrams and such will be provided. Thanks for the help, though. Appreciate it.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Well you get the bonus point for drafting here first. However, please make sure any evidence presented happened in NS. You don’t get Condemned for things you said or did in Discord or anything else off-site.

Yeah, I'm aware. Only telegrams and such will be provided. Thanks for the help, though. Appreciate it.

No problem.

One final word of advice - check Rule 2(c).

[Cappedore]

(He sent the above message to 5 of his embassy regions, all messages mentioning The Civitas Islands.)

^ (That one was sent in one of my forum threads "Drew Durnil broke nationstates" in a smear attempt)

This has also been posted on the main post.

[Cappedore]

The Security Council of the Word Assembly,

Acknowledging that the subject of this report is Amaabj,

Observing the fact that Amaabj has since committed treasonous crimes against his former region: the Union of Allied States.
• Amaabj has been conspiring against the Union of Allied States using threats referring to the raider region of The Black Hawks and other regions such as Antifa, trying to push false rumours that the UAS is fascist.
• Amaabj has been caught in multiple telegrams to the nation of Cappedore to overthrow the government of the Union of Allied States.

Knowing that Amaabj previously attempted to meddle in a UAS Senate Bill Election from his new region, the New World Order at the point where he was banned and ejected from the Union of Allied States. New World Order has a stable embassy with the Union of Allied States.

Understanding that Amaabj has been put on trial in the New World Order after the Union of Allied States informed their government of Amaabj’s treasonous activities in the UAS.

Acknowledging that Amaabj had a plan to flee to the region known as The Hallowed Hideaway after his ejection from the Union of Allied States who soon denied him entry.

Hereby CONDEMNS Amaabj.

[Tinhampton]

Amaabj is a nation, not a player, under Rule 4.

Opposed - this should be a matter for the UAS, not for the WASC.

[Cappedore]

Amaabj is a nation, not a player, under Rule 4.

Opposed - this should be a matter for the UAS, not for the WASC.

Where does it say about Amaabj being a "player"?

[Tinhampton]

Amaabj is a nation, not a player, under Rule 4.

Opposed - this should be a matter for the UAS, not for the WASC.

Where does it say about Amaabj being a "player"?

You keep referring to Amaabj as "he," which is Rule 4 non-compliant. Speaking as a player (and not an important person, which I'm not!), read the rules and perhaps the Compendium too to get more of a feel for them

[Cappedore]

Where does it say about Amaabj being a "player"?

You keep referring to Amaabj as "he," which is Rule 4 non-compliant. Speaking as a player (and not an important person, which I'm not!), read the rules and perhaps the Compendium too to get more of a feel for them

I see, thanks for pointing that out

[The Unified Missourtama States]

Not totally convinced that Amaabj should be condemned right now, but I think you can convince me with a better draft, here are some things to help:

The Security Council of the Word Assembly,

Acknowledging that the subject of this report is Amaabj,

weird opening, it is fine and legal but personally not a fan.

Observing the fact that Amaabj has since committed treasonous crimes against his former region:

this is a r4b violation, nations are not gendered. In general just use they. In my opinion and in standard grammatics you do not need the colon as a connector there.

the Union of Allied States.
• Amaabj has been conspiring against the Union of Allied States using threats referring to the raider region of The Black Hawks and other regions such as Antifa, trying to push false rumours that the UAS is fascist.
• Amaabj has been caught in multiple telegrams to the nation of Cappedore to overthrow the government of the Union of Allied States.

this is fine, but an extra explanation will make things better.

Knowing that Amaabj previously attempted to meddle in a UAS Senate Bill Election from his new region, the New World Order at the point where he was banned and ejected from the Union of Allied States.

Once again an r4b violation.

New World Order has a stable embassy with the Union of Allied States.

Rephrase this, it is clunky making it seem unconnected.

Understanding that Amaabj has been put on trial in the New World Order after the Union of Allied States informed their government of Amaabj’s treasonous activities in the UAS.

You need to clarify that UAS and Union of Allied States are the same.

Acknowledging that Amaabj had a plan to flee to the region known as The Hallowed Hideaway after his ejection from the Union of Allied States who soon denied him entry.

r4b violations.

Hereby CONDEMNS Amaabj.

Good operative clause, simple as it should be, However I would put a quick summary clause before this like "recognizing the damage done by their treasonous actions." No need to all-cap either.

[Bormiar]

In general just use they.

It*

The United States is a nation. ===> It is a nation. The problem with they is that you'd be condemning the nations entire population when most of the time it's only the top doing anything.

You need to clarify that UAS and Union of Allied States are the same.

Legally, I don't think so. It's not the nominee.

I understood it without the extra words tacked on in a parenthesis.

[Cappedore]

Not totally convinced that Amaabj should be condemned right now, but I think you can convince me with a better draft, here are some things to help:

The Security Council of the Word Assembly,

Acknowledging that the subject of this report is Amaabj,

weird opening, it is fine and legal but personally not a fan.

Observing the fact that Amaabj has since committed treasonous crimes against his former region:

this is a r4b violation, nations are not gendered. In general just use they. In my opinion and in standard grammatics you do not need the colon as a connector there.

the Union of Allied States.
• Amaabj has been conspiring against the Union of Allied States using threats referring to the raider region of The Black Hawks and other regions such as Antifa, trying to push false rumours that the UAS is fascist.
• Amaabj has been caught in multiple telegrams to the nation of Cappedore to overthrow the government of the Union of Allied States.

this is fine, but an extra explanation will make things better.

Knowing that Amaabj previously attempted to meddle in a UAS Senate Bill Election from his new region, the New World Order at the point where he was banned and ejected from the Union of Allied States.

Once again an r4b violation.

New World Order has a stable embassy with the Union of Allied States.

Rephrase this, it is clunky making it seem unconnected.

Understanding that Amaabj has been put on trial in the New World Order after the Union of Allied States informed their government of Amaabj’s treasonous activities in the UAS.

You need to clarify that UAS and Union of Allied States are the same.

Acknowledging that Amaabj had a plan to flee to the region known as The Hallowed Hideaway after his ejection from the Union of Allied States who soon denied him entry.

r4b violations.

Hereby CONDEMNS Amaabj.

Good operative clause, simple as it should be, However I would put a quick summary clause before this like "recognizing the damage done by their treasonous actions." No need to all-cap either.

Thanks for the feedback. The Third Draft should be out tomorrow.

[Cappedore]

The Security Council of the Word Assembly,


Conceding that the subject of this report is Amaabj,

Examining the fact that Amaabj has since committed treasonous crimes against its former region, the Union of Allied States.
• Amaabj has been conspiring against the Union of Allied States using threats referring to the raider region of The Black Hawks and other regions such as Antifa, trying to push false rumours that the UAS is fascist in an attempt to smear the region’s reputation.
• Amaabj has been caught in multiple telegrams to the nation of Cappedore making threats to overthrow the government of the Union of Allied States all which Cappedore then sent to governmental officials in the UAS.

Understanding that Amaabj previously attempted to meddle in a UAS Senate Bill Election from his new region, the New World Order, at the point where Amaabj was banned and ejected from the Union of Allied States. It is to be noted that the UAS has had stable embassies with the NWO for some time now.

Recognizing that Amaabj has been put on trial in the New World Order after the Union of Allied States informed their government of Amaabj’s treasonous activities in the UAS.

Acknowledging that Amaabj had a plan to flee to the region known as The Hallowed Hideaway after Amaabj’s ejection from the Union of Allied States. THH soon denied Amaabj entry into the region.

Hereby condemns Amaabj.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Sorry, but this just reads as an internal dispute and not worthy of a Condemnation. Why should the wider NS community care about the nominee enough to award an SC Condemnation?

[Cappedore]

This proposal is on hold until further notice.

[Amaabj]

This proposal is on hold until further notice.

Smart idea before I put evidence out that would turn them against you. either way I've found a new home, I'm not looking for a fight, good luck with your "Anti Deruu actions" for crying out loud can't you give the guy a break.