My Proposal=rejected

[Aussandries]

Dear Ransium, I know that we shouldn't correspond on WA business through telegram.
However, I am confused about your decision to illegalise my Commendation. I believe the aspect you contest on is incorrect.
The commendation is all for The Slide Countries, in part because of it's help in trying to stabilise YEET CLAN, wherein Yeet Clan itself is not in fact Commended. In part, it is similar to, say, commending America for its help in stabilising Korea in the Cold War.
Please reconsider my proposal, and my greatest respect to your commitment to NationStates.
Thank you for your time,
Aussandries

[Scottish Socialists]

Maybe read the reason?

52 minutes ago: Ransium: Illegal — R3 attempts to commend multiple targets in a single proposal

[Jebslund]

Dear Ransium, I know that we shouldn't correspond on WA business through telegram.
However, I am confused about your decision to illegalise my Commendation. I believe the aspect you contest on is incorrect.
The commendation is all for The Slide Countries, in part because of it's help in trying to stabilise YEET CLAN, wherein Yeet Clan itself is not in fact Commended. In part, it is similar to, say, commending America for its help in stabilising Korea in the Cold War.
Please reconsider my proposal, and my greatest respect to your commitment to NationStates.
Thank you for your time,
Aussandries

[OOC: This, mate, is why you draft before submitting.]

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

Hi your proposal was commending multiple targets remove the one commending the founder and stick to just the one region in one proposal

[Kuriko]

Yeet Clan isn't commended, and I doubt they ever will be so I don't know why you think they are. Also, none of the reasons stated in the proposal are commend worthy. Against.

Edit: Try drafting here first before submitting. Getting feedback is the best thing to do before submitting a proposal.

[Ransium]

COMMENDING the founder Aussandriesfor keeping the region alive for nearly a year, despite a severe brief drop in numbers.

Is this proposal commend Aussanderes (technically Aussanderesfor)? No? Then you can’t have a sentence saying you commend them.

[Aussandries]

COMMENDING the founder Aussandriesfor keeping the region alive for nearly a year, despite a severe brief drop in numbers.

Is this proposal commend Aussanderes (technically Aussanderesfor)? No? Then you can’t have a sentence saying you commend them.

Thank you, I missed that - ur one of the few useful comments. Cheers.
(Yeah if you read this anyone else who didn't have something constructive to say, Nuke me bruh)

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

Your welcome

[Jebslund]

Is this proposal commend Aussanderes (technically Aussanderesfor)? No? Then you can’t have a sentence saying you commend them.

Thank you, I missed that - ur one of the few useful comments. Cheers.
(Yeah if you read this anyone else who didn't have something constructive to say, Nuke me bruh)

[OOC: Pretty much everything else in the thread is constructive. If you want to avoid unpleasant post-submission surprises.

I'd recommend more lurking and less lip if you want to get anything passed around here. Every response here except the first one is useful advice for proposal writing. If you're going to be writing proposals, you need to learn to take criticism even when it isn't what you want to hear and accept that mods aren't the only ones who know what they're on about.]