My SC proposal draft code

[Dhaki wa Hakim]

Reply kindly if you have got improvements, and make sure it complies with the basics

A Resolution to Condemn The Black Hawks
The Security Council,

Recognizing the role of organized groups in influencing regional stability within the NationStates world,

Concerned by patterns of coordinated activity attributed to The Black Hawks involving repeated incursions into sovereign regions and actions that disrupt established regional governance,

Noting that such coordinated disruptions can reduce opportunities for stable regional development and undermine the ability of native nations to maintain independent governance structures,

Emphasizing the importance of respecting regional sovereignty and preserving the integrity of established communities within the NationStates world,

Affirming that sustained patterns of destabilizing activity are contrary to the principles of stable and self-determined regional governance,

Hereby condemns The Black Hawks for engaging in repeated coordinated actions that undermine regional stability and sovereignty within the NationStates world.

[Soloviev]

Regardless of the quality of the draft condemning the Black Hawks is dead on arrival because it's not something that's politically tennable right now and you won't get the necessary WA blocs to vote for it.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Absolute crap and that’s being nice about it.

You have zero idea of how to write an SC proposal - maybe read the Guide to the SC.

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[Dhaki wa Hakim]

Regardless of the quality of the draft condemning the Black Hawks is dead on arrival because it's not something that's politically tennable right now and you won't get the necessary WA blocs to vote for it.

Thank you for the recommendation

[Dhaki wa Hakim]

Absolute crap and that’s being nice about it.

You have zero idea of how to write an SC proposal - maybe read the Guide to the SC.

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I did say something about being kind, not bullying it

[The Orwell Society]

Absolute crap and that’s being nice about it.

You have zero idea of how to write an SC proposal - maybe read the Guide to the SC.

viewtopic.php?p=40395560#p40395560

I did say something about being kind, not bullying it

welcome to the festering snakepit

I’d recommend reading up on some current and past drafts/resolutions to get an idea of what flies around here, because this ain’t it.

[Chum Chum]

We do not give badges, including condemnations, to raiders.

[Bhang Bhang Duc]

Absolute crap and that’s being nice about it.

You have zero idea of how to write an SC proposal - maybe read the Guide to the SC.

viewtopic.php?p=40395560#p40395560

I did say something about being kind, not bullying it

If you can’t stand the heat stay out of the kitchen.

There is nothing to be kind about. It’s obvious you had done zero research on a) the nominated region and b) the current politics of Gameplay, never mind the standards expected of a C&C.

If you’re going to serve up tripe expect to get harsh criticism.

Edit: here’s the unspoilered plain text version.

A Resolution to Condemn The Black Hawks
The Security Council,

Recognizing the role of organized groups in influencing regional stability within the NationStates world,

Concerned by patterns of coordinated activity attributed to The Black Hawks involving repeated incursions into sovereign regions and actions that disrupt established regional governance,

Noting that such coordinated disruptions can reduce opportunities for stable regional development and undermine the ability of native nations to maintain independent governance structures,

Emphasizing the importance of respecting regional sovereignty and preserving the integrity of established communities within the NationStates world,

Affirming that sustained patterns of destabilizing activity are contrary to the principles of stable and self-determined regional governance,

Hereby condemns The Black Hawks for engaging in repeated coordinated actions that undermine regional stability and sovereignty within the NationStates world.

Also four AI detectors said that this was AI generated, 89 - 100% certainty. So not even your own rubbish.

[Dhaki wa Hakim]

I did say something about being kind, not bullying it

If you can’t stand the heat stay out of the kitchen.

There is nothing to be kind about. It’s obvious you had done zero research on a) the nominated region and b) the current politics of Gameplay, never mind the standards expected of a C&C.

If you’re going to serve up tripe expect to get harsh criticism.

Edit: here’s the unspoilered plain text version.

A Resolution to Condemn The Black Hawks
The Security Council,

Recognizing the role of organized groups in influencing regional stability within the NationStates world,

Concerned by patterns of coordinated activity attributed to The Black Hawks involving repeated incursions into sovereign regions and actions that disrupt established regional governance,

Noting that such coordinated disruptions can reduce opportunities for stable regional development and undermine the ability of native nations to maintain independent governance structures,

Emphasizing the importance of respecting regional sovereignty and preserving the integrity of established communities within the NationStates world,

Affirming that sustained patterns of destabilizing activity are contrary to the principles of stable and self-determined regional governance,

Hereby condemns The Black Hawks for engaging in repeated coordinated actions that undermine regional stability and sovereignty within the NationStates world.

Also four AI detectors said that this was AI generated, 89 - 100% certainty. So not even your own rubbish.

f you

[Adriatic Democratic Empire]

If you can’t stand the heat stay out of the kitchen.

There is nothing to be kind about. It’s obvious you had done zero research on a) the nominated region and b) the current politics of Gameplay, never mind the standards expected of a C&C.

If you’re going to serve up tripe expect to get harsh criticism.

Edit: here’s the unspoilered plain text version.

A Resolution to Condemn The Black Hawks
The Security Council,

Recognizing the role of organized groups in influencing regional stability within the NationStates world,

Concerned by patterns of coordinated activity attributed to The Black Hawks involving repeated incursions into sovereign regions and actions that disrupt established regional governance,

Noting that such coordinated disruptions can reduce opportunities for stable regional development and undermine the ability of native nations to maintain independent governance structures,

Emphasizing the importance of respecting regional sovereignty and preserving the integrity of established communities within the NationStates world,

Affirming that sustained patterns of destabilizing activity are contrary to the principles of stable and self-determined regional governance,

Hereby condemns The Black Hawks for engaging in repeated coordinated actions that undermine regional stability and sovereignty within the NationStates world.

Also four AI detectors said that this was AI generated, 89 - 100% certainty. So not even your own rubbish.

f you

and when he doesn't get his way he results to insults

maybe instead of getting mad I'd recommend you move that mouse over the link BBD sent you and go read how to make a proper proposal

[Reploid Productions]

:mad: f you

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