Feux wrote:Can someone please put a space between [Draft] and Commend
Sure. As a side note, I promise I'll work on this sometime soon. Been RL busy...
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by Vulturret » Wed Feb 28, 2018 12:05 pm
Feux wrote:Can someone please put a space between [Draft] and Commend
by Vulturret » Wed Feb 28, 2018 12:08 pm
by Vulturret » Thu Mar 08, 2018 11:51 am
by Fauxia » Thu Mar 08, 2018 3:19 pm
by Vulturret » Thu Mar 08, 2018 6:21 pm
Fauxia wrote:I think you only need one hyperlink per entity hyperlinked, besides Tim-Opolis, which should be hyperlinked the first time it is mentioned and should be when it is officially commended at the end.
I don't like using "influential" twice in the same line (the one about Spiritus).
On the roster line, you forgot a space after Tim-Opolis.
The line about TGW and defender is a bit ambiguous. I'm not sure you need the line about "via its associate, Tim"
Keep working on this, Vulty, but I think it's getting pretty close now
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