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[DRAFT] Condemn Hell

Postby Marilyn Manson Freaks » Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:18 pm

O muse do sing to this great council now,
of Hellion bands and their immoral deeds,
which cry out for that vengeance from above,
that Violet wields in her ethereal pow'r,
Led by The Stalker, that great beast of old,
whose King does prowl around their land below
in search of souls to steal or slay, or beat
as they to men command full loyalty.
A cult of nationality they form'd
in Hell, a kingdom fallen from the height
of glory in their vain rebellion.
And yet this august council does commend,
the reign of that deceptive monster who,
after the death of Satan at the hands,
of Violet's angel in his holy might,
now holds in their cold palms that region where,
their angels had first fallen from--Heaven.
The reign of legions damn'd even extends,
quite far beyond ancient immortal realms.
The Beasts of Babylon do even prowl,
around the ghostly New York region streets,
made by their forces but a colony.
What's more, their viral zombies do release,
to plague the world each year in agony,
as if their ghastly nature weren't enough
to scare and torment all they come to see.
For with Violet they sought equality,
the Queen of all these realms of NationStates,
but this they were not able to obtain,
so now in the rotten remains they dwell,
of Hell's most horrid circle where they lay,
in penal fire as they plot revenge.
They govern their hellhole by seven sins,
with lustful publications they release,
the power-gluttons down below recruit,
as greedily they steal the the souls of those,
who by the lustrous allure of their King,
do come to Hell for "freedom" from above,
a freedom false against the natural law.

Yet once in Hell they bask around in Sloth,
with needless games to ease the pain they feel
from death eternal and their just demise,
at the hands of She who made this world,
these NationStates in love and harmony.
Their leaders in their pride shall not repent
for even when primordial love does call,
the fallen angels even now embrace,
the ignominious stamp upon their brows.
Instead they send their Army to lash out,
at bystanders to their unending fight,
a war in vain against the highest power.
Those beasts, they cannot win, therefore they now,
instead do find their solace in their wrath.
The Stalker and their inner circle then,
amongst themselves create inequities,
as if in Hell not all are damn'd the same.
The vast throng wait in Underworld without
the hope of entry unless they do pledge,
in contravention of all that is good,
their souls unto the altar of the beast.
O Muse, this Council now hath heard enough.
The sins of Hell stack up to heaven high,
and do call out for justice from above.
And now in Violet's name this Council doth,
by the pious power of its name,
Condemn, amen, condemn the region Hell.

Co-authored by John Milton
O muse do sing to this great council now,
of Hellion bands and their immoral deeds,
which cry out for that vengeance from above,
that [violet] wields in her ethereal pow'r,
Led by The Stalker, that great beast of old,
who prowls around their kingdom down below,
in search of souls to steal or slay, or beat
as he to men commands full loyalty.
A cult of personality they form'd
in Hell , a kingdom fallen from the height
of glory in their vain rebellion.
And yet this august council does commend,
the reign of that deceptive monster who,
after the death of Satan at the hands,
of [violet]'s angel in his holy might,
now holds in their cold hands that region where,
their angels had first fallen from--Heaven.
The reign of legions damn'd even extends,
quite far beyond ancient immortal realms.
The Beasts of Babylon do even prowl,
around the ghostly New York streets,
made by their forces but a colony.
What's more, their viral zombies do release,
to plague the world each year in agony,
as if their ghastly nature weren't enough
to scare and torment all they come to see.
For they sought equality with [violet],
the Queen of all these realms of NationStates,
but this they were not able to obtain,
so now they dwell in the rotten remains,
of Hell's most horrid circle where they lay,
in penal fire as they plot revenge.
They govern their hellhole by seven sins,
with lustful publications they release,
the pow'r-gluttons down below recruit,
as greedily they steal the the souls of those,
who by the lustrous allure of their King,
do come to Hell for "freedom" from above,
a freedom false against the natural law.

Yet once in Hell they bask around in Sloth,
with needless games to ease the pain they feel
from death eternal and their just demise,
at the hands of she who made this world,
these NationStates in love and harmony.
Their leaders in their pride shall not repent
for even when primordial love does call,
the fallen angels even now embrace,
the ignominious stamp on their brows.
Instead they send their Army to lash out,
at bystanders to their unending fight,
a war in vain against the highest power.
Those beasts, they cannot win, therefore they now,
instead do find their solace in their wrath.
The Stalker and his inner circle then,
amongst themselves create inequities,
as if in Hell not all are damn'd the same.
The vast throng wait in Underworld without
the hope of entry unless they do pledge,
in contravention of all that is good,
their souls unto the altar of the beast.
O Muse, this Council now hath heard enough.
The sins of Hell stack up to heaven high,
and do call out for justice from above.
And now in [violet]'s name this Council does,
by the pious power of its name,
Condemn, amen, condemn the region Hell.

Co-authored by John Milton
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Postby John Milton » Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:19 pm

John Milton here. Can confirm all of this.

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Postby United Massachusetts » Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:25 pm

Prussian Polish Commonwealth wrote:...
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For those who don't get the reference, this is written in blank verse, the same meter John Milton used when composing his Paradise Lost, arguably the greatest work of English literature ever.

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Postby John Milton » Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:43 pm

Marilyn Manson Freaks wrote:
O muse do sing to this great council now,
of Hellion bands and their immoral deeds,
which cry out for that vengeance from above,
that [violet] wields in her ethereal pow'r,
Led by The Stalker, that great beast of old,
who prowls around their kingdom down below,
in search of souls to steal or slay, or beat
as he to men commands full loyalty.
A cult of personality they form'd
in Hell , a kingdom fallen from the height
of glory in their vain rebellion insurgency.
And yet this august council does commend,
the reign of that deceptive monster who,
after the death of Satan at the hands,
of [violet]'s angel in his holy might,
now holds in their cold hands that region where,
their angels had first fallen from--Heaven.
The reign of legions damn'd even extends,
quite far beyond ancient immortal realms.
The Beasts of Babylon do even prowl,
around the ghostly New York streets of old,
made by their forces but a colony.
What's more, their viral zombies do release,
to plague the world each year in agony,
as if their ghastly nature weren't enough
to scare and torment all they come to see.
For they sought equality with [violet] for with [violet] they sought equality,
the Queen of all these realms of NationStates,
but this they were not able to obtain,
so now they dwell in the rotten remains,
of Hell's most horrid circle where they lay,
in penal fire as they plot revenge.
They govern theirTheir hellhole they govern by seven sins,
with lustful publications they release,
the pow'rpower-gluttons down below recruit,
as greedily they steal the the souls of those,
who by the lustrous allure of their King,
do come to Hell for "freedom" from above,
a freedom false against the natural law.

Yet once in Hell they bask around in Sloth,
with needless games to ease the pain they feel
from death eternal and their just demise,
at the hands of she who made this here world,
these NationStates in love and harmony.
Their leaders in their pride shall not repent
for even when primordial love does call,
the fallen angels even now embrace,
the ignominious stamp on their brows.
Instead they send their Army to lash out,
at bystanders to their unending fight,
a war in vain against the highest power pow'r.
Those beasts, they cannot win, therefore they now,
instead do find their solace in their wrath.
The Stalker and his their inner circle then,
amongst themselves create inequities,
as if in Hell not all are damn'd the same.
The vast throng wait in Underworld without
the hope of entry unless they do pledge,
in contravention of all that is good,
their souls unto the altar of the beast.
O Muse, this Council now hath heard enough.
The sins of Hell stack up to heaven high,
and do call out for justice from above.
And now in [violet]'s name this Council does,
by the pious power of its name,
Condemn, amen, condemn the region Hell.

Co-authored by John Milton

A few minor edits.
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Postby Kuriko » Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:56 pm

No way in Hell.... Get it?? Anyways, no support even though its well written. Hell is way more commendable than condemnable.
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Postby John Milton » Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:58 pm

Kuriko wrote:No way in Hell.... Get it?? Anyways, no support even though its well written. Hell is way more commendable than condemnable.

It's already been commended. It deserves both.

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Postby The Atlae Isles » Wed Aug 01, 2018 2:59 pm

Kuriko wrote:No way in Hell.... Get it?? Anyways, no support even though its well written. Hell is way more commendable than condemnable.

Hey, wait a second, it is!

It does fit the theme to give it a dark badge of honor, though. Support.

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John Milton wrote:
Kuriko wrote:No way in Hell.... Get it?? Anyways, no support even though its well written. Hell is way more commendable than condemnable.

It's already been commended. It deserves both.

Not really, imho. Hell has done nothing condemn worthy other than having the name Hell. Did you even consult Stalker about this?
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Postby Mzeusia » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:01 pm

Supported. What a wonderful case made.
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Postby John Milton » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:01 pm

Kuriko wrote:
John Milton wrote:It's already been commended. It deserves both.

Not really, imho. Hell has done nothing condemn worthy other than having the name Hell. Did you even consult Stalker about this?

Yes, we have.

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Postby Kuriko » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:06 pm

John Milton wrote:
Kuriko wrote:Not really, imho. Hell has done nothing condemn worthy other than having the name Hell. Did you even consult Stalker about this?

Yes, we have.

Are you going to reveal your main then, or hide behind that puppet?
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Postby John Milton » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:06 pm

Kuriko wrote:
John Milton wrote:Yes, we have.

Are you going to reveal your main then, or hide behind that puppet?

I've already said. I'm UM (United Massachusetts)

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Postby United Massachusetts » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:07 pm

John Milton wrote:
Kuriko wrote:Are you going to reveal your main then, or hide behind that puppet?

I've already said. I'm UM (United Massachusetts)

Can confirm.

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United Massachusetts wrote:
John Milton wrote:I've already said. I'm UM (United Massachusetts)

Can confirm.

My bad, missed that. Anyways, what I said still stands for me. Good luck if you submit it ^_^
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Postby United Massachusetts » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:12 pm

Kuriko wrote:
United Massachusetts wrote:Can confirm.

My bad, missed that. Anyways, what I said still stands for me. Good luck if you submit it ^_^

Thanks!

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Supported. Written well.
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Postby Jakker » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:16 pm

I see several 4(b) violations, but I can appreciate the creativity!
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Postby John Milton » Wed Aug 01, 2018 3:20 pm

Jakker wrote:I see several 4(b) violations, but I can appreciate the creativity!

I believe my proposed edits correct these.
Also, I contend that references to [violet] as "her" don't run afoul of 4(b), because [violet], in this sense, is not a nation, but the hypothetical God of the Violetists.

Nations can also be referred to as beasts, I contend.
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This should be the new model for future resolutions.
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Postby Lord Dominator » Wed Aug 01, 2018 4:35 pm

While entertaining, no support

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Postby John Milton » Wed Aug 01, 2018 4:54 pm

Aenglaland wrote:This should be the new model for future resolutions.

This took more than three hours to write and briefly edit. I think we'd see a sharp decline in the number of resolutions drafted if this were the model. :p

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Postby Lord Dominator » Wed Aug 01, 2018 5:07 pm

John Milton wrote:
Aenglaland wrote:This should be the new model for future resolutions.

This took more than three hours to write and briefly edit. I think we'd see a sharp decline in the number of resolutions drafted if this were the model. :p

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A sharp decline from to zero...
from zero

Hmm...

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Postby United Massachusetts » Wed Aug 01, 2018 5:36 pm

Lord Dominator wrote:
John Milton wrote:This took more than three hours to write and briefly edit. I think we'd see a sharp decline in the number of resolutions drafted if this were the model. :p

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A sharp decline from to zero...
from zero

Hmm...

A decline of an undefined percentage.

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Postby Wrapper » Wed Aug 01, 2018 5:57 pm

John Milton wrote:Also, I contend that references to [violet] as "her" don't run afoul of 4(b), because [violet], in this sense, is not a nation, but the hypothetical God of the Violetists.

Perhaps if the proper pronoun "Her" is used instead of the common pronoun, I'd buy that.

John Milton wrote:Nations can also be referred to as beasts, I contend.

That's a much tougher sell for me.

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