Commend Tsunamy

[Belschaft]

This proposal is wildly inaccurate. I'm not sure where or who you're getting your information on TSP from, but find a new source.

[Consular]

I'm not sure what help I can provide at this point. You don't appear to be learning.

[Equestria and Griffon]

Applauding that Tsunamy has been a forum admin,

Illegal term.

It's actually a 4(c) violation and 4(a).

[NationHelper]

This proposal is wildly inaccurate. I'm not sure where or who you're getting your information on TSP from, but find a new source.

I don't see how it's inaccurate.

[Belschaft]

This proposal is wildly inaccurate. I'm not sure where or who you're getting your information on TSP from, but find a new source.

I don't see how it's inaccurate.

As a former three-times Delegate of TSP, I can assure you that it is.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

This proposal is wildly inaccurate. I'm not sure where or who you're getting your information on TSP from, but find a new source.

I don't see how it's inaccurate.

When someone as experienced and knowledgeable in TSP affairs and history as Belschaft tells you your proposal is inaccurate, the correct response would be ask what you've got wrong.

[NationHelper]

I don't see how it's inaccurate.

When someone as experienced and knowledgeable in TSP affairs and history as Belschaft tells you your proposal is inaccurate, the correct response would be ask what you've got wrong.

I'm sorry. I didn't word it correctly. I was asking how it was wrong......

[NationHelper]

I am going to look through successful proposals that are similar to get inspiration......

[NationHelper]

I will remind people that arguing with different (anonymous) nations in an SC thread is frowned upon. You may even get called out if it get too much.

It's not even all that hard to figure out who the puppet master is.

Imgur mirror to ensure it doesn't get deleted.

Oh... C'mon..... I just have multiple nations...... That ones not a puppet...... And I only use puppets to get info on other regions...... (i.e. Put a puppet in a region and what for region-wide telegrams)

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

I am going to look through successful proposals that are similar to get inspiration......

Something I recommended you do 10 days ago with my first post in this thread. Better late than never I suppose.

[NationHelper]

I am going to look through successful proposals that are similar to get inspiration......

Something I recommended you do 10 days ago with my first post in this thread. Better late than never I suppose.

Do you recommend I search through new(er) ones?

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Something I recommended you do 10 days ago with my first post in this thread. Better late than never I suppose.

Do you recommend I search through new(er) ones?

How about you decide how you are going to do your research.

[NationHelper]

The Security Council,

Acknowledging that Tsunamy's created the local council, which has been helpful in The South Pacific. This has helped increase democracy, by creating a new way to vote. Also, it is voted on in the polls, not in a forum. This creates a more accessible way to elect officers,

Recognizing that Tsunamy has a long history in TSP for more than a decade, in which Tsunamy ensured security, activity, and stability,

Applauding that Tsunamy can run a strong, stable democracy without restricting rights,

Impressed that Tsunamy made the highest endocap in all of the pacific regions. This shows strength, trust, and power,

Understanding that Tsunamy always plays a major role in the WA, and has called the shots on some very close proposals, including:
-Condemn Elite Region of Global Command
-Repeal: Liberate Eternal Scholars,

Knowing that Tsunamy created TSP's Council on Regional Security. This has helped increase security, and honors respected members of TSP, who are the only ones that can join, based on the rules of the joining:
-World Assembly membership in The South Pacific;
-a Soft Power Disbursement Score of at least 50000
or an Influence Ranking of at least Vassal;
-at least 200 endorsements or half the endorsements of the Delegate;
-and six consecutive months of legislator status, or at least two terms in the Local Council;

Noting that Tsunamy has been active in TSP since 2003, and has had a variety of positions in TSP, including:
-Minister of Foreign Affairs
-Director of Intelligence
-Delegate (Twice); In which Tsunamy created new flags, amended election laws, Endorsed everyone Tsunamy could, and reformed the government as well as Tsunamy could
-Member of TSP's Council on Regional Security; In Which Tsunamy spotted a coup and immediately confronted cabinet members about it, resulting in TSP being saved
-Spearhead of The South Pacifician Journalism; In which Tsunamy devoted time to gain NS news and broadcast it publicly;
-Administrator of TSPs forums after the coup,

Noticing that Tsunamy is so well-liked that the nations of TSP created a festival devoted to Tsunamy, called Anniver-Tsu-ry,

Appalled that Tsunamy hasn't even been attempted to be commended yet,

Hereby commends Tsunamy for inclusiveness, kindness, and bravery

[Tinhampton]

This proposal is illegal for forum links.

[NationHelper]

This proposal is illegal for forum links.

Ah.... Thanks!

[Tinhampton]

This proposal is illegal for forum links.

Ah.... Thanks!

In my opinion, two hours is too short a time between draft upload to the forums and submission to the SC. Whilst I have to agree that it was a much superior draft to last time, there might still be some niggling problems hanging about. The draft could have been left up for comment for another few days, for other people to comment on it (and its illegalities).

[NationHelper]

Ah.... Thanks!

In my opinion, two hours is too short a time between draft upload to the forums and submission to the SC. Whilst I have to agree that it was a much superior draft to last time, there might still be some niggling problems hanging about. The draft could have been left up for comment for another few days, for other people to comment on it (and its illegalities).

So yeah..... Just wanted to test the rate of approval..... Which obviously goes down over time, as people will be harder to please...... Extremely negative results......

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Somehow every new draft seems to be worse than the one before. You seem to be labouring under the mistaken belief that adding stuff makes the draft better.

It doesn't. Your shotgunning of anything you can think of into the draft makes it damn near incomprehensible.

[NationHelper]

Somehow every new draft seems to be worse than the one before. You seem to be labouring under the mistaken belief that adding stuff makes the draft better.

It doesn't. Your shotgunning of anything you can think of into the draft makes it damn near incomprehensible.

What is your definition of a good draft?

[RiderSyl]

Here's some advice. The latest draft is very disjointed from a reader's perspective. Try to make the words flow better.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Somehow every new draft seems to be worse than the one before. You seem to be labouring under the mistaken belief that adding stuff makes the draft better.

It doesn't. Your shotgunning of anything you can think of into the draft makes it damn near incomprehensible.

What is your definition of a good draft?

The same as Justice Potter Stewart's - "I know it when I see it".

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

The Security Council,

Acknowledging that Tsunamy's created the local council, which has been helpful in The South Pacific. This has helped increase democracy, by creating a new way to vote. Also, it is voted on in the polls, not in a forum. This creates a more accessible way to elect officers,

Use of "forum" could be interpreted as the electronic version and would, therefore, be R4 non-compliant. Need to clarify that it's not the offsite forum.

Recognizing that Tsunamy has a long history in TSP for more than a decade, in which Tsunamy ensured security, activity, and stability,

A big "so what". I've been in TWP nearly 14 years and have also been ensuring security, activity and stability in that region.

Applauding that Tsunamy can run a strong, stable democracy without restricting rights,

Impressed that Tsunamy made the highest endocap in all of the pacific regions. This shows strength, trust, and power,

TNP does not have an endocap, meaning this last clause is utter bollo.

Understanding that Tsunamy always plays a major role in the WA, and has called the shots on some very close proposals, including:
-Condemn Elite Region of Global Command
-Repeal: Liberate Eternal Scholars,

Really? Please explain how they have called the shots.

Knowing that Tsunamy created TSP's Council on Regional Security. This has helped increase security, and honors respected members of TSP, who are the only ones that can join, based on the rules of the joining:
-World Assembly membership in The South Pacific;
-a Soft Power Disbursement Score of at least 50000
or an Influence Ranking of at least Vassal;
-at least 200 endorsements or half the endorsements of the Delegate;
-and six consecutive months of legislator status, or at least two terms in the Local Council;

Not sure if this is R4 compliant - makes it sound too much like a game.

Noting that Tsunamy has been active in TSP since 2003, and has had a variety of positions in TSP, including:
-Minister of Foreign Affairs
-Director of Intelligence
-Delegate (Twice); In which Tsunamy created new flags, amended election laws, Endorsed everyone Tsunamy could, and reformed the government as well as Tsunamy could
-Member of TSP's Council on Regional Security; In Which Tsunamy spotted a coup and immediately confronted cabinet members about it, resulting in TSP being saved
-Spearhead of The South Pacifician Journalism; In which Tsunamy devoted time to gain NS news and broadcast it publicly;
-Administrator of TSPs forums after the coup,

Very poorly written and the last line is almost certainly not R4 compliant as it could only be interpreted, in my opinion, as referring to the offsite forums.

Noticing that Tsunamy is so well-liked that the nations of TSP created a festival devoted to Tsunamy, called Anniver-Tsu-ry,

Appalled that Tsunamy hasn't even been attempted to be commended yet,

Hereby commends Tsunamy for inclusiveness, kindness, and bravery

As Syl said there's no flow to this. I think it's poorly written in places with potential illegalities still existing. The general layout does not help either.

[NationHelper]

The Security Council,

Acknowledging that Tsunamy's created the local council, which has been helpful in The South Pacific. This has helped increase democracy, by creating a new way to vote. Also, it is voted on in the polls, not in a forum. This creates a more accessible way to elect officers,

Use of "forum" could be interpreted as the electronic version and would, therefore, be R4 non-compliant. Need to clarify that it's not the offsite forum.
Ok.

Recognizing that Tsunamy has a long history in TSP for more than a decade, in which Tsunamy ensured security, activity, and stability,

A big "so what". I've been in TWP nearly 14 years and have also been ensuring security, activity and stability in that region.
I believe that Fudgetopia was partially commend for. (Paragraph 6)

Applauding that Tsunamy can run a strong, stable democracy without restricting rights,

Impressed that Tsunamy made the highest endocap in all of the pacific regions. This shows strength, trust, and power,

TNP does not have an endocap, meaning this last clause is utter bollo.
It may be more commendable to say "TSP has a generous endocap of 250"

Understanding that Tsunamy always plays a major role in the WA, and has called the shots on some very close proposals, including:
-Condemn Elite Region of Global Command
-Repeal: Liberate Eternal Scholars,

Really? Please explain how they have called the shots.
They were very close resolutions.

Knowing that Tsunamy created TSP's Council on Regional Security. This has helped increase security, and honors respected members of TSP, who are the only ones that can join, based on the rules of the joining:
-World Assembly membership in The South Pacific;
-a Soft Power Disbursement Score of at least 50000
or an Influence Ranking of at least Vassal;
-at least 200 endorsements or half the endorsements of the Delegate;
-and six consecutive months of legislator status, or at least two terms in the Local Council;

Not sure if this is R4 compliant - makes it sound too much like a game.
Perhaps if I worded it differently?

Noting that Tsunamy has been active in TSP since 2003, and has had a variety of positions in TSP, including:
-Minister of Foreign Affairs
-Director of Intelligence
-Delegate (Twice); In which Tsunamy created new flags, amended election laws, Endorsed everyone Tsunamy could, and reformed the government as well as Tsunamy could
-Member of TSP's Council on Regional Security; In Which Tsunamy spotted a coup and immediately confronted cabinet members about it, resulting in TSP being saved
-Spearhead of The South Pacifician Journalism; In which Tsunamy devoted time to gain NS news and broadcast it publicly;
-Administrator of TSPs forums after the coup,

Very poorly written and the last line is almost certainly not R4 compliant as it could only be interpreted, in my opinion, as referring to the offsite forums.
Ok! Ok! I'm a bad writer.

Noticing that Tsunamy is so well-liked that the nations of TSP created a festival devoted to Tsunamy, called Anniver-Tsu-ry,

Appalled that Tsunamy hasn't even been attempted to be commended yet,

Hereby commends Tsunamy for inclusiveness, kindness, and bravery

As Syl said there's no flow to this. I think it's poorly written in places with potential illegalities still existing. The general layout does not help either.

I am going to work on this behind the scenes.

[NationHelper]

Ugh..... This has gotten to be such a big thread most people have noticed it. Which means I won't even get to resolution until you guys approve of it, since that's what the less influential delegates are waiting for. Well, you guys call the shots anyways, so it wouldn't get approved of until you approve of it. On the bright side, it's helping me understand the SC.

THIS IS NOT A BADGE HUNT. IF I WAS LOOKING FOR A BADGE, I WOULD HAVE DONE A LIBERATION.

[Benevolent Thomas]

THIS IS NOT A BADGE HUNT. IF I WAS LOOKING FOR A BADGE, I WOULD HAVE DONE A LIBERATION.

Diminishing the relevance of Liberation proposals won't make you a friend of several important delegates.