[PROPOSAL] Condemn Royaltonn

[Libertania123]

Salutations,
As of late within the United Kingdom we've had to resort to the expletives and the warmongering of Royaltonn.
In hopes of returning to the United Kingdom's erstwhile tranquility.
Please assist us in our noble quest in garnering 72 approvals and later with your ballot.
We would welcome your endorsement and assistance with approval of Condemn Royaltonn

Sincerely,
The United Kingdom Treaty Organisation

The Security Council,

Alarmed by the vitriolic diatribe of Royaltonn a nation situated in the United Kingdom, which has eventuated in a schism tearing the region apart from within;

Noting with regret that Royaltonn has repeatedly instigated conflict amongst nations of the region and infringed upon the territorial sovereignty of numerous nations in the United Kingdom;

Emphasizing that the bellicose conduct of Royaltonn since their accession to the United Kingdom has resulted in unwarranted acts of malice, most notably;

• Persistently, pummeling regional nations with Weapons of Mass Destruction and intensive usage of chemical warfare with no precautions enacted to mitigate fatalities of noncombatants;

• Intervention in the domestic affairs of states as well as actively aiding insurrectionist elements in their malfeasance;

• Recurrently, provoking regional conflict by laying claim for territory beyond their internationally recognized boundaries;

• Consistently, not heeding calls for ceasefire and armistice negotiations by regional nations despite all others obliging;

• Complete and utter disregard for the sanctity of civilian life, resulting in the indiscriminate bombardment and destruction of a multiplicity of beings and structures;

Deeply disturbed by the nation's disregard for World Assembly resolutions, notably those regarding the essence of humankind;

Affirming the United Kingdom’s commitment to longevity and continuity is on odds with such repugnance and inequity;

Convinced that such a truculent entity blemishes the benevolence and anglophilia of this region;

Calls upon the honorable delegates to consider the egregious ramifications concerning the dissemination of malevolence and rancor within this community as a whole;

Further reminds the noble emissaries that the renown and favorable standing of the United Kingdom are at stake;

Hereby Condemns Royaltonn.

[Honeydewistania]

You can’t reference RL events

[Gorundu]

I'll let you read the SC rules to figure out what's illegal in there.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

You can't alter your proposal once it has been submitted. You can withdraw it, re-work it and then re-submit the revised version.

However you have some illegalities in its current form - go and have a read of the rules.

Edit: would pay to alter the title of your OP to [DRAFT].

Further edit: As well as the illegalities your current draft lacks any real substance - you need to come up with a lot more to make a convincing case for Condemnation. Suggest you read previously passed Condemnations to get an idea of the detail required.

[Libertania123]

I very much appreciate the aforesaid suggestions.
Embellished in red are the added statements.
Prior to browsing this forum I did indeed peruse the SC rules as my prior resolution submission had been adjudged illicit on grounds of Rule 4D.

The Security Council,

Alarmed by the vitriolic diatribe of Royaltonn a nation situated in the United Kingdom, which has eventuated in a schism tearing the region apart from within;

Noting with regret that Royaltonn has repeatedly instigated conflict amongst nations of the region and infringed upon the territorial sovereignty of numerous nations in the United Kingdom;

Emphasizing that the bellicose conduct of Royaltonn since their accession to the United Kingdom has resulted in unwarranted acts of malice, most notably;

• Persistently, pummeling regional nations with Weapons of Mass Destruction and intensive usage of chemical warfare with no precautions enacted to mitigate fatalities of noncombatants;

• Intervention in the domestic affairs of states as well as actively aiding insurrectionist elements in their malfeasance;

• Recurrently, provoking regional conflict by laying claim for territory beyond their internationally recognized boundaries;

• Consistently, not heeding calls for ceasefire and armistice negotiations by regional nations despite all others obliging;

• Complete and utter disregard for the sanctity of civilian life, resulting in the indiscriminate bombardment and destruction of a multiplicity of beings and structures;

Observing that the renegade nature of Royaltonn has resulted in their pronouncing the current global pandemic as the "Chinese Virus" which is a contravention of NationState's decorum and constitutes racial profanity;

Deeply disturbed by the nation's disregard for World Assembly resolutions, notably those regarding the essence of humankind;

Affirming the United Kingdom’s commitment to longevity and continuity is on odds with such repugnance and inequity;

Convinced that such a truculent entity blemishes the benevolence and anglophilia of this region;

Calls upon the honorable delegates to consider the egregious ramifications concerning the dissemination of malevolence and rancor within this community as a whole;

Further reminds the noble emissaries that the renown and favorable standing of the United Kingdom are at stake;

Hereby Condemns Royaltonn.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Still illegal - real world reference

[Libertania123]

Thanks,
Just for clarification is this the troublesome element?

Observing that the renegade nature of Royaltonn has resulted in their pronouncing the current global pandemic as the "Chinese Virus" which is a contravention of NationState's decorum and constitutes racial profanity;

Or are the remarks regarding national boundaries and military conflict problematic as well?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Thanks,
Just for clarification is this the troublesome element?

Observing that the renegade nature of Royaltonn has resulted in their pronouncing the current global pandemic as the "Chinese Virus" which is a contravention of NationState's decorum and constitutes racial profanity;

Or are the remarks regarding national boundaries and military conflict problematic as well?

That’s the one.

[Libertania123]

If I understand you correctly the following would be legal as the only objectionable clause from a legal standpoint has been omitted

The Security Council,

Alarmed by the vitriolic diatribe of Royaltonn a nation situated in the United Kingdom, which has eventuated in a schism tearing the region apart from within;

Noting with regret that Royaltonn has repeatedly instigated conflict amongst nations of the region and infringed upon the territorial sovereignty of numerous nations in the United Kingdom;

Emphasizing that the bellicose conduct of Royaltonn since their accession to the United Kingdom has resulted in unwarranted acts of malice, most notably;

• Persistently, pummeling regional nations with Weapons of Mass Destruction and intensive usage of chemical warfare with no precautions enacted to mitigate fatalities of noncombatants;

• Intervention in the domestic affairs of states as well as actively aiding insurrectionist elements in their malfeasance;

• Recurrently, provoking regional conflict by laying claim for territory beyond their internationally recognized boundaries;

• Consistently, not heeding calls for ceasefire and armistice negotiations by regional nations despite all others obliging;

• Complete and utter disregard for the sanctity of civilian life, resulting in the indiscriminate bombardment and destruction of a multiplicity of beings and structures;

Deeply disturbed by the nation's disregard for World Assembly resolutions, notably those regarding the essence of humankind;

Affirming the United Kingdom’s commitment to longevity and continuity is on odds with such repugnance and inequity;

Convinced that such a truculent entity blemishes the benevolence and anglophilia of this region;

Calls upon the honorable delegates to consider the egregious ramifications concerning the dissemination of malevolence and rancor within this community as a whole;

Further reminds the noble emissaries that the renown and favorable standing of the United Kingdom are at stake;

Hereby Condemns Royaltonn.

[South Reinkalistan]

Might want to update the original post as well with the current draft.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

A word of advice - writing a C&C is a marathon, not a sprint. This forum is littered with the corpses of hastily written and submitted proposals, which died a death not even making quorum.

I suspect yours will be joining the body count.

[Libertania123]

No worries, thanks for the advice.
Fortunately this is my first resolution I'll adjust over time.

[Praeceps]

Do you have links to the nation's roleplay?

[Farnhamia]

No worries, thanks for the advice.
Fortunately this is my first resolution I'll adjust over time.

You might want to refrain from spamming up the other forums with threads campaigning for your proposal.

[Libertania123]

Do you have links to the nation's roleplay?

Thanks for your interest.
I'll post a selection of screenshots when our proposal reaches a quorum.

[Wallenburg]

Do you have links to the nation's roleplay?

Thanks for your interest.
I'll post a selection of screenshots when our proposal reaches a quorum.

I think many of us would rather you do so now, to see whether this is worth approving in the first place. If the target nominee is just godmodding or otherwise RPing poorly, that's not a matter for the World Assembly.