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[Draft] Repeal Condemn Macedon

Postby Kuriko » Tue Nov 27, 2018 4:37 pm

This is just for later, if its decided to be necessary. I wasn't really sure how to write it, so I may need help refining it. Worded a little oddly imho.

The Security Council,

Understanding that Security Council Resolution #1: Condemn Macedon is considered a historical resolution;

Believing that even a historical resolution should provide details to why a region such as Macedon deserves international condemnation;

Not Disputing that the points in the targeted resolution are true, disputing however that garishly decorated World Factbook entries are a good reason for a condemnation to be levied;

Questioning what Macedonism is and why it is condemn worthy, as the resolution does not provide an explanation behind its tenets;

Noting that a replacement resolution passed by the Security Council, namely Security Council Resolution #XXX which is a more in-depth condemnation of Macedon;

Hereby Repeals Condemn Macedon.

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The Security Council,

Understanding that Security Council Resolution #1: Condemn Macedon is considered a historical resolution;

Believing that although it is considered a historical resolution it is too vague, without enough detail as to why Macedon deserves condemnation by the international community;

Not Disputing the fact that the points in the targeted resolution are true, however disputing the fact that garishly decorated World Factbook entries are a good reason for a condemnation to be levied on a region;

Questioning what Macedonism is and why it is condemn worthy, as Security Council Resolution #1: Condemn Macedon does not provide an explanation behind its tenets;

Noting that Security Council Resolution #1: Condemn Macedon has already had a replacement proposal passed by the Security Council, namely Security Council Resolution #XXX which is a more in-depth condemnation of Macedon;

Hereby Repeals Security Council Resolution #1: Condemn Macedon.


Edit 1: Whoops on tenets :p
Edit 2: Added draft 2 and a co-author
Last edited by Kuriko on Wed Nov 28, 2018 7:36 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Postby Wrapper » Tue Nov 27, 2018 4:41 pm

Behind its... tenants? Is it an apartment building? :p

Tenets.

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Postby Kuriko » Tue Nov 27, 2018 4:43 pm

Wrapper wrote:Behind its... tenants? Is it an apartment building? :p

Tenets.

Oooppss.... I'll blame my phone, but I don't know if I could get away with blaming it :p
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Postby Lord Dominator » Tue Nov 27, 2018 4:48 pm

I assume you wouldn't be opposed if I attempted to shorten/condense several of your clauses?

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Postby Kuriko » Tue Nov 27, 2018 4:56 pm

Lord Dominator wrote:I assume you wouldn't be opposed if I attempted to shorten/condense several of your clauses?

Nope, any help is appreciated. Maybe a co-authorships will be bestowed :p
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Postby Lord Dominator » Tue Nov 27, 2018 5:17 pm

Kuriko wrote:
Lord Dominator wrote:I assume you wouldn't be opposed if I attempted to shorten/condense several of your clauses?

Nope, any help is appreciated. Maybe a co-authorships will be bestowed :p

Ha! How could I pass up a potential offer like that? :p

The Security Council,

Understanding that Security Council Resolution #1: Condemn Macedon is considered a historical resolution;

Believing that even a historical resolution should provide details to why a region such as Macedon deserves international condemnation;
Removed the repetition about vagueness, generally re-worded/shortened

Not Disputing that the points in the targeted resolution are true, disputing however that garishly decorated World Factbook entries are a good reason for a condemnation to be levied;
Cut out some extraneous words. Perhaps a reference to the repeal of 'Condemn Canterlot' might be useful, precedent-wise

Questioning what Macedonism is and why it is condemn worthy, as the resolution does not provide an explanation behind its tenets;
Don't really think it needs to be linked everytime :p

Noting that a replacement resolution passed by the Security Council, namely Security Council Resolution #XXX which is a more in-depth condemnation of Macedon;
See previous point, also changed proposal to the more proper resolution, given the supposed passage.

Hereby Repeals Condemn Macedon.
Probably don't need the resolution and Council information.


Change/suggestion notes in the red, ignore my spacing :)
Last edited by Lord Dominator on Tue Nov 27, 2018 5:18 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Postby Kuriko » Wed Nov 28, 2018 7:37 am

Fixed up the draft and added a co-author :)
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Postby Lord Dominator » Wed Nov 28, 2018 12:03 pm

Kuriko wrote:Fixed up the draft and added a co-author :)

Thank you mon ami :p

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Postby Lord Dominator » Thu Nov 29, 2018 4:21 pm

Oddly, a repeal doesn't affect whether or not the resolutions existence, nor impact or historical value.

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Postby Armaros » Fri Nov 30, 2018 1:19 am

I'm inclined to vote against this, for it's historical value. Besides, even tho it's badly written, why would we replace it? It's not like Macedon is doing anything to deserve a better written one.
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Postby Lord Dominator » Fri Nov 30, 2018 7:54 am

Armaros wrote:I'm inclined to vote against this, for it's historical value. Besides, even tho it's badly written, why would we replace it? It's not like Macedon is doing anything to deserve a better written one.

Because having a better written one actually explains what they did and why they should have one?

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Postby Kuriko » Sat Dec 08, 2018 1:03 pm

As I said over discord, I hereby release this draft and its content to Praetor of The North Pacific. They may do with this draft as they will, which hopefully entails submitting it to the SC and putting it to vote :p
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Postby The Notorious Mad Jack » Sat Dec 08, 2018 1:13 pm

Kuriko wrote:As I said over discord, I hereby release this draft and its content to Praetor of The North Pacific. They may do with this draft as they will, which hopefully entails submitting it to the SC and putting it to vote :p

Why aren't you submitting it?
Totally not MadJack, though I hear he's incredibly smart and handsome.

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Postby Kuriko » Sat Dec 08, 2018 1:16 pm

The Notorious Mad Jack wrote:
Kuriko wrote:As I said over discord, I hereby release this draft and its content to Praetor of The North Pacific. They may do with this draft as they will, which hopefully entails submitting it to the SC and putting it to vote :p

Why aren't you submitting it?

There are some internal reasons within 10ki that are preventing it, so I gave it over to Praetor.
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