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[ON HOLD] Commend Funkadelia

Postby The North Polish Union » Sun Aug 20, 2017 3:22 pm

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NOTING that Funkadelia is currently the sitting World Assembly Delegate of Lazarus and has acted as Lazarus' WA Delegate on multiple occasions dating back over a period of 3 years, as well as having assisted in maintaining the security of that region on a number of distinct occasions;

APPLAUDING Funkadelia's actions in the Lazarene Underground State, which ultimately restored Lazarus' rightful government after a 2015 coup by Stujenske;

ALSO APPLAUDING Funkadelia's timely response in July 2017 to an attempted overthrow of Lazarus' government and the removal of those rebelling elements from the Lazarene government;

GRATEFUL for Funkadelia's continued dedication to the oldest and most respected members of the Lazarene community during their current term of office, including the choice of Killer Kitty (a nation which was commended by this body as Evil Wolf in S.C. Res. Nr. 169) as a high-ranking officer in the government;

AFFIRMS Funkadelia's efforts to maintain high levels of activity in Lazarus, which include the creation of the Undead Dominion of Lazarus and its accompanying governmental and constitutional framework;

NOTING that in addition to serving Lazarus, Funkadelia has made significant contributions to the legislation of this august body through the authorship of two Security Council Resolutions, S.C. Res. Nr. 161 and S.C. Res. Nr. 182;

COGNIZANT that Funkadelia has also served the international community of regions through membership in the leadership of the now-defunct Founderless Regions Alliance (FRA), an interregional defender organization of which they were the last Chancellor;

PLEASED by Funkadelia's significant contributions to Taijitu, having variously served that region since 2012 as a Cabinet Member, World Assembly Delegate, Senator, and Citizen-Diplomat;

BELIEVING that nations which serve both their varied regional communities and the wider global community in such a way merit international recognition;

THIS BODY does hereby Commend Funkadelia.

Description: The Security Council,

NOTING that Funkadelia is currently the sitting World Assembly Delegate of Lazarus;

FURTHER NOTING that Funkadelia has acted as Lazarus' WA Delegate on multiple occasions dating back over a period of 3 years, and has assisted in maintaining the security of that region on a number of distinct occasions;

APPLAUDING Funkadelia's actions in the Lazarene Underground State, which ultimately restored Lazarus' rightful government after a 2015 coup by Stujenske;

ALSO APPLAUDING Funkadelia's timely response in July 2017 to an attempted overthrow of Lazarus' government and the removal of those rebelling elements from the Lazarene government;

GRATEFUL for Funkadelia's continued dedication to the oldest and most respected members of the Lazarene community during his current term of office, including the choice of Killer Kitty (a nation which was commended by this body as Evil Wolf in S.C. Res. № 169) as a high-ranking officer in his government;

AFFIRMS Funkadelia's efforts to maintain high levels of activity in Lazarus, which include the creation of the Undead Dominion of Lazarus and its accompanying governmental and constitutional framework;

NOTING that in addition to serving Lazarus, Funkadelia has made significant contributions to the legislation of this august body through the authorship of two Security Council Resolutions, S.C. Res. № 161 and S.C. Res. № 182;

COGNIZANT that Funkadelia has also served the international community of regions through membership in the leadership of the now-defunct Founderless Regions Alliance (FRA), an interregional defender organization of which they were the last Chancellor;

BELIEVING that nations which serve both their regional communities and the wider global community in such a way merit international recognition;

THIS BODY does hereby Commend Funkadelia.

Description: The Security Council,

NOTING that Funkadelia is currently the sitting World Assembly Delegate of Lazarus;

FURTHER NOTING that Funkadelia has acted as Lazarus' WA Delegate on multiple occasions dating back over a period of 3 years, and has assisted in maintaining the security of that region on a number of distinct occasions;

APPLAUDING Funkadelia's actions in the Lazarene Underground State, which ultimately restored Lazarus' rightful government after a 2015 coup by Stujenske;

ALSO APPLAUDING Funkadelia's timely response in July 2017 to an attempted overthrow of Lazarus' government and the removal of those rebelling elements from the Lazarene government;

GRATEFUL for Funkadelia's continued dedication to the oldest and most respected members of the Lazarene community during his current term of office, including the choice of Killer Kitty (a nation which was commended by this body as Evil Wolf in S.C. Res. № 169) as a high-ranking officer in his government;

AFFIRMS Funkadelia's efforts to maintain high levels of activity in Lazarus, which include the creation of the Undead Dominion of Lazarus and its accompanying governmental and constitutional framework;

NOTING that in addition to serving Lazarus, Funkadelia has made significant contributions to the legislation of this august body through the authorship of two Security Council Resolutions, S.C. Res. № 161 and S.C. Res. № 182;

BELIEVING that nations which serve both their varied regional communities and the wider global community in such a way merit international recognition;

THIS BODY does hereby Commend Funkadelia.

Constructive criticism is welcome. If there's anything I left out by accident let me know.

EDIT: Fixed an R4 violation
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Postby Cormactopia Prime » Sun Aug 20, 2017 6:29 pm

Glorious. Full support.

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Postby Aclion » Sun Aug 20, 2017 6:37 pm

Leaving aside that this is probobly a joke; what separates him from the dozens of other delegates with a few resolutions under their belts? As it is, even if I was totally ignorant of goings on in Lazarus I still would consider this an undeserved commendation.
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Postby Spontania » Sun Aug 20, 2017 6:46 pm

For many reasons, it doesn't seem this will pan out well; the number one reason being the people who oppose his actions. This being said, it is not the only reason. As it stands, many people will oppose this commendation and more than likely try to repeal it the day it passes, if it passes. This is an iffy subject and heavy bias can be applied to both sides, so until the current situation with Lazarus and other actions are explained, no support from here.
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Postby RiderSyl » Sun Aug 20, 2017 6:51 pm

I think the timing is off. My advice is to wait half a year, then revisit this. It'll have a greater chance of passing then.
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Postby Ikania » Sun Aug 20, 2017 6:54 pm

He's just as worth of a condemnation in the eyes of his own region. The last time this kind of thing went down in Lazarus, the perpetrators were readily condemned. I question the lack of such unanimous opposition this time around...
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Postby The Sygian » Sun Aug 20, 2017 8:06 pm

Ikania wrote:He's just as worth of a condemnation in the eyes of his own region. The last time this kind of thing went down in Lazarus, the perpetrators were readily condemned. I question the lack of such unanimous opposition this time around...

Let me guess... "imported votes" ???
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Postby Cormactopia Prime » Sun Aug 20, 2017 8:09 pm

Ikania wrote:I question the lack of such unanimous opposition this time around...

It could have something to do with virtually the whole world supporting Lazarus against the NLO the first time around, only to have Lazarus revert to being hostile to everyone but defender regions afterward. Just as hostile as it had been before, if not even more hostile. Why go that route again?

Tying this back into Funkadelia and this proposal, it could also have something to do with Funkadelia and Stujenske being two very different people. Funkadelia has contributed more to Lazarus than nearly anyone, and has only ever fought to do right by Lazarus. He isn't Stujenske.

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Postby Fauxia » Sun Aug 20, 2017 8:26 pm

Hahahahaha. No. No. No. Absolutely not. No. Just no. Of all the delegates of the GCRs, this is the least worthy of a commendation. A condemnation would be much more appropriate.
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Postby The North Polish Union » Sun Aug 20, 2017 8:55 pm

Aclion wrote:Leaving aside that this is probobly a joke; what separates him from the dozens of other delegates with a few resolutions under their belts? As it is, even if I was totally ignorant of goings on in Lazarus I still would consider this an undeserved commendation.

This is not a joke. A number of GCR WADs have been commended solely for their work in that GCR in addition to writing WA resolutions. For example, S.C. Res. № 51 - "Commend Fudgetopia," S.C. Res. № 151 - "Commend McMasterdonia," and to a lesser extent S.C. Res. № 128 - "Commend Harmoneia," which admitedly also acknowledges Harmoneia's contributions to non-GCR regions.

Spontania wrote:For many reasons, it doesn't seem this will pan out well; the number one reason being the people who oppose his actions. This being said, it is not the only reason. As it stands, many people will oppose this commendation and more than likely try to repeal it the day it passes, if it passes. This is an iffy subject and heavy bias can be applied to both sides, so until the current situation with Lazarus and other actions are explained, no support from here.
Ridersyl wrote:I think the timing is off. My advice is to wait half a year, then revisit this. It'll have a greater chance of passing then.

You seem to have the same concern so I'll address this together. On the whole I think Funk is deserving of commendation. If this fails now, I'll probably redraft and resubmit this in several months, but there's no need to not try now.
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Postby Frattastan II » Mon Aug 21, 2017 8:02 am

The North Polish Union wrote:
AFFIRMS Funkadelia's efforts to maintain high levels of activity in Lazarus, which include the creation of the Undead Dominion of Lazarus and its accompanying governmental and constitutional framework


One usually awaits to see whether something is successful at promoting activity or leaves a lasting impact before adding it to a Commendation. A two-week old theme change is hardly on par with other contributions.

lol at the line about "dedication to the oldest and most respected members of the Lazarene community".
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Postby Kylia Quilor » Mon Aug 21, 2017 8:13 am

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Postby The North Polish Union » Mon Aug 21, 2017 9:39 am

Frattastan II wrote:
The North Polish Union wrote:


One usually awaits to see whether something is successful at promoting activity or leaves a lasting impact before adding it to a Commendation. A two-week old theme change is hardly on par with other contributions.

lol at the line about "dedication to the oldest and most respected members of the Lazarene community".

That clause is specifically written in such a way that it affirms Funk's effort without outright saying whether or not those efforts are/will be/have been successful
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Postby Consular » Mon Aug 21, 2017 9:41 am

I'd probably vote yes just because I'd enjoy the drama this would create.

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Postby The North Polish Union » Mon Aug 21, 2017 10:01 am

Consular wrote:I'd probably vote yes just because I'd enjoy the drama this would create.

Your love of drama is greatly appreciated :D
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Postby The North Polish Union » Mon Aug 21, 2017 10:24 am

Also, although I personally believe that participation in what was the FRA should be a condemnable offense rather than a commendable action, the SC has disagreed with me on this multiple times, and I'm wondering if including a clause or two about Funk's actions in the FRA would (1) strengthen this proposal and (2) make it more appealing to voters who don't care that some guy was and is the Delegate of a sinker.

Thoughts?
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The yoshin empire wrote:Grouping russians with slavs is like grouping germans with french , the two are so culturally different.

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Postby Cormactopia Prime » Mon Aug 21, 2017 10:27 am

The North Polish Union wrote:Also, although I personally believe that participation in what was the FRA should be a condemnable offense rather than a commendable action, the SC has disagreed with me on this multiple times, and I'm wondering if including a clause or two about Funk's actions in the FRA would (1) strengthen this proposal and (2) make it more appealing to voters who don't care that some guy was and is the Delegate of a sinker.

Thoughts?

Yes. Yes please.

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Postby The North Polish Union » Mon Aug 21, 2017 1:09 pm

Cormactopia Prime wrote:
The North Polish Union wrote:Also, although I personally believe that participation in what was the FRA should be a condemnable offense rather than a commendable action, the SC has disagreed with me on this multiple times, and I'm wondering if including a clause or two about Funk's actions in the FRA would (1) strengthen this proposal and (2) make it more appealing to voters who don't care that some guy was and is the Delegate of a sinker.

Thoughts?

Yes. Yes please.

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The yoshin empire wrote:Grouping russians with slavs is like grouping germans with french , the two are so culturally different.

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Postby Fauxia » Mon Aug 21, 2017 1:24 pm

Cormactopia Prime wrote:
The North Polish Union wrote:Also, although I personally believe that participation in what was the FRA should be a condemnable offense rather than a commendable action, the SC has disagreed with me on this multiple times, and I'm wondering if including a clause or two about Funk's actions in the FRA would (1) strengthen this proposal and (2) make it more appealing to voters who don't care that some guy was and is the Delegate of a sinker.

Thoughts?

Yes. Yes please.
Would it though? Defenders are the ones more likely to vote against this condemnation. But why do I care, I'm against anyway
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Postby The North Polish Union » Tue Aug 22, 2017 2:39 pm

Updated again to include Funk's contributions to Taijitu
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Postby The Grene Knyght » Tue Aug 22, 2017 2:52 pm

This looks extremely controversial
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Postby The North Polish Union » Wed Aug 23, 2017 9:49 am

I'm thinking I'll probably submit this in the next day or two unless there are any necessary major changes that people haven't mentioned yet.
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Postby Consular » Wed Aug 23, 2017 9:52 am

I didn't find any grammar or spelling issues.

My only stylistic comment would be that the first clause is unnecessary, and if you think it's relevant could be incorporated in the second clause.

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Postby The North Polish Union » Wed Aug 23, 2017 10:40 am

Consular wrote:I didn't find any grammar or spelling issues.

My only stylistic comment would be that the first clause is unnecessary, and if you think it's relevant could be incorporated in the second clause.

Probably a good call. I've made the change
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Petrovsegratsk wrote:NPU, I know your clearly a Polish nationalist, but wtf is up with your obssession with resurrecting the Polish-Lithuanian Commonwealth?
The yoshin empire wrote:Grouping russians with slavs is like grouping germans with french , the two are so culturally different.

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