by Forces of Doom » Fri Apr 14, 2017 2:13 am
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Fri Apr 14, 2017 2:32 am
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Forces of Doom » Fri Apr 21, 2017 12:08 am
by Tinhampton » Fri Apr 21, 2017 12:15 am
Forces of Doom wrote:Security council resolution #205 should be struck out and rendered null and void.
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Fri Apr 21, 2017 1:28 am
Forces of Doom wrote:How about now?
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Honeydewistan » Fri Apr 21, 2017 5:27 am
Tinhampton wrote:Forces of Doom wrote:Security council resolution #205 should be struck out and rendered null and void.
You don't need to put this in your repeal. It does that for you automatically.
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Forces of Doom wrote:How about now?
Somewhat better.
Ok couple of bits of advice. Firstly space the clauses out, looks better. Secondly, I understand what you're trying to say, it's just that it does not come across clearly.
Finally your "Further Acknowledging" and "Observing" clauses are saying exactly the same thing. Also it's not a Liberation Proposal you are trying to repeal, it's a Liberation. It was a proposal until it was passed.
Glad to see you're making an effort to improve.
by Forces of Doom » Fri Apr 21, 2017 5:31 am
Tinhampton wrote:Forces of Doom wrote:Security council resolution #205 should be struck out and rendered null and void.
You don't need to put this in your repeal. It does that for you automatically.
by Kaboomlandia » Fri Apr 21, 2017 5:42 am
by Forces of Doom » Fri Apr 21, 2017 8:25 am
by Fratatstan » Fri Apr 21, 2017 12:51 pm
by Forces of Doom » Fri Apr 21, 2017 8:03 pm
Fratatstan wrote:Forces of Doom wrote:So I also have to remove 'The Security Council of The World Assembly'?
No, you can keep that. Tinhampton and Kaboomlandia were both referring to "Security council resolution #205 should be struck out and rendered null and void", which is automatically added when you submit a repeal proposal.
by Cepcecic Ghost » Sat Apr 22, 2017 11:26 am
by Bhang Bhang Duc » Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:27 pm
FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGING that Captain Woodhouse imposed a password and closed Dank Memes, making them all move to their new home, DankMemes, where they are still there at the time of the writing of this proposal
Pierconium wrote:I see Funk as an opportunistic manipulator that utilises the means available to him to reach his goals. In other words, a nation after my own heart.
RiderSyl wrote:If an enchantress made it so one raid could bring about world peace, Unibot would ask raiders to just sign a petition instead.
Sedgistan wrote:The SC has just has a spate of really shitty ones recently from Northumbria, his Watermelon fanboy…..
by Forces of Doom » Tue Apr 25, 2017 4:11 am
Bhang Bhang Duc wrote:Cepcecic Ghost wrote:May I inquire about the subtle Saudi flag watermark in your nation flag?
What has that got to do with the draft?
Talking about which:FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGING that Captain Woodhouse imposed a password and closed Dank Memes, making them all move to their new home, DankMemes, where they are still there at the time of the writing of this proposal
In this clause I think you should really mention that a Founder imposed password is not affected by a Liberation, making the Liberation pointless, something like that anyway.
by Forces of Doom » Sun Apr 30, 2017 4:33 am
by Forces of Doom » Sun Apr 30, 2017 6:11 pm
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