Illegal SC proposals - post them here

[Terra Voltera]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1529411386

Security Council Proposal
ID: south_his_majestys_most_loyal_kangaroos_1529411386

Commend Chicken Overlords
A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: Chicken overlords

Proposed by: South His Majestys most loyal kangaroos

Reconising Chicken overlords is a fast-growing region, attaining 19 nations in the time of only 8 days
noting chicken overlords many nations in chicken overlords have very hgh political freedom and civil rights
further noting Cicken overlords has one of the highest income equality in the worlds
taking further note Chicken overlords is a productive region.

Heaby,
commend Chicken overlords

I would like to think this is illegal due to "Hereby" being typed in as "Heaby". Kinda makes the operative clause messed up.

[Frisbeeteria]

I would like to think this is illegal due to "Hereby" being typed in as "Heaby".

I would like to think that the author's inability to spell the target region correctly should be grounds for removal. Alas, it's not. We have to leave their illiteracy in place for all to see.

[Kozmix]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1530521242

A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Trivial Otrait

Proposed by: Otrait

Hello dear sir/madam,
I have recently noticed that a nation called Trivial Otrait has been accepted into the WA. I am deeply disappointed because the nation mentioned above has decided to name their nation with a similar name like mine, without my permission. As well as creating a statement file in their dossier mocking my nation’s technological advancement. After they entered the WA, I have received a telegram that included some inappropriate language that I cannot state and he mocking my nation. I would prefer if you would punish the nation. Additionally, I do not know who is managing the nation. Please take my requests into consideration. Thank you .

-King Andreas I of Otrait

R4a, b) RL Reference: "SIr/Madam", "I am"
R2c) Irrelevant Argument: "Mocking my nation"
R3) No operative clause

I don't even know why I am dissecting this, it is just a good pop quiz to go over the rules I guess

[Ransium]

You should list the actual rules being broken by number/letter, Kozmix

[Kozmix]

You should list the actual rules being broken by number/letter, Kozmix

I have edited the post above, I hope it is better.

[Terra Voltera]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1531179549

Security Council Proposal
ID: beasluxia_1531179549

Condemn Kampf Empire
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Kampf Empire

Proposed by: Beasluxia

For acts of genocide against the people of Texaria, Kampf Empire shall be condemned.

The General Assembly

Acknowledging the war between Kampf Empire and Texaria.

Yet repulsed by the reports of savage beatings administered to Texarian civilians.

Shocked by Texarians being sent to concentration camps by Kampf Empire.

And horrified by the wanton killings of Texarians by Kampf Empire.

Condemns Kampf Empire.

R4(d) I believe for being written from the perspective of the General Assembly instead of the Security Council. I could be wrong though.

[Wrapper]

R4(d) I believe for being written from the perspective of the General Assembly instead of the Security Council. I could be wrong though.

I just marked it illegal for that reason. WA or SC, either is fine, but not the GA.

[Lenlyvit]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1532004304

Security Council Proposal
ID: struberria_1532004304

Commend The United Dark Republic
A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The United Dark Republic

Proposed by: Struberria

The Security Council,

Impressed by the long time commitment The United Dark Republic has had to NationStates during the past four years, which has brought the nation great experience in both leadership and NationStates region building.

Honoring the stable leadership they had brought previously to The Empire of Oppression and currently to the New Western Atlantic, which in turn has caused both regions to build flourishing communities with active events and traditions under his leadership.

Recognizing that The United Dark Republic built the government of the New Western Atlantic, a region which at its peak had 550 members and a fully functioning democracy. This includes a one-of-a-kind senate class system, along with a High Court and Prime Ministry. The Constitution of the New Western Atlantic was written primarily by The United Dark Republic and has been used as the template for countless other Democratic regions.

Applauding the mature and non-partisan treatment of all nations that associate with The United Dark Republic. The United Dark Republic is known to be a staunch supporter of LGBTQ+ rights and the equal treatment of all individuals. This nation has been cited to take a Zero Tolerance Policy towards hateful ideologies.

Understanding The United Dark Republic's role in the exposure of the Union of Confederate Regions. The Union of Confederate Regions was known to be a breeding ground for hateful and oppressive ideologies along with multiple poaching and political attacks against the New Western Atlantic and other democratic regions.

Celebrating The United Dark Republic's role in the World Assembly as the official Delegate of the New Western Atlantic. This nation has worked with The East Pacific on many General Assembly and Security Council Resolutions to improve the World Assembly and it's legislation.

Noting that The United Dark Republic has been an inspirational leader and nation to all users across NationStates and is well respected among the International Community.

The Security Council Hereby Commends The United Dark Republic.

Co-Authored with Nydaymos

This has been marked legal by three mods, yet is illegal under R4(b) for use of "his" in the second clause.

[Cosmopolitan borovan]

His should be it. And users should be referred as nations. U don't refer to countries as a he or users.

[Frisbeeteria]

This has been marked legal by three mods, yet is illegal under R4(b) for use of "his" in the second clause.

Missed that in the wall-of-text. Will change my vote.

[Lenlyvit]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1532050764

Security Council Proposal
ID: struberria_1532050764

Commend The United Dark Republic
A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The United Dark Republic

Proposed by: Struberria

The Security Council,

Impressed by the long time commitment The United Dark Republic has had to NationStates during the past four years, which has brought the nation great experience in both leadership and NationStates region building.

Honoring the stable leadership they had brought previously to he Empire of Oppression and currently to the New Western Atlantic which in turn has caused both regions to build flourishing communities with active events and traditions under their leadership.

Recognizing that The United Dark Republic built the government of the New Western Atlantic, a region which at its peak had 550 members and a fully functioning democracy. This includes a one-of-a-kind senate class system, along with a High Court and Prime Ministry. The Constitution of the New Western Atlantic was written primarily by The United Dark Republic and has been used as the template for countless other Democratic regions.

Applauding the mature and non-partisan treatment of all nations that associate with The United Dark Republic. The United Dark Republic is known to be a staunch supporter of LGBTQ+ rights and the equal treatment of all individuals. This nation has been cited to take a Zero Tolerance Policy towards hateful ideologies.

Understanding The United Dark Republic's role in the exposure of the Union of Confederate Regions. The Union of Confederate Regions was known to be a breeding ground for hateful and oppressive ideologies along with multiple poaching and political attacks against the New Western Atlantic and other democratic regions.

Celebrating The United Dark Republic's role in the World Assembly as the official Delegate of the New Western Atlantic. This nation has worked with The East Pacific on many General Assembly and Security Council Resolutions to improve the World Assembly and it's legislation.

Noting that The United Dark Republic has been an inspirational leader and nation to all users across NationStates and is well respected among the International Community.

The Security Council Hereby Commends The United Dark Republic.

Co-Authored with Nydaymos

The author withdrew and resubmitted, yet there's still an R4(b) violation with the word "users" in the last clause.

[Jakker]

The author withdrew and resubmitted, yet there's still an R4(b) violation with the word "users" in the last clause.

You've been on top of your SC proposal rules game. Good catch.

[Ransium]

I assumed it meant drug users

[Lenlyvit]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1532531737

Security Council Proposal
ID: coustries_1532531737

Liberate Penglai
A resolution to strike down Delegate-imposed barriers to free entry in a region.

Category: Liberation

Nominee (region): Penglai

Proposed by: Coustries

For too long has the region of Penglai had unrestreicted control over the people in its region, and forced them unto labour, the aim of they World Assembly is freedom, and the Security Council for liberty. With these aims the horrors of the region of Penglai has gone on too long. We must take the necessary action to make sure the people recieve Justice and freedom! Also this region make not any contribution to the WA, and as such must be liberated in order to use the resources to help the WA and the the good people of this region.

R3, R4(d)

[Kuriko]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533437921

Security Council Proposal
ID: the_united_plethorate_of_cascadia_1533437921

Condemn Eli
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Eli

Proposed by: The United Plethorate of Cascadia

This resolution is a necessary condemnation for integrity and moral decency.

The Free state of Eli is a failed, morally despicable nation that not only fails to provide for it’s own citizens due to losing influence over it’s own populace, with most issues delegated to regional authorities, it has shown aggression numerous times, with nearly 100% of its budget devoted to its military, and a forum post in which it states, quote, “spit in the weirdo’s chicken parts”. In conclusion, Eli is a failed, barely active state, which is why this resolution proposes the condemnation of The Free State Of Eli.

R4(d)

[Kuriko]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533963450

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533963450

Condemn The MT Army
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: The MT Army

Proposed by: Fetra

The region called MT army destroyed some "nazi" regions of other NS players , that isn't a thing to lodate them , only because the "enemy" is "fascist"

Reconizing that : players in a region want to remain in their region.
That: A region destroyed is always a player sad.
Finalizing that: The MT Army has no motive for be commended , and now has to be condemned for the respect of the destroyed regions founders.

The MT Army is condemned.

R4(b), R4(c)??

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533964056

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533964056

Repeal: “Commend The MT Army”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#240

Proposed by: Fetra

Security Council Resolution #240 “Commend The MT Army” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Since the MT army has destroyed some regions it is a main reason not to praise it.

Since the destroyed regions had a founder, this is also done with respect to it.

Since the MT army can not hold this insulting title too long.

Declares the MT army,lacking the right to be praised , only for having removed an "enemy" called "freedom of others" and not "fascism".

R4(d)??, R2(d), R3

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533965789

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533965789

Condemn Antifa
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Antifa

Proposed by: Fetra

Presenting the ANTIFA region as bad, useless and destructive.

- It is declared that: it has destroyed many regions only because "fascist"

- Objectives that : their lack of respect towards the founders of regions such as nova jane austinus ,or other similar regions, outrages the civilian principles.

- Demonstrating that: Only because a region it's formed with an ideology different from their own, It isn't a reason to destroy it.

- Adding that: for the respect of the founders of regions so called "fascists", for the freedom of players to express their ideologies, to limit this violence in the comparison of innocent regions eliminated by ANTIFA

Declares ANTIFA condemned.

R4(b)

[Ransium]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_view_proposal/id=fetra_1533963450

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533963450

Condemn The MT Army
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: The MT Army

Proposed by: Fetra

The region called MT army destroyed some "nazi" regions of other NS players , that isn't a thing to lodate them , only because the "enemy" is "fascist"

Reconizing that : players in a region want to remain in their region.
That: A region destroyed is always a player sad.
Finalizing that: The MT Army has no motive for be commended , and now has to be condemned for the respect of the destroyed regions founders.

The MT Army is condemned.

R4(b), R4(c)??

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533964056

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533964056

Repeal: “Commend The MT Army”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#240

Proposed by: Fetra

Security Council Resolution #240 “Commend The MT Army” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Since the MT army has destroyed some regions it is a main reason not to praise it.

Since the destroyed regions had a founder, this is also done with respect to it.

Since the MT army can not hold this insulting title too long.

Declares the MT army,lacking the right to be praised , only for having removed an "enemy" called "freedom of others" and not "fascism".

R4(d)??, R2(d), R3

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533965789

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533965789

Condemn Antifa
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Antifa

Proposed by: Fetra

Presenting the ANTIFA region as bad, useless and destructive.

- It is declared that: it has destroyed many regions only because "fascist"

- Objectives that : their lack of respect towards the founders of regions such as nova jane austinus ,or other similar regions, outrages the civilian principles.

- Demonstrating that: Only because a region it's formed with an ideology different from their own, It isn't a reason to destroy it.

- Adding that: for the respect of the founders of regions so called "fascists", for the freedom of players to express their ideologies, to limit this violence in the comparison of innocent regions eliminated by ANTIFA

Declares ANTIFA condemned.

R4(b)

Not seeing R4(b) in the last one what am I missing?

[Armaros]

- Adding that: for the respect of the founders of regions so called "fascists", for the freedom of players to express their ideologies, to limit this violence in the comparison of innocent regions eliminated by ANTIFA
that maybe?

[Kuriko]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_view_proposal/id=fetra_1533963450

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533963450

Condemn The MT Army
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: The MT Army

Proposed by: Fetra

The region called MT army destroyed some "nazi" regions of other NS players , that isn't a thing to lodate them , only because the "enemy" is "fascist"

Reconizing that : players in a region want to remain in their region.
That: A region destroyed is always a player sad.
Finalizing that: The MT Army has no motive for be commended , and now has to be condemned for the respect of the destroyed regions founders.

The MT Army is condemned.

R4(b), R4(c)??

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533964056

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533964056

Repeal: “Commend The MT Army”
A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal

Resolution: SC#240

Proposed by: Fetra

Security Council Resolution #240 “Commend The MT Army” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Since the MT army has destroyed some regions it is a main reason not to praise it.

Since the destroyed regions had a founder, this is also done with respect to it.

Since the MT army can not hold this insulting title too long.

Declares the MT army,lacking the right to be praised , only for having removed an "enemy" called "freedom of others" and not "fascism".

R4(d)??, R2(d), R3

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https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1533965789

Security Council Proposal
ID: fetra_1533965789

Condemn Antifa
A resolution to express shock and dismay at a nation or region.

Category: Condemnation

Nominee: Antifa

Proposed by: Fetra

Presenting the ANTIFA region as bad, useless and destructive.

- It is declared that: it has destroyed many regions only because "fascist"

- Objectives that : their lack of respect towards the founders of regions such as nova jane austinus ,or other similar regions, outrages the civilian principles.

- Demonstrating that: Only because a region it's formed with an ideology different from their own, It isn't a reason to destroy it.

- Adding that: for the respect of the founders of regions so called "fascists", for the freedom of players to express their ideologies, to limit this violence in the comparison of innocent regions eliminated by ANTIFA

Declares ANTIFA condemned.

R4(b)

Not seeing R4(b) in the last one what am I missing?

The word "players" in the "Adding that:" clause.

Edit: Same as the first resolution, where the word "players" made an appearance in the first clause.

[Ransium]

Got it, thanks.

[New Min]

ID: the_alex_islands_1534007427

Repeal: “Liberate The East Pacific”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal
Resolution: SC#247
Proposed by: The Alex Islands
Security Council Resolution #247 “Liberate The East Pacific” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Asserting that The East Pacific has a democratic goverement and that Queen Yuno should be able to put in a password into the region.

This can be used to keep nations in and prevent e-migration.

The Eastern Fail-Igachy had tried to twist the goverment of The East Pacific and Queen Yuno was never a raider.

Honest Mistake: Queen Yuno can't password the region, even if the liberation is repealed. + Rule 3

[Ransium]

ID: the_alex_islands_1534007427

Repeal: “Liberate The East Pacific”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal
Resolution: SC#247
Proposed by: The Alex Islands
Security Council Resolution #247 “Liberate The East Pacific” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Asserting that The East Pacific has a democratic goverement and that Queen Yuno should be able to put in a password into the region.

This can be used to keep nations in and prevent e-migration.

The Eastern Fail-Igachy had tried to twist the goverment of The East Pacific and Queen Yuno was never a raider.

Honest Mistake: Queen Yuno can't password the region, even if the liberation is repealed. + Rule 3

In the future, if you could link to the resolution that would be great. Also get your GA rules out of the SC, honest mistake isn't a thing here. R3 is correct though.

[Bears Armed Mission]

ID: the_alex_islands_1534007427

Repeal: “Liberate The East Pacific”

A resolution to repeal previously passed legislation.

Category: Repeal
Resolution: SC#247
Proposed by: The Alex Islands
Security Council Resolution #247 “Liberate The East Pacific” shall be struck out and rendered null and void.

Asserting that The East Pacific has a democratic goverement and that Queen Yuno should be able to put in a password into the region.

This can be used to keep nations in and prevent e-migration.

The Eastern Fail-Igachy had tried to twist the goverment of The East Pacific and Queen Yuno was never a raider.

Honest Mistake: Queen Yuno can't password the region, even if the liberation is repealed. + Rule 3

Not to mention that passwording a region only prevents immigration, not emigration...

[United Massachusetts]

That resolution shall never die. Hail Yuno o7

[New Min]

https://www.nationstates.net/page=UN_vi ... 1534404712

ID: wi_nation_1534404712

Commend The Great New York Nation
A resolution to recognize outstanding contribution by a nation or region.

Category: Commendation

Nominee: The great new york nation

Proposed by: Wi nation

I was asked to propose this but I think they are doing a good job

Rule 3 comes up to my mind, but you guys can probably find a hell of a lot of other violations.