[SEMI-SRS DRAFT] Condemn Look at me

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

So I still had this draft lingering around from the previous attempt to condemn Look at me, which I don't believe was ever submitted. Thoughts? Should I just toss it?

Condemn Look at me

Category: Condemnation | Nominee: Look at me | Proposed By: Skyrim Diplomacy

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Description: The Security Council,

Acknowledging Look at me as the founder and principle antagonist of a raider group called The Axis of Evil,

Apprehensively Disclosing the atrocities committed by the administration of Look at me, including

• The distinct lack of civil rights or political freedoms allowed to the people of Look at me
• 29% death rate in Look at me due to “Disappearance”
• The WA ratings that place Look at me in the Top 1% of the World for Most Corrupt Governments and Most Avoided Nations

Further Disclosing that Look at me has encouraged the spread of hate, radical idealism, and violence to advance the principles of authoritarian rule of law, suppression of freedom on all levels, and general evil,

Pointing Out that The Axis of Evil (AoE) is an ancient raider organization that has targeted democratic regions simply for the ideological discord between AoE and said regions, and that AoE has not only raided and griefed regions, but has, in many cases, taken those regions and re-founded them as trophies or war and a mockery to the original inhabitants,

Noting that Look at me has maintained these evil principles for many years while keeping a strong membership in AoE and inciting the same ideals and styles in members of AoE,

Hereby Condemns Look at me

[The Great Destruction]

Apprehensively Disclosing the atrocities committed by the administration of Look at me, including

• The distinct lack of civil rights or political freedoms allowed to the people of Look at me
• 29% death rate in Look at me due to “Disappearance”
• The WA ratings that place Look at me in the Top 1% of the World for Most Corrupt Governments and Most Avoided Nations

They look like a mirror image of my nation with those stats, lol I dont think they would be relevant or at least most people wouldnt care.

It definitly needs work. You probably need more about Look at Me being a key player in the axis of evil if this is to get off the ground. I have no doubt that Look at Me is deserving of this but you have to convince those people who wouldnt know any better, don't read the forum for evidence, and are normally skeptical....so the proposal really has to zing.

Of course, I beleive anything could pass with the right tone and cadence backed up by a good campaign

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

Apprehensively Disclosing the atrocities committed by the administration of Look at me, including

• The distinct lack of civil rights or political freedoms allowed to the people of Look at me
• 29% death rate in Look at me due to “Disappearance”
• The WA ratings that place Look at me in the Top 1% of the World for Most Corrupt Governments and Most Avoided Nations

They look like a mirror image of my nation with those stats, lol I dont think they would be relevant or at least most people wouldnt care.

It definitly needs work. You probably need more about Look at Me being a key player in the axis of evil if this is to get off the ground. I have no doubt that Look at Me is deserving of this but you have to convince those people who wouldnt know any better, don't read the forum for evidence, and are normally skeptical....so the proposal really has to zing.

Of course, I beleive anything could pass with the right tone and cadence backed up by a good campaign

I agree on almost all those points, I just don't know if "OMGZ!!! Axis of Evil!" is a legitimate thing to found an entire proposal on. Let's be honest here, AoE isn't exactly at the top of the raiding world ATM.

[The Great Destruction]

Hold onto it it then and bust it out when it is relevant.



EDIT:....I just went and looked at the regions AoE captured again. It is really quite impressive. You would have a better chance of condemning the AoE with a better proposal than the currently failing one in queue.

[Drop Your Pants]

Further Disclosing that Look at me has encouraged the spread of hate, radical idealism, and violence to advance the principles of authoritarian rule of law, suppression of freedom on all levels, and general evil,

I've never heard that.

Pointing Out that The Axis of Evil (AoE) is an ancient raider organisation

Ancient is the right word, you can see the dust on them

The proposal is half Gameplay and half Nation RP. Pick one and stick with it.

[Marina and The Diamonds]

Against. I think the 2nd point is weak. I'd personally suggest choosing a gameplay only perspective in this condemnation unless their is more RP material available.

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

I don't know if the condemnation of Look at me is necessarily even worth the time it would take to draft and edit this, much less campaign for.

[Mahaj]

Its really really not.

[Skyrim Diplomacy]

Its really really not.

Sorta what I was leaning toward as well.