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[Draft] Repeal "Commend Solorni"

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[Draft] Repeal "Commend Solorni"

Postby La Navasse » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:21 am

In light of the recent revelations of corrupt & self-serving actions done by Solorni, I have created this proposal. Please note that this draft has undergone multiple revisions in the past few hours, so feedback may not align with the current draft. Please suggest anything you believe should be added to this Repeal to ensure that it is as accurate and precise as possible.


Repeal "Commend Solorni"
Category: Repeal | Resolution: SC#252 | Proposed by: La Navasse


The Security Council,

Understanding of Solorni’s prior achievements, including the establishment and stabilization of Balder, service as both WA Delegate and Queen of Balder, and service as both President and Cabinet member in Europeia;

Startled by revelations of atrocious crimes conducted by Solorni to gain support for their own causes, which included manipulation and deceit of multiple vulnerable nations in both Balder and Europeia;

Believing that Solorni’s manipulative and duplicity of these vulnerable nations in an effort to gain power in both regions negates service done as President and Cabinet member;

Noting that Solorni has also lost the positions of WA Delegate and Queen of Balder due to these atrocious crimes that were conducted;

Disappointed in Balder's termination of their treaties with Osiris and the Pacific that occurred during Solorni's reign, and current widespread bans of Solorni from influential regions, making previous diplomatic work conducted by the nation inapplicable;

Aghast at this deeply ingrained & widespread corruption scandal conducted by Solorni at other's expense for various attempts at power;

Believing that Solorni’s contributions to the historic region Empires of Earth, although beneficial and concurring stability, do not warrant a Commendation by themselves;

Hereby Repeals SC Resolution 252 “Commend Solorni.”


Repeal "Commend Solorni"
Proposed By: La Navasse


The Security Council,

Understanding of Solorni’s prior achievements, including the establishment and stabilization of Balder, her service as both WA Delegate and Queen of Balder, and service as both President and Cabinet member in Europeia;

Startled by revelations of emotional manipulation and deceit of Europeian individuals conducted by Solorni for her own personal gain;

Believing that Solorni’s manipulative and duplicity to Europeian individuals negates her service done as President and Cabinet member;

Noting that Solorni has also lost the positions of WA Delegate and Queen of Balder as a consequence of her actions to Europeian individuals;

Believing that Solorni’s contributions to the historic region Empires of Earth, although beneficial and concurring stability, do not warrant a Commendation by themselves;

Hereby Repeals SC Resolution #252 “Commend Solorni.”
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Postby Kranostav » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:26 am

This seems awfully close to justifying for OOC reasons, and besides that lacks literally any context. So while I'm not going to sit here and defend what has happened. I'd like to see a better draft.

Oh, also, for the love of God Flem can we calm down with the bolding of text?
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Postby La Navasse » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:28 am

Kranostav wrote:This seems awfully close to justifying for OOC reasons, and besides that lacks literally any context. So while I'm not going to sit here and defend what has happened. I'd like to see a better draft.

Oh, also, for the love of God Flem can we calm down with the bolding of text?
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I admit that this draft is mostly a skeleton of what the completed product will be; I'm currently sifting through what Solorni has done since her Commend to add more flesh to the draft.

Sure; are italics better? They were used in the original "Commend Solorni" resolution.
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Postby Sil Dorsett » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:32 am

OOC: I doubt you'll find much in-character content to justify a repeal. Bottom line is you're badge hunting. You're taking advantage of an out-of-character incident that presented you with the only opportunity to consider this.

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Postby Kranostav » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:32 am

La Navasse wrote:
Kranostav wrote:This seems awfully close to justifying for OOC reasons, and besides that lacks literally any context. So while I'm not going to sit here and defend what has happened. I'd like to see a better draft.

I admit that this draft is mostly a skeleton of what the completed product will be; I'm currently sifting through what Solorni has done since her Commend to add more flesh to the draft.

If you are going to stick to ambiguity in regards to what has happened. I think the best way would be to consult some of those who have worked closely with them. Personally I have literally nothing againdt Rach IC, so I'd like some aspect of 'convincing' for the sake of this proposal.

I understand this isn't an easy subject to address so I wish you the best in your research.
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Postby La Navasse » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:34 am

Kranostav wrote:
La Navasse wrote:I admit that this draft is mostly a skeleton of what the completed product will be; I'm currently sifting through what Solorni has done since her Commend to add more flesh to the draft.

If you are going to stick to ambiguity in regards to what has happened. I think the best way would be to consult some of those who have worked closely with them. Personally I have literally nothing againdt Rach IC, so I'd like some aspect of 'convincing' for the sake of this proposal.

I understand this isn't an easy subject to address so I wish you the best in your research.

Thank you. I'm currently sifting through the Balder forum thread, as well as any other forum threads and Gameplay events Solorni was active in, to create a more coherent and solid proposal.
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Postby North Soviet EastAsia » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:36 am

No, La Navasse. You're a badge-hunter. Don't you have four already? You're a roublemaker and I'm not sure why people tolerate you anymore

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Postby Kranostav » Mon Dec 24, 2018 12:37 am

In regards to the formatting

I've never been a huge fan of needless bolding or italicizing at the beginning of clauses/sections. It just seems to add flair for no apparent reason.
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Postby Wrapper » Mon Dec 24, 2018 4:44 am

Wow, so much R4(b), I stopped reading halfway through.

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Postby The Notorious Mad Jack » Mon Dec 24, 2018 4:52 am

This is a crass badge hunt. C'mon dude.
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Postby Drop Your Pants » Mon Dec 24, 2018 5:18 am

You've had 4 passed resolutions plus a lot more drafts and you still produce this? :blink:
La Navasse wrote:Understanding of Solorni’s prior achievements, including the establishment and stabilization of Balder, her service as both WA Delegate and Queen of Balder, and service as both President and Cabinet member in Europeia;

Startled by revelations of emotional manipulation and deceit of Europeian individuals conducted by Solorni for her own personal gain;

Believing that Solorni’s manipulative and duplicity to Europeian individuals negates her service done as President and Cabinet member;

Noting that Solorni has also lost the positions of WA Delegate and Queen of Balder as a consequence of her actions to Europeian individuals;

I'm not sure about the individuals either. Maybe change it to 'individual Europeian nations'.
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Postby Fecaw » Mon Dec 24, 2018 8:17 am

OOC: This is a badge hunt that is taking advantage of some completely RL problems that should just be left alone.

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Postby Kaboomlandia » Mon Dec 24, 2018 9:46 am

Fecaw wrote:OOC: This is a badge hunt that is taking advantage of some completely RL problems that should just be left alone.

Someone who should in all rights be DOS for what they pulled doesn’t deserve a commendation badge.

Syl did write a better draft, though.
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Postby Fecaw » Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:01 am

Kaboomlandia wrote:
Fecaw wrote:OOC: This is a badge hunt that is taking advantage of some completely RL problems that should just be left alone.

Someone who should in all rights be DOS for what they pulled doesn’t deserve a commendation badge.

Syl did write a better draft, though.

I would support Yokiria's draft. I was criticizing badge hunting, but especially when it relates to this sort of thing.
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Postby La Navasse » Mon Dec 24, 2018 10:55 am

Drop Your Pants wrote:You've had 4 passed resolutions plus a lot more drafts and you still produce this? :blink:
La Navasse wrote:Understanding of Solorni’s prior achievements, including the establishment and stabilization of Balder, her service as both WA Delegate and Queen of Balder, and service as both President and Cabinet member in Europeia;

Startled by revelations of emotional manipulation and deceit of Europeian individuals conducted by Solorni for her own personal gain;

Believing that Solorni’s manipulative and duplicity to Europeian individuals negates her service done as President and Cabinet member;

Noting that Solorni has also lost the positions of WA Delegate and Queen of Balder as a consequence of her actions to Europeian individuals;

I'm not sure about the individuals either. Maybe change it to 'individual Europeian nations'.

Corrected the mistakes. I wrote this up somewhat quickly early in the morning, so I wasn't paying the best attention to the rules... :oops:

Fecaw wrote:
Kaboomlandia wrote:Someone who should in all rights be DOS for what they pulled doesn’t deserve a commendation badge.

Syl did write a better draft, though.

I would support Yokiria's draft. I was criticizing badge hunting, but especially when it relates to this sort of thing.

The draft as a whole has been reevaluated and edited for greater quality.
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