[SUBMITTED] Security Council Resolution: Condemn Jakkea

[The Pan-Slavic Union]

This is my official submitted security council resolution to condemn Jakkea:

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Description: SHOCKED that The Kingdom of Jakkea has violated Mordor by impersonating its administration.

NOTING that while impersonating the administration of Mordor, The Kingdom of Jakkea sent threats of war to The Pan-Slavic Union via telegram.

KEEPING IN MIND that in its threats of war that were sent to The Pan-Slavic Union, The Kingdom of Jakkea acted with hostility by demanding the immediate surrender of The Pan-Slavic Union, and it's region, Slavia.

CONCERNED that as a result of The Kingdom of Jakkea making false threats of war, a state of emergency was established in Slavia, sparking much havoc and panic among the members of Slavia, and a political meltdown in the region.

TROUBLED that The Kingdom of Jakkea has committed the violation in an attempt to "troll" Slavia, which shows a juvenile and troublesome attitude.

DEEPLY CONCERNED that The Kingdom of Jakkea's mischief perhaps might have been targeted towards Slavia because of racial discrimination, seeing how Jakkea has made it clear that it is a nation of Albanian origin.

REMEMBERING that this sort of attitude is unacceptable and highly unworthy of the World Assembly.

HEREBY Condemns Jakkea.

[The Pan-Slavic Union]

Are there any comments?

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

Yeah - you should have posted here before submitting to the WA, as I spot a potential illegality under R2. Not to mention the formatting here is horrendous and the material completely lacking.

[The Pan-Slavic Union]

Yeah - you should have posted here before submitting to the WA, as I spot a potential illegality under R2. Not to mention the formatting here is horrendous and the material completely lacking.

How fantastic. Here we have a self-proclaimed politically motivated moderator. Your criticisms are no more valid than the Hague's rulings.

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

Yeah - you should have posted here before submitting to the WA, as I spot a potential illegality under R2. Not to mention the formatting here is horrendous and the material completely lacking.

How fantastic. Here we have a self-proclaimed politically motivated moderator. Your criticisms are no more valid than the Hague's rulings.

*points to three passed resolutions*

But I'm sure your snide commentary toward the SC regulars will get you far here.

[Jamie Anumia]

Are there any comments?

I'm fairly sure the use of the word 'troll' isn't legal. You may want to change that.

[The Pan-Slavic Union]

How fantastic. Here we have a self-proclaimed politically motivated moderator. Your criticisms are no more valid than the Hague's rulings.

*points to three passed resolutions*

But I'm sure your snide commentary toward the SC regulars will get you far here.

Well, as it seems, the fact that Skyrim Diplomacy over here thought he would pretend to be a moderator and make politically-motivated criticisms against my proposal was not enough for Skyrim Diplomacy.

Rather, he thought he would go farther in his arrogant role by justifying his poorly made criticisms by stating that he is an honourable member of the World Assembly.

The pity I have for your sole is immense.

[The Pan-Slavic Union]

Are there any comments?

I'm fairly sure the use of the word 'troll' isn't legal. You may want to change that.

For that reason exactly, I put the word "troll" in quotes, and by doing so, I have not used the word in the proposal, but rather have quoted and recognized it as a slang term.

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

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Just saying here champ - I'm around the SC quite a bit. You'd do well to listen to advice, not insult those attempting to help you. Your proposal is illegal as I read it, and the content is severely lacking in what the SC regulars look for in proposals.

[The Pan-Slavic Union]

Alright then, "SC Regular", can you tell me what is illegal about my proposal?

I want your help.

[Benevolent Thomas]

My suggestion would be to use less nation tags for a start. Then perhaps adding more substance to the proposal. All I see is that you were duped by an individual named Jakkea.

[Grays Harbor]

Hnh. What I read in this proposal is "I am butthurt by nation "X" and want them condemned". Nothing much else condemn worthy, really.

[The North Polish Union]

Hnh. What I read in this proposal is "I am butthurt by nation "X" and want them condemned". Nothing much else condemn worthy, really.

Hell, it's a lot better than some other proposals I've read. i.e.
"recognizing that Communism is a failed government type that I personally don't like
Hereby condemns the communist region."

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

Alright then, "SC Regular", can you tell me what is illegal about my proposal?

I want your help.

Your "TROUBLED" clause violates Rule 2c. insofar as it addresses a Moderation complaint. That can't be included in your proposal.

[Drop Your Pants]

NOTING that while impersonating the administration of Mordor, The Kingdom of Jakkea sent threats of war to The Pan-Slavic Union via telegram.

Do you have anything to back up the statement?

KEEPING IN MIND that in its threats of war that were sent to The Pan-Slavic Union, The Kingdom of Jakkea acted with hostility by demanding the immediate surrender of The Pan-Slavic Union, and it's region, Slavia.

Were the "hreat" messages reported to the mods? Although its amusing one threat from someone outside the region can cause a political meltdown.

DEEPLY CONCERNED that The Kingdom of Jakkea's mischief perhaps might have been targeted towards Slavia because of racial discrimination, seeing how Jakkea has made it clear that it is a nation of Albanian origin.

Lose that whole line. Mights and possibly's aren't good.

REMEMBERING that this sort of attitude is unacceptable and highly unworthy of the World Assembly.

How is it unacceptable to the WA? I understand what your trying to say but i think the sentence is a bit broken.

And in defense of SD, you asked for comments and then jumped him when he gave you some. if you didn't want him to post then you shouldn't have posted the draft.

[Frisbeeteria]

How fantastic. Here we have a self-proclaimed politically motivated moderator. Your criticisms are no more valid than the Hague's rulings.

Perhaps you're unaware of the fact that WA moderators request ... nay, encourage, experienced players to assist newer players with illegalities and other flaws. The fact that the most experienced players are typically the successful authors has also apparently bypassed your notice.

Mods typically won't even comment on proposals until regular readers have had a chance to review, and the author has had a chance to correct. However, since you've chosen to ignore this useful resource and resorted to snark instead, your illegal proposal has been removed and you've accumulated a warning for posting an illegal proposal.

Frisbeeteria
NS Senior Game Moderator