[DRAFT] Commend Raxulan Empire

[Munkcestrian Republic]

The Security Council,

APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire for its mission of bringing civilisation and the word of Rost Dreadnorramus to all, which has seen significant success so far,

ALSO APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's attempts at diplomacy, which has seen it construct embassies with more than seventy regions,

RECOGNISING similar efforts by the predecessors of the Raxulan Empire,

ADDITIONALLY APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's clear law code,

Hereby Commends the Raxulan Empire.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

The Security Council,

APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire for its mission of bringing civilisation and the word of Rost Dreadnorramus to all, which has seen significant success so far,

Its usual to provide a link to the region or nation under consideration. Please give examples of the successes seen.

ALSO APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's attempts at diplomacy, which has seen it construct embassies with more than seventy regions,

Constructing embassies in not particularly Commendable and if it was seventy is pretty small beer. There are numerous regions with way more than seventy embassies.

RECOGNISING similar efforts by the predecessors of the Raxulan Empire,

Again examples please.

ADDITIONALLY APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's clear law code,

Hereby Commends the Raxulan Empire.

Well it's certainly clear if completely authoritarian.

You get points for drafting on the forum and producing a legal proposal. Otherwise there's barely a skeleton onto which to hang some meat. You are going to have to come up with a lot more detail than you have if you are serious about progressing this.

[BlackLight Covenant]

In addition to what was said above, you're trying to commend a region that has bears both the tags "Invader" and "Imperialist", which might make it rather hard to convince the SC of voting in favour of such a commendation unless you can present a fair number of notable contributions made by the target region towards NS as a whole.

So far, however, none of the things you have mentioned truly stand out. Having a large number of embassies, attempting good diplomacy, and having a clear code of law are all elements that are most definitely not unique to the Raxulan Empire. As for the civilization thing, I wouldn't even attempt to use that one, as it will most likely be written off as a way of glorifying the practice of raiding.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

In addition to what was said above, you're trying to commend a region that has bears both the tags "Invader" and "Imperialist", which might make it rather hard to convince the SC of voting in favour of such a commendation unless you can present a fair number of notable contributions made by the target region towards NS as a whole.

So far, however, none of the things you have mentioned truly stand out. Having a large number of embassies, attempting good diplomacy, and having a clear code of law are all elements that are most definitely not unique to the Raxulan Empire. As for the civilization thing, I wouldn't even attempt to use that one, as it will most likely be written off as a way of glorifying the practice of raiding.

We have participated in a few wars that were started in order to.end corruption in a few regions such as Warzone Europe, and the Empire of Carson.

And we attempted to use diplomacy to end a war between salutations and the gordo alliance of got beef.

We have also campaigned against the plague of inactivity whether it was through helping foreign governments or taking over inactive regions in order to grow them and make them more active.

[Great Algerstonia]

In addition to what was said above, you're trying to commend a region that has bears both the tags "Invader" and "Imperialist", which might make it rather hard to convince the SC of voting in favour of such a commendation unless you can present a fair number of notable contributions made by the target region towards NS as a whole.

So far, however, none of the things you have mentioned truly stand out. Having a large number of embassies, attempting good diplomacy, and having a clear code of law are all elements that are most definitely not unique to the Raxulan Empire. As for the civilization thing, I wouldn't even attempt to use that one, as it will most likely be written off as a way of glorifying the practice of raiding.

We have participated in a few wars that were started in order to.end corruption in a few regions such as Warzone Europe, and the Empire of Carson.

And we attempted to use diplomacy to end a war between salutations and the gordo alliance of got beef.

We have also campaigned against the plague of inactivity whether it was through helping foreign governments or taking over inactive regions in order to grow them and make them more active.

I ain't voting for a commendation on a raider region.

[BlackLight Covenant]

In addition to what was said above, you're trying to commend a region that has bears both the tags "Invader" and "Imperialist", which might make it rather hard to convince the SC of voting in favour of such a commendation unless you can present a fair number of notable contributions made by the target region towards NS as a whole.

So far, however, none of the things you have mentioned truly stand out. Having a large number of embassies, attempting good diplomacy, and having a clear code of law are all elements that are most definitely not unique to the Raxulan Empire. As for the civilization thing, I wouldn't even attempt to use that one, as it will most likely be written off as a way of glorifying the practice of raiding.

We have participated in a few wars that were started in order to.end corruption in a few regions such as Warzone Europe, and the Empire of Carson.

And we attempted to use diplomacy to end a war between salutations and the gordo alliance of got beef.

We have also campaigned against the plague of inactivity whether it was through helping foreign governments or taking over inactive regions in order to grow them and make them more active.

I do suppose I could see the first two being added to a commendation so as to provide some additional support to the idea of commending. Thing is that, judging by past commendations, it won't be enough to justify the SC handing out a regional badge.

As for that "combating inactivity" ordeal, I somehow suspect that the SC will view it as an attempt at justifying the raider side of the region, and will if anythong see it as a reason to condemn, not commend. The fact that, last time I checked, such acts of fighting against inactivity in other regions involves seizing regional control and slapping your own description onto the target region's WFE will not help the commendation case.

[Fauxia]

We love self commendations

[Pangurstan]

ALSO APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's attempts at diplomacy, which has seen it construct embassies with more than seventy regions,

It looks of those embassies are with regions that they raided, so I don’t think that clause will go over well with the security council.

[Munkcestrian Republic]

We love self commendations

Better than commendations of people who censor things.

[Munkcestrian Republic]

bump

[Kuriko]

bump

Don't bump proposals unless they fall off the first page, it's considered spam.

[Kaboomlandia]

A self-commendation of a 33-nation region will not pass.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

A self-commendation of a 33-nation region will not pass.

What about a 34 region?

[Novae Romae]

The Security Council,

APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire for its mission of bringing civilisation and the word of Rost Dreadnorramus to all, which has seen significant success so far,

ALSO APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's attempts at diplomacy, which has seen it construct embassies with more than seventy regions,

RECOGNISING similar efforts by the predecessors of the Raxulan Empire,

ADDITIONALLY APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's clear law code,

Hereby Commends the Raxulan Empire.

If you do intend to carry on with this commendation, here are my suggestions.

As mentioned by others in this thread, cite more examples for your clauses. For example, expand on what you mean by "mission of bringing civilization and the word of Rost Dreadnorramus to all, which has seen significant success so far,". The part in bold is what specifically I think you should expand on, what success, what examples can you use for this?

Also, be more in depth with the diplomacy clause. Embassy regions which accept all embassies have more than 70 embassies, so perhaps explain why your 70 embassies mean something compared to the other regions.

Describe the predecessors, and also, give some examples from your law code to prove your point.

Overall, even though this is a self-commendation, if you just expand more on your clauses, you should be good to go and submit.

[Carstantinopipal]

We have participated in a few wars that were started in order to.end corruption in a few regions such as Warzone Europe, and the Empire of Carson.

And we attempted to use diplomacy to end a war between salutations and the gordo alliance of got beef.

We have also campaigned against the plague of inactivity whether it was through helping foreign governments or taking over inactive regions in order to grow them and make them more active.

It's The United Empires of Carson, and you have not engaged in any type of war with us nor have you ever attempted to engage in diplomacy with us.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

We have participated in a few wars that were started in order to.end corruption in a few regions such as Warzone Europe, and the Empire of Carson.

And we attempted to use diplomacy to end a war between salutations and the gordo alliance of got beef.

We have also campaigned against the plague of inactivity whether it was through helping foreign governments or taking over inactive regions in order to grow them and make them more active.

It's The United Empires of Carson, and you have not engaged in any type of war with us nor have you ever attempted to engage in diplomacy with us.

1 We did attenpt to make peace between Salutations and The Gordo Alliance of Got Beef.

2 We helped in the war between Union of Liberal Nations and The United Empires of Carson.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

It's The United Empires of Carson, and you have not engaged in any type of war with us nor have you ever attempted to engage in diplomacy with us.

1 We did attenpt to make peace between Salutations and The Gordo Alliance of Got Beef.

2 We helped in the war between Union of Liberal Nations and The United Empires of Carson.

We were friends of Salutations on account of their leader being a member of our Government, but then they back stabbed us and joined the Rebel Scum in the New Yellow Empire so we switched sides and even opened up an embassy with The Gordo Alliance of Got Beef.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

ALSO APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's attempts at diplomacy, which has seen it construct embassies with more than seventy regions,

It looks of those embassies are with regions that they raided, so I don’t think that clause will go over well with the security council.

The vast majority are with regions outside of our control.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

The Security Council,

APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire for its mission of bringing civilisation and the word of Rost Dreadnorramus to all, which has seen significant success so far,

ALSO APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's attempts at diplomacy, which has seen it construct embassies with more than seventy regions,

RECOGNISING similar efforts by the predecessors of the Raxulan Empire,

ADDITIONALLY APPLAUDING the Raxulan Empire's clear law code,

Hereby Commends the Raxulan Empire.

If you do intend to carry on with this commendation, here are my suggestions.

As mentioned by others in this thread, cite more examples for your clauses. For example, expand on what you mean by "mission of bringing civilization and the word of Rost Dreadnorramus to all, which has seen significant success so far,". The part in bold is what specifically I think you should expand on, what success, what examples can you use for this?

Also, be more in depth with the diplomacy clause. Embassy regions which accept all embassies have more than 70 embassies, so perhaps explain why your 70 embassies mean something compared to the other regions.

Describe the predecessors, and also, give some examples from your law code to prove your point.

Overall, even though this is a self-commendation, if you just expand more on your clauses, you should be good to go and submit.

I'm not sure about the word of Rost Dreadnorramus I have no idea what that implies.

We haven't had the best of success on account we lack an army, my life is always getting in the way, and the Fendas prevent our efforts of helping inactive regions.

About the diplomacy, it's mostly consisted of us helping our friends when ever they need it. For the most part the Empire has been mostly isolationist up until recently when it started opening up more embassies and that's about the extent of diplomatic relations on account we haven't attempted to create closer alliances or anything of that sort. Perhaps we will in the future.

Our law code is simple and straight forward, "I AM THE LAW!"

Other person: "Dictator?"

It's either that or anarchy since every attempt to create a less totalitarian Government dos'nt go any where.

Tbh I can't think of anything that the Empire has done that would be worth a commendation since it's mostly been an isolationist, back water, raider with very little success and 0 long term success with any of it's conquests.

Sides if anything I'm shooting for a condemnation since that's what all the cool regions like The Black Hawks, and Lone Wolves United have, and I'd prefer that the Empire do something big to earn it, and from someone out side of the Empire.

[Novae Romae]

If you do intend to carry on with this commendation, here are my suggestions.

As mentioned by others in this thread, cite more examples for your clauses. For example, expand on what you mean by "mission of bringing civilization and the word of Rost Dreadnorramus to all, which has seen significant success so far,". The part in bold is what specifically I think you should expand on, what success, what examples can you use for this?

Also, be more in depth with the diplomacy clause. Embassy regions which accept all embassies have more than 70 embassies, so perhaps explain why your 70 embassies mean something compared to the other regions.

Describe the predecessors, and also, give some examples from your law code to prove your point.

Overall, even though this is a self-commendation, if you just expand more on your clauses, you should be good to go and submit.

I'm not sure about the word of Rost Dreadnorramus I have no idea what that implies.

We haven't had the best of success on account we lack an army, my life is always getting in the way, and the Fendas prevent our efforts of helping inactive regions.

About the diplomacy, it's mostly consisted of us helping our friends when ever they need it. For the most part the Empire has been mostly isolationist up until recently when it started opening up more embassies and that's about the extent of diplomatic relations on account we haven't attempted to create closer alliances or anything of that sort. Perhaps we will in the future.

Our law code is simple and straight forward, "I AM THE LAW!"

Other person: "Dictator?"

It's either that or anarchy since every attempt to create a less totalitarian Government dos'nt go any where.

Tbh I can't think of anything that the Empire has done that would be worth a commendation since it's mostly been an isolationist, back water, raider with very little success and 0 long term success with any of it's conquests.

Sides if anything I'm shooting for a condemnation since that's what all the cool regions like The Black Hawks, and Lone Wolves United have, and I'd prefer that the Empire do something big to earn it, and from someone out side of the Empire.

I mean, I guess if you wanted a badge of some sort, you could Condemn yourself, but I'd shy away from any self-badging if I were you guys.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

I'm not sure about the word of Rost Dreadnorramus I have no idea what that implies.

We haven't had the best of success on account we lack an army, my life is always getting in the way, and the Fendas prevent our efforts of helping inactive regions.

About the diplomacy, it's mostly consisted of us helping our friends when ever they need it. For the most part the Empire has been mostly isolationist up until recently when it started opening up more embassies and that's about the extent of diplomatic relations on account we haven't attempted to create closer alliances or anything of that sort. Perhaps we will in the future.

Our law code is simple and straight forward, "I AM THE LAW!"

Other person: "Dictator?"

It's either that or anarchy since every attempt to create a less totalitarian Government dos'nt go any where.

Tbh I can't think of anything that the Empire has done that would be worth a commendation since it's mostly been an isolationist, back water, raider with very little success and 0 long term success with any of it's conquests.

Sides if anything I'm shooting for a condemnation since that's what all the cool regions like The Black Hawks, and Lone Wolves United have, and I'd prefer that the Empire do something big to earn it, and from someone out side of the Empire.

I mean, I guess if you wanted a badge of some sort, you could Condemn yourself, but I'd shy away from any self-badging if I were you guys.

Plus I want to earn it.

*begins plotting something really big/bad/shocking/and not very well liked by the corrupt institution that is only good for raiding the World Assembly.*

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Plus I want to earn it.

*begins plotting something really big/bad/shocking/and not very well liked by the corrupt institution that is only good for raiding the World Assembly.*

Get back to us in a couple of years when someone other than yourself or your region mates believes you have a solid history of doing stuff worthy of a Condemnation.

[Rost Dreadnorramus]

Plus I want to earn it.

*begins plotting something really big/bad/shocking/and not very well liked by the corrupt institution that is only good for raiding the World Assembly.*

Get back to us in a couple of years when someone other than yourself or your region mates believes you have a solid history of doing stuff worthy of a Condemnation.

K.

[Munkcestrian Republic]

Plus I want to earn it.

*begins plotting something really big/bad/shocking/and not very well liked by the corrupt institution that is only good for raiding the World Assembly.*

Get back to us in a couple of years when someone other than yourself or your region mates believes you have a solid history of doing stuff worthy of a Condemnation.

I am in a different region now.

[WayNeacTia]

Get back to us in a couple of years when someone other than yourself or your region mates believes you have a solid history of doing stuff worthy of a Condemnation.

I am in a different region now.

Still doesn't make this any less of a selfie.