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[draft] COMMEND VILITA

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[draft] COMMEND VILITA

Postby Indusse » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:14 am

Admiring the healthy competition, spirit, sportspersonship and interest
in nationstates community that can promote well-organized sporting event ,

Noting with approval vilita's vast sporting successes which includes four World Cup titles , two Atlantian Oceania Confederation of Association Football (AOCAF) Cups, being runners up in AOCAF for 6 times.

Observing the World Cup Committee (WCC) — a body of nations that manages and organizes the biggest and most prestigious international sporting events in NationStates:
• NationStates World Cup (WC),
• The Baptism of Fire (BOF)
• The Cup of Harmony(COH)

Celebrating the nominee for being a prominent WCC member — at the time of this writing — contested in the élections for electing the World Cup Committee president and vice president at time of WC 81 and won that WorldCup ,

Recognizing that vilita created the current all time world cup winning region and best sports region of nationstates " ATLANTIAN OCEANIA"(AO) and played a major role in the development of sports.

Bearing in mind that vilita hosted many prestigious sports events and also won with another account vilita & turori.

Understanding vilita`s interest in nationstates events and securing top 10 positions in Z-Days 7 , trading cards , nuclear option, bytecoin events.

Being, one of the oldest members of nationstates(2004) and a very active member of NS sports.

Hereby Commends Vilita.
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Postby Kostrorleauny » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:20 am

Aye there! :)

So this is a commendation proposal yes? Right, so... I would recommend adding a bit more substance in here. So far, I get the gist - Vilita seems to be an elder nation that’s taken a particular interest in NationStates sports. What you’re going to want to do in order to draft a successful commendation is then proceed to relate it back to how Vilita’s actions are admirable/commendable/etc.

Currently, I’m not really seeing this flow... unfortunately. If you’d like, I’d be happy to help should you wish to telegram me and we can work on certain clauses together? What you’ll be wanting to do here is to paint a clear, comprehensive, picture of why Vilita should be recognized by the World Assembly with commendation distinction for their actions. The clauses herein in your draft need to mirror that, I’d think.
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Postby Indusse » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:29 am

Kostrorleauny wrote:Aye there! :)

So this is a commendation proposal yes? Right, so... I would recommend adding a bit more substance in here. So far, I get the gist - Vilita seems to be an elder nation that’s taken a particular interest in NationStates sports. What you’re going to want to do in order to draft a successful commendation is then proceed to relate it back to how Vilita’s actions are admirable/commendable/etc.

Currently, I’m not really seeing this flow... unfortunately. If you’d like, I’d be happy to help should you wish to telegram me and we can work on certain clauses together? What you’ll be wanting to do here is to paint a clear, comprehensive, picture of why Vilita should be recognized by the World Assembly with commendation distinction for their actions. The clauses herein in your draft need to mirror that, I’d think.

so can u help me.
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Postby Kostrorleauny » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:30 am

Indusse wrote:
Kostrorleauny wrote:Aye there! :)

So this is a commendation proposal yes? Right, so... I would recommend adding a bit more substance in here. So far, I get the gist - Vilita seems to be an elder nation that’s taken a particular interest in NationStates sports. What you’re going to want to do in order to draft a successful commendation is then proceed to relate it back to how Vilita’s actions are admirable/commendable/etc.

Currently, I’m not really seeing this flow... unfortunately. If you’d like, I’d be happy to help should you wish to telegram me and we can work on certain clauses together? What you’ll be wanting to do here is to paint a clear, comprehensive, picture of why Vilita should be recognized by the World Assembly with commendation distinction for their actions. The clauses herein in your draft need to mirror that, I’d think.

so can u help me.

Telegrammed.

Will post suggestions if any here for others to comment on.
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Postby USS Monitor » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:31 am

Vilita is a pretty cool guy. He doesn't afraid of anything. But you should clean up your grammar and clear up the stuff like "another account" that refer to the game rather than being IC.

Probably would be best to redo this as "Commend Vilita and Turori" so that it is easier to include different parts of his creations without talking about a player controlling multiple accounts. If it's "Commend Vilita" then it becomes awkward to explain why you're talking about stuff Turori did.
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Postby Indusse » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:34 am

USS Monitor wrote:Vilita is a pretty cool guy. He doesn't afraid of anything. But you should clean up your grammar and clear up the stuff like "another account" that refer to the game rather than being IC.

Probably would be best to redo this as "Commend Vilita and Turori" so that it is easier to include different parts of his creations without talking about a player controlling multiple accounts. If it's "Commend Vilita" then it becomes awkward to explain why you're talking about stuff Turori did.

I Will remove turori
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Postby Kostrorleauny » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:35 am

USS Monitor wrote:Vilita is a pretty cool guy. He doesn't afraid of anything. But you should clean up your grammar and clear up the stuff like "another account" that refer to the game rather than being IC.

Probably would be best to redo this as "Commend Vilita and Turori" so that it is easier to include different parts of his creations without talking about a player controlling multiple accounts. If it's "Commend Vilita" then it becomes awkward to explain why you're talking about stuff Turori did.

Couldn’t have said it better myself, yes. This. ^^^

Will go over things such as this with them over telegram, since they wished for me to assist.
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Postby USS Monitor » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:35 am

Indusse wrote:
USS Monitor wrote:Vilita is a pretty cool guy. He doesn't afraid of anything. But you should clean up your grammar and clear up the stuff like "another account" that refer to the game rather than being IC.

Probably would be best to redo this as "Commend Vilita and Turori" so that it is easier to include different parts of his creations without talking about a player controlling multiple accounts. If it's "Commend Vilita" then it becomes awkward to explain why you're talking about stuff Turori did.

I Will remove turori


That's not what I was suggesting, though...
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Postby Indusse » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:37 am

you are a moderator so can u look @ comlend kuriko draft too.
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Postby USS Monitor » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:41 am

Indusse wrote:you are a moderator so can u look @ comlend kuriko draft too.


SC is not my specialty as a mod. I am posting in this thread because I know Vilita.
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Postby Indusse » Wed Jan 02, 2019 12:45 am

ok thanx
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Postby Vangaziland » Wed Jan 02, 2019 1:02 am

It needs a few more details, but it's a nice idea. You also accidentally called AO the best sports region. :lol:

But details such as how long AO has been active, for example.
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Postby Indusse » Wed Jan 02, 2019 2:03 am

Vangaziland wrote:It needs a few more details, but it's a nice idea. You also accidentally called AO the best sports region. :lol:

But details such as how long AO has been active, for example.

oops but its the biggest sports region
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Postby Tinhampton » Wed Jan 02, 2019 7:16 am

Rule 2a. Compare with SC#40 "Commend Starblaydia".

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Postby Falcania » Wed Jan 02, 2019 10:21 am

Vangaziland wrote:It needs a few more details, but it's a nice idea. You also accidentally called AO the best sports region. :lol:

But details such as how long AO has been active, for example.


Okay, but let's face facts here, AO absolutely is the best sports region ;)

As the WA delegate of AO I should probably keep an eye on this. I appreciate the sentiment but there's some shaping up to do.
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Postby Indusse » Wed Jan 02, 2019 5:58 pm

Tinhampton wrote:Rule 2a. Compare with SC#40 "Commend Starblaydia".

Ill change that
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Postby Lamoni » Wed Jan 02, 2019 7:50 pm

As a former AO member myself, I would highly suggest that you ask Vilitia and other AO members for more information to include in your commendation of Vilita. At a minimum, this draft would need more commend-worthy acts included in it, as well as better formatting.
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oh hey I remember Lamoni, long time no war
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Postby Kakastania » Mon Jan 07, 2019 1:08 pm

Vilita should be capitalized. Am I right?

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Postby Tinhampton » Mon Jan 07, 2019 1:55 pm

Kakastania wrote:Vilita should be capitalized. Am I right?

No. That is Indusse's house style for SC proposal thread titles.

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Postby Vangaziland » Tue Jan 08, 2019 5:09 pm

Maybe I should write it. If I can use my writing skill to ride Vilita to a profile badge, then I'll support him.

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Postby Indusse » Tue Jan 08, 2019 6:28 pm

Anyone can help me
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Postby Borovan3 » Tue Jan 08, 2019 6:47 pm

Indusse wrote:Anyone can help me

Ask people who know or role played with him. It's not a sprint. You haven't really edit until you come back later next night and know something to fix.

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Postby Vangaziland » Tue Jan 08, 2019 7:13 pm

Indusse wrote:Anyone can help me


I want to help by writing it for you and taking the credit.

Just kidding. I don't have anywhere near enough time.
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