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Condemn Capitalist Paradise

Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 12:59 pm

[proposal=]THE region of Capitalist Paradise was a great region with many freedoms.

THIS region was flourishing fast and quick with many potential future leaders.

IT`S leader then began to ban members that had been long time members.

THESE long time members where attempting to make the region less corrupt and more user freindly.

THE regions delegate managed to convince people wrongly that a nation attempting to become WA Delegate was spammimg.

The region now is quickly losing other long time members.After a long string of bans in Capitalist Paradise,nations in this region shrunk from 301 nations to the current number of 237.

THE WA Security Council hereby condems Capitalist Paradse.[/proposal].
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:16 pm

Well is it legal
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Postby Fischistan » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:16 pm

Metagaming, illegal. And the raid that I think you were referencing is now over.
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Postby Sedgistan » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:20 pm

Fischistan wrote:Metagaming, illegal.

It's illegal, but not for metagaming. The metagaming rule is a General Assembly one, not an SC one.
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Postby Fischistan » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:23 pm

Sedgistan wrote:
Fischistan wrote:Metagaming, illegal.

It's illegal, but not for metagaming. The metagaming rule is a General Assembly one, not an SC one.

I'm not sure what the exact word for it is, but what I mean is that it's trying to do stuff outside of the SC's grasp.
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:29 pm

Can I form the Committe if I can get more to actually condem Capitalist Paradise?
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Postby Fischistan » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:30 pm

Winner12345 wrote:Can I form the Committe if I can get more to actually condem Capitalist Paradise?

No, the WA cannot make such a comitee.
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Postby Dagnia » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:33 pm

The misspelling of condemn in both the title and body of the proposal should be enough to have it rejected. I mean, the word only appears a hundred times or so in Security Council resolutions. Look at the founding date of the nation proposing and draw your own conclusions.
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:34 pm

If I remove this committe and get more on Capitalist Paradise is it legal.
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Postby Frisbeeteria » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:37 pm

Winner12345 wrote:If I remove this committe and get more on Capitalist Paradise is it legal.

All your proposal can do is add a badge to a nation or region. If you try to do anything else, it will be illegal. Also, there is a nice rules sticky telling you what else is illegal.

We don't rule on hypothetical edits. Make your changes and then see what specific commentors say.
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:44 pm

Winner12345 wrote:THE region of Capitalist Paradise was a great region with many freedoms.

THIS region was flourishing fast and quick with many potential future leaders.

IT`S leader then began to ban members that had been long time members.

THESE long time members where attempting to make the region less corrupt and more user freindly.

THE regions delegate managed to convince people wrongly that a nation attempting to become WA Delegate was spamming

THE Region now is quickly losing long time members.At my ban there where 301 nations now there`s 236.

BY condemning this region it will be better run and less corrupt.

THE WA Security Council Hereby condems Capitalist Paradise.

This Better?
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Postby AAC » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:50 pm

Winner12345 wrote:
Winner12345 wrote:THE region of Capitalist Paradise was a great region with many freedoms.

THIS region was flourishing fast and quick with many potential future leaders.

IT`S leader then began to ban members that had been long time members.

THESE long time members where attempting to make the region less corrupt and more user freindly.

THE regions delegate managed to convince people wrongly that a nation attempting to become WA Delegate was spamming

THE Region now is quickly losing long time members.At my ban there where 301 nations now there`s 236.

BY condemning this region it will be better run and less corrupt.

THE WA Security Council Hereby condems Capitalist Paradise.

This Better?

The third line "its" is misspelled. The 6th line is missing a space after a period, it also has a misspelling of the world "were" furthermore it is missing a comma after nations and "there's" is grammatically incorrect and should be amended to "there are", it should read:
At my ban there were 301 nations, now there are 236.
This now also reads better and looks far more professional.

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Postby Panageadom » Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:50 pm

Winner12345 wrote:...

IT`S

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What on Earth is that punctuation? It's like some alien race of enantiomeric-space-apostrophes.
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:24 pm

Winner12345 wrote:THE region of Capitalist Paradise was a great region with many freedoms.

THIS region was flourishing fast and quick with many potential future leaders.

IT`S leader then began to ban members that had been long time members.

THESE long time members where attempting to make the region less corrupt and more user freindly.

THE regions delegate managed to convince people wrongly that a nation attempting to become WA Delegate was spamming

THE Region now is quickly losing long time members. At my ban there where 301 nations now there are 236.

BY condemning this region it will be better run and less corrupt.

THE WA Security Council Hereby condems Capitalist Paradise.

Corrected.....I think
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Postby Jefferson and Paul » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:34 pm

How exactly will a condemnation make any members return or make the region "less corrupt"? If anything it is attracting the wrong-crowd. If the member-nations you're describing are really as good-natured and honorable as you make them out to be then I doubt they'd want to be associated with a Condemned region. Perhaps you should be condemning the delegate and not the region itself?
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:35 pm

IS it ready?I blame all of you if its wrong
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Postby Skyrim Diplomacy » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:36 pm

Winner12345 wrote:IS it ready?I blame all of you if its wrong

That's the spirit. Phhh.
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:37 pm

Jefferson and Paul wrote:How exactly will a condemnation make any members return or make the region "less corrupt"? If anything it is attracting the wrong-crowd. If the member-nations you're describing are really as good-natured and honorable as you make them out to be then I doubt they'd want to be associated with a Condemned region. Perhaps you should be condemning the delegate and not the region itself?

Tryed it didnt work.If I Condem the region i want to help all nations there
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Postby Jefferson and Paul » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:40 pm

Winner12345 wrote:
Jefferson and Paul wrote:How exactly will a condemnation make any members return or make the region "less corrupt"? If anything it is attracting the wrong-crowd. If the member-nations you're describing are really as good-natured and honorable as you make them out to be then I doubt they'd want to be associated with a Condemned region. Perhaps you should be condemning the delegate and not the region itself?

Tryed it didnt work.If I Condem the region i want to help all nations there


I don't see how that would help, but if you're really austere about this I'd reccomend taking out "at my ban" and replacing it with "over a span of (time here) the regional population declined from 301 to 236"
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Postby Skyrim Diplomacy » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:41 pm

Winner12345 wrote:Tryed it didnt work.If I Condem the region i want to help all nations there

All a condemnation does is give the region in question a badge. You can't give them sanctions, force them to be nice, etc.
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Postby Jefferson and Paul » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:43 pm

Skyrim Diplomacy wrote:
Winner12345 wrote:Tryed it didnt work.If I Condem the region i want to help all nations there

All a condemnation does is give the region in question a badge. You can't give them sanctions, force them to be nice, etc.


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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:45 pm

Jefferson and Paul wrote:
Winner12345 wrote:Tryed it didnt work.If I Condem the region i want to help all nations there


I don't see how that would help, but if you're really austere about this I'd reccomend taking out "at my ban" and replacing it with "over a span of (time here) the regional population declined from 301 to 236"

Problem it doesn`t show I was banned
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:47 pm

Mabye "Following my ban Capitalist Paradise`s amount of nations declined from 301 nations to 236 nations"
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Postby Skyrim Diplomacy » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:48 pm

Winner12345 wrote:Mabye "Following my ban Capitalist Paradise`s amount of nations declined from 301 nations to 236 nations"

You can't use personal pronouns, i.e. my.
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Postby Winner12345 » Mon Jun 18, 2012 2:49 pm

So if I put my countrys name instead of my is it fine
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