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Lord Dominator
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Postby Lord Dominator » Sat Dec 29, 2018 11:54 am

Some edits made to remove the userites
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Aclion
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Postby Aclion » Sat Dec 29, 2018 12:53 pm

Lord Dominator wrote:remove the userites

LD confirmed NPO subversive.
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Postby Armaros » Sat Dec 29, 2018 10:17 pm

"...liberated from from a particular brand of imaginary subversivea the NPO..."
this should probably be subversives instead of subversivea.

Otherwise, support.
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Postby Cormactopia Prime » Sat Dec 29, 2018 10:29 pm

Armaros wrote:"...liberated from from a particular brand of imaginary subversivea the NPO..."
this should probably be subversives instead of subversivea.

Otherwise, support.

You'll also want to correct the double "from."
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Lord Dominator
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Postby Lord Dominator » Sat Dec 29, 2018 10:50 pm

Think I fixed both, let me know if more grammar concerns arise
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Postby Armaros » Sat Dec 29, 2018 11:37 pm

Noting With Deep Concern


I know this might seem a bit petty, but it would read nicer if you would remove the caps here.

For the rest it looks good. Best of luck with this!
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Postby Ever-Wandering Souls » Mon Dec 31, 2018 12:26 am

"Acknowledging that said region presently uses the region of Communist Americas as a trophy region,"

is this legal language?
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Postby Wrapper » Mon Dec 31, 2018 12:47 am

Ever-Wandering Souls wrote:"Acknowledging that said region presently uses the region of Communist Americas as a trophy region,"

is this legal language?

Yes.

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Lord Dominator
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Corporate Police State

Postby Lord Dominator » Tue Jan 01, 2019 8:56 am

Nice to see the NPO do the work for us ;)
Obviously this draft will now be abandoned
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