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[Discarded] Commend Geo Corans

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Voltar Cannis
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[Discarded] Commend Geo Corans

Postby Voltar Cannis » Fri Aug 09, 2019 4:53 pm

In the Security Council,

Noting Geo Corans was in many regional positions in Voltarium including Minister of Foreign Affairs, Minister of Internal Affairs, and Head Senator of the Tribunal of Voltarium.
Congratulating Geo Corans’s work as Minister of Foreign Affairs, including saving embassies and continuing work to begin working closer with other regions.
Commending Geo Corans’s work as Head Senator, passing five constitutional amendments and the landmark “Regional Arms Restrictions Act” which was passed by the Tribunal in July.
Applauding that Geo Corans further boosted regional workings, such as, beginning the legislative branch of Voltarium which was formed as the Tribunal, and expanding citizen involvement in the Regional Government, including referendums.

Hereby Commends Geo Corans.
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Postby Kuriko » Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:05 pm

Hello, and welcome to the SC! First off, not a bad start but you should add spaces in between your clauses. Secondly, you should probably start your proposal with "The Security Council" instead of "In the Security Council" as I'm not sure if your current way is legal or not. Proposals are supposed to be written from the view of the SC, not to the SC.

This proposal as it is is pretty bare-bones, without much accomplishments to it. Furthermore, the nation in question is only about 8 or 9 months old. They probably have a long NS career ahead of them and aren't ready for a C&C yet.
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Postby Voltar Cannis » Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:06 pm

Kuriko wrote:Hello, and welcome to the SC! First off, not a bad start but you should add spaces in between your clauses. Secondly, you should probably start your proposal with "The Security Council" instead of "In the Security Council" as I'm not sure if your current way is legal or not. Proposals are supposed to be written from the view of the SC, not to the SC.

This proposal as it is is pretty bare-bones, without much accomplishments to it. Furthermore, the nation in question is only about 8 or 9 months old. They probably have a long NS career ahead of them and aren't ready for a C&C yet.
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Postby Frisbeeteria » Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:07 pm

Just not seeing the value of commending a nation for their actions on a now-dead region. There's one nation there, and they're a recent arrival. Geo Corans is long gone from there.
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Postby Voltar Cannis » Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:11 pm

Frisbeeteria wrote:Just not seeing the value of commending a nation for their actions on a now-dead region. There's one nation there, and they're a recent arrival. Geo Corans is long gone from there.

The region used to be vibrant, but it was shut down, founder kicked everyone. They still made accomplishments and they should not be forgotten.
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Postby Kaboomlandia » Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:17 pm

A nation's not-very-unique accomplishments in a single backwater region are not worthy of commendation.

Voltar Cannis wrote:
Frisbeeteria wrote:Just not seeing the value of commending a nation for their actions on a now-dead region. There's one nation there, and they're a recent arrival. Geo Corans is long gone from there.

The region used to be vibrant, but it was shut down, founder kicked everyone. They still made accomplishments and they should not be forgotten.

Voltarium topped out at 72 nations. I'm not seeing why this region should be recognized over other regions as unique.
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Postby Ransium » Fri Aug 09, 2019 5:23 pm

The “commending” clause is a rule 3 violation as it commends actions.
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Postby Eumaeus » Fri Aug 09, 2019 6:40 pm

Is this a selfie?
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Postby Kuriko » Fri Aug 09, 2019 7:06 pm

Eumaeus wrote:Is this a selfie?

O.o it certainly looks like it now.
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Postby Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Aug 10, 2019 5:05 am

Kuriko wrote:
Eumaeus wrote:Is this a selfie?

O.o it certainly looks like it now.

Not the OP’s first rodeo. He’s submitted a number of proposals concerning the same region and members of it.

They’ve all been rubbish and/or illegal. These are the ones where there is a record in the forum, others went straight to the queue and were promptly marked as illegal.

viewtopic.php?f=24&t=465017&p=35729693&sid=97d10571a2318970f8ed5d4d1e25fb9f#p35729693

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