(Draft) Commend The-Third-Panzermee

[Lolloh]

The World Assembly,
RECOGNIZING that The-Third-Panzermee, despite being conservative, did allow for many important freedoms
ACKNOWLEDGING that Third Panzermee did never manipulate the system to the top,
NOTICING that Third Panzermee helped draft the ACSN constitution, one of very few, and
APPLAUDING its stellar performance at balancing the ACSN,
does hereby
COMMEND The-Third Panzermee

[SkyDip]

The World Assembly,
RECOGNIZING that The-Third-Panzermee, despite being conservative, did allow for many important freedoms

Uh...what?

ACKNOWLEDGING that Third Panzermee did never manipulate the system to the top,

See above.

NOTICING that Third Panzermee helped draft the ACSN constitution, one of very few, and

One of very few what? Constitutions? That's a blatant (or uninformed) and inaccurate statement.

APPLAUDING its stellar performance at balancing the ACSN,

What does this even mean? Like on his/her head?

does hereby
COMMEND The-Third Panzermee

No. Nothing in this draft is comprehendible, let alone worthy of an SC Commendation.

[Lolloh]

1st line: The Third Panzermee, despite having a 42 in civil rights and a 50 in political freedoms, did allow all members to participate and not participate of their own liberties, and has never expelled any member without any just cause, and has allowed for voting, freedom of speech, and the right to contest the establishment
2nd line: Having not been persecuted for suspicious acts, and therefore not guilty of any corruption or manipulation,
3rd line: Having assisted in drafting the ACSN constitution, a major landmark in liberties and justices,
4th line: The same.
Suck slightly worse?

[SkyDip]

Ehhhhhh no. I would do some reading up on some previously-passed Commendation to get an idea for the material you need to find. Read the Commendation I wrote, for example. You need a lot more, world-affecting material, none of which this is.

[Abacathea]

Ehhhhhh no. I would do some reading up on some previously-passed Commendation to get an idea for the material you need to find. Read the Commendation I wrote, for example. You need a lot more, world-affecting material, none of which this is.

This.