DRAFT repeal liberate kaiserreich

[Blueflarst]

The Security Council,

Noting the fact Kaiserreich is a monarchist region and forbids the use of nazi propaganda.
Abhorred by the interested groups in condemning Kaiserreich qualifying them as nazi to prevent the monarchist regions to be popular.
Appalled by the lies of hate speeech and the forgeries ''democratic nations'' have done againist this decent region.
Believing the Kaiserreich a fully monarchist region deserves the right to be protected.
Acknowledging the Kaiserreich has made several efforts to clean their region from nazi nations.
Deeply disturbed by the damages to the image of the Kaiserreich and the monarchism this resolution has done.
Noting the plots againist Kaiserreich and other monarchist regions must stop.

The Security Council hereby repeals the Kaiserreich liberation.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

At the moment I would say you are in violation of Rule 3. You have not specifically said which resolution you are attempting to repeal.

Just saying “repeals the Kaiserreich liberation” is not good enough. What if two liberations had been imposed? How would we know which one was targetted?

Should read “Hereby repeals SC Resolution #... Liberate Kaiserreich”. Be sure to provide a link to the resolution.

Edit: may be a pointless attempt anyway if this is true:

viewtopic.php?f=12&t=465354

[Lord Dominator]

Been tried before, rather definitively failed.

Against

[Blueflarst]

The Security Council,

Noting the fact Kaiserreich is a monarchist region and forbids the use of nazi propaganda.
Abhorred by the interested groups in condemning Kaiserreich qualifying them as nazi to prevent the monarchist regions to be popular.
Appalled by the lies of hate speeech and the forgeries ''democratic nations'' have done againist this decent region.
Believing the Kaiserreich as a fully monarchist region deserves the right to be protected by this council.
Acknowledging the Kaiserreich has made several efforts to clean their region from nazi nations and racist stuff.
Deeply disturbed by the damages to the image of the Kaiserreich and the monarchism this resolution has done.
Noting the plots againist Kaiserreich and other monarchist regions must stop.
Alarmed by the recent conspiracies of liberal democrat regions to sink and destroy the popularity of other ideologies in their own profit.
Deeply disturbed for the desprestige campaigns againist Kaiserreich with dark purposes.
Affirming Kaiserreich is now reformed and the few fascist nations inside have been purged.


Security Council Resolution #245 “Liberate KAISERREICH” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Overall this a poorly written draft. While some attempt has been made to address the contents of SC #245, most of it is some weird rant.

As LD said attempts have been made before and failed - I suspect yours will do the same.

[Eumaeus]

The Security Council,

Noting the fact Kaiserreich is a monarchist region and forbids the use of Nazi propaganda.

Nazi should be capitalized.

Abhorred by the interested groups in condemning Kaiserreich, qualifying them as Nazi to prevent the monarchist regions from being popular popular.

Some slight edits. As was discussed in the thread on Condemn LKE, there is no evidence of any sort of bias against monarchist regions in the WA.

Appalled by the lies of hate speech and the forgeries ''democratic nations'' have done against this decent region.

I corrected two typos. "Forgeries" is an awkward word choice.

Believing that, as a fully monarchist region, the Kaiserreich deserves the right to be protected by this council.

Slight rephrasing.

Acknowledging the Kaiserreich has made several efforts to clean their region of Nazi nations and racist stuff.

I actually snorted out loud when I read "racist stuff". That definitely needs to be rephrased.

Deeply disturbed by the damages to the image of the Kaiserreich and the monarchism this resolution has done.
Noting the plots against Kaiserreich and other monarchist regions must stop.

Fixed a typo. I'm going to need better evidence that there is an anti-monarchist conspiracy going on, because up until yesterday I had never even heard a claim of it.

Alarmed by the recent conspiracies of liberal democrat regions to sink and destroy the popularity of other ideologies for their own profit.

I think "gains" is a better word choice than "profit". Profit implies economics, which aren't exactly at play here.

Deeply disturbed by the smear campaigns against Kaiserreich with dark purposes.

Based off of this and some of your other posts, I'm pretty sure your first language is Spanish, which is I have tried holding my tongue on some grammar related criticisms that honestly I can't fault you for. I feel like you should know, though, that there is no English translation of the word "desprestige" that fits in here. I've provided the best way of phrasing what you are trying to say.

As I just said, I believe you are translating what you are trying to say into English, either through an online tool (explaining why there is an occassional Spanish word tossed in) or yourself as a second language, so the spelling, grammar, etc. can be forgiven if not overlooked. Frankly, however, this proposal is not well argued and lacks both evidence and specificity to back up its claims.

[Odinburgh]

Perhaps going into detail on your cleanup image efforts be useful. As you may know or may not kaiserreich was included in talks between The Wolf Clan and OSN which a armistice was agreed to. Less than a week The Wolf Clan violated it attacking a OSN held territory. I learned a lot about the kaiserreich and was told they have been working on this as fascism is forbidden by my understanding. That be said I do believe in redemption if efforts are ongoing and progressing well. It seems a lot of that goes around on misconceptions about nations and regions.

[Indo-Malaysia]

At the moment I would say you are in violation of Rule 3. You have not specifically said which resolution you are attempting to repeal.

Just saying “repeals the Kaiserreich liberation” is not good enough. What if two liberations had been imposed? How would we know which one was targetted?

Should read “Hereby repeals SC Resolution #... Liberate Kaiserreich”. Be sure to provide a link to the resolution.

Edit: may be a pointless attempt anyway if this is true:

viewtopic.php?f=12&t=465354

That got called off because people refused to move.

[Forestavia]

Once it gets patched up, I would vote for it.

[Borovan entered the region as he]

Bonus points for miscapitilozation on title