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COMMEND UMBRA AC SILENTIUM

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Kambota (Ancient)
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COMMEND UMBRA AC SILENTIUM

Postby Kambota (Ancient) » Sat Oct 13, 2012 7:08 pm

This is a rough draft of a resolution I plan on introducing to the WA in the next few months. Please feel free to leave any comments/suggestions/corrections.


RECOGNIZING Umbra Ac Silentium’s extreme regional and international influence.

ACKNOWLEDGING its status as a WA Delegate.

FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGING its responsibility in that role,

OBSERVING the nation’s strong civil rights and political freedoms,

FURTHER OBSERVING the nation’s extensive track record of compassionate citizens, a strong school system, and low crime rate,

Hereby COMMENDS Umbra Ac Silentum for its extreme strong freedoms and effective social system.

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Postby Mousebumples » Sat Oct 13, 2012 7:09 pm

Kambota wrote:This is a rough draft of a resolution I plan on introducing to the WA in the next few months. Please feel free to leave any comments/suggestions/corrections.


RECOGNIZING Umbra Ac Silentium’s extreme regional and international influence.

ACKNOWLEDGING its status as a WA Delegate.

FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGING its responsibility in that role,

OBSERVING the nation’s strong civil rights and political freedoms,

FURTHER OBSERVING the nation’s extensive track record of compassionate citizens, a strong school system, and low crime rate,

Hereby COMMENDS Umbra Ac Silentum for its extreme strong freedoms and effective social system.

Wrong chamber. I suggest checking out this chamber.
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Postby Dagguerro » Sun Oct 14, 2012 3:32 am

Going to need a LOT more content if you expect anyone to support this methinks.
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Postby Skyrim Diplomacy » Sun Oct 14, 2012 10:09 am

Kambota wrote:RECOGNIZING Umbra Ac Silentium’s extreme regional and international influence.

Says who? I've never heard of this nation.

Kambota wrote:ACKNOWLEDGING its status as a WA Delegate.

If we commended every WA Delegate in the game...we'd be flooded with commendations. Not something that should be included in a commendation.

Kambota wrote:FURTHER ACKNOWLEDGING its responsibility in that role,

See above.

Kambota wrote:OBSERVING the nation’s strong civil rights and political freedoms,

If we commended every WA Delegate nation with strong civil rights/political freedoms in the game...we'd be flooded with commendations. Not something that should be included in a commendation.

Kambota wrote:FURTHER OBSERVING the nation’s extensive track record of compassionate citizens, a strong school system, and low crime rate,

See above.

Nothing in there is even remotely warranting a commendation. I suggest you take a peek at some recent Commendations for nations that have warranted such international recognition and come back with a stronger, more focused draft if you want to pursue such action.


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