Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:NationHelper wrote:Guess that's you saying it's still bad.....
Right, last bit of serious advice. You have two options as I see it.
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Option 2: Go away for a week, leave it be and then come back to it with some fresh ideas. At the moment you keep coming back to it like a scab. And like a scab if you pick at it, it won't get better. It will still be here, we'll still be here, Tsu will still be here.
You know for fact that he will not wait for a week. Rather, within the next two seconds, he will put up another rewrite of the same draft, again. This isn't going to go anywhere.