[withdrawn] Commend Onder Kelkia

[The President of Avalon]

The Security Council,

Amazed with The Empire of OndeKelkia's dedication to the ancient region of LKE (The Land of Kings and Emperors) and this nation's glowing record as a judge on Europeia's High Court .

Applauding that The Empire of OnderKelkia has been a member of NationStates for nearly twelve years and has been a steadfast advocate for Monarchism and the Independent ideology.

Acknowledging that The Empire of OnderKelkia has been Emperor of The Land of Kings and Emperors for about eight years, making The Empire of OnderKelkia the longest reigning Emperor in LKE history.

Impressed that The Empire of OnderKelkia has used The Land of Kings and Emperors for the betterment of NationStates as a whole.

Believing that The Empire of OnderKelkia deserves to be commended for hard work and dedication towards NationStates.

Hereby commends The Empire of OnderKelkia.

[Crazy girl]

I'd read the SC rules if I were you, most notably rule 4...just a tip
Your proposal is illegal as it stands now.

[The President of Avalon]

The Security Council,

Amazed with The Empire of Onder Kelkia's dedication to the ancient region of LKE (The Land of Kings and Emperor's) and his glowing record as a judge on Europeia's High Court .

Applauding that The Empire of Onder Kelkia has been a member of NationStates for nearly twelve years and has been a steadfast advocate for Monarchism and the Independent ideology.

Acknowledging that The Empire of Onder Kelkia has been Emperor of The Land of Kings and Emperor's for about eight years, making The Empire of Onder Kelkia the longest reigning Emperor in history.

Impressed that The Empire of Onder Kelkia has used The Land of Kings and Emperor's for the betterment of NationStates as a whole.

Believing that The Empire of Onder Kelkia deserves to be commended for hard work and dedication towards NationStates.

Hereby commends The Empire of Onder Kelkia.

I edited. Would the part referring to his reign be a violation?

[Crazy girl]

You need to write proposals as if your nominee is indeed a nation, so no "his" or "him" when referring to the nominee.

[The President of Avalon]

The Security Council,

Amazed with The Empire of Onder Kelkia's dedication to the ancient region of LKE (The Land of Kings and Emperor's) and this nations glowing record as a judge on Europeia's High Court .

Applauding that The Empire of Onder Kelkia has been a member of NationStates for nearly twelve years and has been a steadfast advocate for Monarchism and the Independent ideology.

Acknowledging that The Empire of Onder Kelkia has been Emperor of The Land of Kings and Emperor's for about eight years, making The Empire of Onder Kelkia the longest reigning Emperor in history.

Impressed that The Empire of Onder Kelkia has used The Land of Kings and Emperor's for the betterment of NationStates as a whole.

Believing that The Empire of Onder Kelkia deserves to be commended for hard work and dedication towards NationStates.

Hereby commends The Empire of Onder Kelkia.

Okay. I tookout the "his" on the glowing record line. Is there anything else? I made sure I put in the entire nation name.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

No such nation as Onder Kelkia.

[Tinhampton]

No such nation as Onder Kelkia.

Erm... yes, there is!

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OP: You can just use

Onder Kelkia

instead, and it would display the full nation name plus the flag.

Anyway, you need more details. Consider doing some research on Onder - they're the Statsminister of Balder with the very nation your Commendation is aimed at!

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

No such nation as Onder Kelkia.

Erm... yes, there is!

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OP: You can just use

Onder Kelkia

instead, and it would display the full nation name plus the flag.

Anyway, you need more details. Consider doing some research on Onder - they're the Statsminister of Balder with the very nation your Commendation is aimed at!

Very good, but the "author" I believe is taking about Onderkelkia.

Anyway this is a poorly researched attempt at a Commendation and has about as much chance of suceeding in its present form as one of your attempts i.e. zero.

[The President of Avalon]

Erm... yes, there is!

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OP: You can just use

Onder Kelkia

instead, and it would display the full nation name plus the flag.

Anyway, you need more details. Consider doing some research on Onder - they're the Statsminister of Balder with the very nation your Commendation is aimed at!

Very good, but the "author" I believe is taking about Onderkelkia.

Anyway this is a poorly researched attempt at a Commendation and has about as much chance of suceeding in its present form as one of your attempts i.e. zero.

I am referring to the one you linked to. I will edit that.

Okay I edited the name so it reads right.

[The President of Avalon]

Any other thoughts?

[Tinhampton]

Any other thoughts?

Do not submit this yet. Wait for the reactions of others (and actually respond - don't slack about ignoring your draft). You should leave at least a good few weeks until submission.

[The President of Avalon]

Any other thoughts?

Do not submit this yet. Wait for the reactions of others (and actually respond - don't slack about ignoring your draft). You should leave at least a good few weeks until submission.

Okay.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

The Security Council,

Amazed with The Empire of OndeKelkia's dedication to the ancient region of LKE (The Land of Kings and Emperor's) and this nation's glowing record as a judge on Europeia's High Court .

Yeah, lack of an apostrophe - corrected.

Applauding that The Empire of OnderKelkia has been a member of NationStates for nearly twelve years and has been a steadfast advocate for Monarchism and the Independent ideology.

I've been here nearly 14 years, where's my Commendation? Length of time in the game is not commendable.

Acknowledging that The Empire of OnderKelkia has been Emperor of The Land of Kings and Emperor's for about eight years, making The Empire of OnderKelkia the longest reigning Emperor in history.

Lots of other nations have held positions of power for equal or greater times than this.

Impressed that The Empire of OndeKelkia has used The Land of Kings and Emperor's for the betterment of NationStates as a whole.

Really? Prove it. Basically this statement is just flannel.

Believing that The Empire of Onder Kelkia deserves to be commended for hard work and dedication towards NationStates.

More flannel.

Hereby commends The Empire of Onder Kelkia.

Everything you've said is either filler or could be applied to a dozen other nations. There is no research here, I mean you couldn't even get the nominee's name right.

[The President of Avalon]

Keeping in mind this is my first time doing this... I will point out that I only got his name wrong because there was a space between "Onder" and "Kelkia". All of these things mentioned are in factually based. Of course you could state that the "betterment" part is flannel but I'm sure out of all the SC resolutions written that you could find a section in there and call it flannel. Other than that it is factually based. I should clarify that I meant nthe longest serving Emperor in LKE history not the entire game. I will fix that.

[Tinhampton]

snip

You missed out that "Emperor's" was spelt with an apostrophe, rather than without as it should be.

[The President of Avalon]

I edited the "Emperor's" .

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Keeping in mind this is my first time doing this... I will point out that I only got his name wrong because there was a space between "Onder" and "Kelkia". All of these things mentioned are in factually based. Of course you could state that the "betterment" part is flannel but I'm sure out of all the SC resolutions written that you could find a section in there and call it flannel. Other than that it is factually based. I should clarify that I meant nthe longest serving Emperor in LKE history not the entire game. I will fix that.

What you should be doing is looking at other Commendations and understanding the level of detail required. This draft is nowhere near the necessary standard. Onder, I'm sure, has done a lot more in this game than you've described. What you have to do is a bit of digging, a bit of hard yakka and get those facts into this draft.

[The President of Avalon]

Let me go get him and see if he can give input. He will be stunned he has a commendation being named for him.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Let me go get him and see if he can give input. He will be stunned he has a commendation being named for him.

Somehow I doubt that.

[The President of Avalon]

Let me go get him and see if he can give input. He will be stunned he has a commendation being named for him.

Somehow I doubt that.

Do you know who he is?

[Benevolent Thomas]

Somehow I doubt that.

Do you know who he is?

I have a feeling that a Guardian of The West Pacific knows who the macdaddy of imperialism is.

The nations that have posted here are correct, you are going to need more information if you wish to see Onder commended. The good news is that there is a list of accomplishments under Onder's belt for you to highlight, you just need to share them with the world. Of course, painting these accomplishments in a way to convince people that Onder's had a positive effect on NS beyond his political block may be a bit of a challenge.

[The President of Avalon]

Political block?

[Drasnia]

Political block?

You really don't understand NS politics, do you.

[The President of Avalon]

Political block?

You really don't understand NS politics, do you.

I just don't specifically understand by what he means by political block in regards to the person who we are talking about.

[Consular]

Impressed that The Empire of OnderKelkia has used The Land of Kings and Emperors for the betterment of NationStates as a whole.

Lol.

Anyway. If you need a list of Onderkelkia's positions and achievements and such, just look at his signature on any offsite forum. He tends to list all his ridiculous titles there.