Honest Opinions on my National Factbook?

[Orlesian States]

Orlesian State National Factbook

I'm unsure of where to post this so I hope it's right, I am very new to this whole thing and will lengthen some sections, primarily the later half of my Factbook.

Also, if anyone has any templates (for military especially), I would be happy to receive them!

[Olwe]

It’s pretty good. You kept it concise enough to remain interesting all the way through, but made it comprehensive enough that you probably won’t need to do multiple factbook entries like I did. The only note I really have is that the spelling of your nation’s name does not appear to be consistent throughout the document.

[Orlesian States]

It’s pretty good. You kept it concise enough to remain interesting all the way through, but made it comprehensive enough that you probably won’t need to do multiple factbook entries like I did. The only note I really have is that the spelling of your nation’s name does not appear to be consistent throughout the document.

Ah, I wasn't sure about that, it's cause it's never autocorrected but thank you very very much for your feedback! It's so kind and reassuring to hear that it's both concise and interesting, I was hoping I didn't run off too much..

[Olwe]

It’s pretty good. You kept it concise enough to remain interesting all the way through, but made it comprehensive enough that you probably won’t need to do multiple factbook entries like I did. The only note I really have is that the spelling of your nation’s name does not appear to be consistent throughout the document.

Ah, I wasn't sure about that, it's cause it's never autocorrected but thank you very very much for your feedback! It's so kind and reassuring to hear that it's both concise and interesting, I was hoping I didn't run off too much..

No, you didn’t run off too much.