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by Joushiki Nante Iranai » Sat Sep 29, 2018 11:32 pm
by A m e n r i a » Sun Sep 30, 2018 6:00 am
by Joushiki Nante Iranai » Sun Sep 30, 2018 6:03 am
A m e n r i a wrote:Calm down, mate, Tally is probably asleep or something.
by A m e n r i a » Sun Sep 30, 2018 6:10 am
by Taledonia » Mon Oct 01, 2018 7:50 am
by Yan Dynasty » Tue Oct 02, 2018 1:00 am
by A m e n r i a » Tue Oct 02, 2018 6:02 am
by Taledonia » Tue Oct 02, 2018 12:10 pm
Yan Dynasty wrote:Snip
by Yan Dynasty » Tue Oct 02, 2018 12:58 pm
Taledonia wrote:Yan Dynasty wrote:Snip
Couple comments:
Primary Races:
What are Cranes? Do you have sentient birds? Same with Tigras. Are they tiger-people?
Area Claimed:
Bit confused on why you're saying you claim Meridia(the whole world), and keep referencing Akamyir. What is Akamyir?
As for your questions:
Core/capital region is where it's generally assumed your people are from. This is where it all began, and from where your people spread out to all other lands. Alternatively, it is the most important area you control. In your case, I'd say it's probably where the Imperial capital is.
You can call territories whatever you'd like, but they will always be referred to by their listed names by outsiders. Unless you teach them to call them otherwise. For example, if some Taledonians showed up on your shores, we'd still refer to it as the Great Plain, regardless of what you call it in your primitive tongue
STEM levels, as Amenria stated, can be raised every year, to a maximum of 5 extra points.
by Yan Dynasty » Tue Oct 02, 2018 12:59 pm
A m e n r i a wrote:Yaaay a China has arrived!
Anyways, it's fine to rename places. I renamed all my provinces, just look at the wiki. Also, is it okay if I change all reference to the "Dragon Empire" as your nation? I think we discussed it before, but I'm not sure.
Lastly, your STEM goes up every year.
by A m e n r i a » Wed Oct 03, 2018 5:07 am
Yan Dynasty wrote:A m e n r i a wrote:Yaaay a China has arrived!
Anyways, it's fine to rename places. I renamed all my provinces, just look at the wiki. Also, is it okay if I change all reference to the "Dragon Empire" as your nation? I think we discussed it before, but I'm not sure.
Lastly, your STEM goes up every year.
I'm excited to participate.
That's fine.
by Taledonia » Wed Oct 03, 2018 7:20 am
Yan Dynasty wrote:Taledonia wrote:
Couple comments:
Primary Races:
What are Cranes? Do you have sentient birds? Same with Tigras. Are they tiger-people?
Area Claimed:
Bit confused on why you're saying you claim Meridia(the whole world), and keep referencing Akamyir. What is Akamyir?
As for your questions:
Core/capital region is where it's generally assumed your people are from. This is where it all began, and from where your people spread out to all other lands. Alternatively, it is the most important area you control. In your case, I'd say it's probably where the Imperial capital is.
You can call territories whatever you'd like, but they will always be referred to by their listed names by outsiders. Unless you teach them to call them otherwise. For example, if some Taledonians showed up on your shores, we'd still refer to it as the Great Plain, regardless of what you call it in your primitive tongue
STEM levels, as Amenria stated, can be raised every year, to a maximum of 5 extra points.
Yeah. Cranes and Tigra's are non-human species. Like you said, sentient birds and tigers.
I figured that's what a core region was, but I just wanted to be sure.
I wasn't claiming the whole world. It's just the world map with Akamyir and Yan included. I don't know if they withdrew their claim, but Akamyir was Ralnis' nation located to the west of the Yan Dynasty. I put it on the map since the political map on the Meridia website wasn't fully up-to-date. Same with the Alakhai map.
By "every year", do you mean an in-game year or an IRL year?
by Yan Dynasty » Wed Oct 03, 2018 8:02 am
Taledonia wrote:Yan Dynasty wrote:Yeah. Cranes and Tigra's are non-human species. Like you said, sentient birds and tigers.
I figured that's what a core region was, but I just wanted to be sure.
I wasn't claiming the whole world. It's just the world map with Akamyir and Yan included. I don't know if they withdrew their claim, but Akamyir was Ralnis' nation located to the west of the Yan Dynasty. I put it on the map since the political map on the Meridia website wasn't fully up-to-date. Same with the Alakhai map.
By "every year", do you mean an in-game year or an IRL year?
Embarrassing that I forgot who Ralnis was. Mainly because I picture his flag and actual name, rather than what he's signed up as. Easier to remember the IC names of those who I've had interactions with so far.
Anyways, you're approved.
by Joushiki Nante Iranai » Wed Oct 03, 2018 10:41 am
Joushiki Nante Iranai wrote:Name of Nation: Lytrin (Composed of the Human words "Light" and "Ruin" - meaning a legacy of the Shadow)
Primary Race(s): Entwined People (Collective), Entwined (Singular/Plural) - a variation of the Elves, with light skin (think halfway between the Elves and Aventi on the People Page)
Society: 3 - Composed of a series of cities known as 'Hiron' (plural is 'Hirona'), each functions almost completely independently of each other (almost like separate nations) and each house (aka 'tislan', plural 'tislana') is within a large tree (think redwood but slightly smaller and 4-5 times wider). Matriarchal society. Each province is an alliance of city-states.
Technology: 2 - Technology is limited and the sea is unheard of... as of now.
Economy: 4 - Everyone has everything they need to live in relative comfort, but only that.
Magic: 5 - Magic is almost a necessity, and non-magics are frowned upon. Some extreme Entwined kill non-magics at birth.
Area Claimed: Noreia - 15 and Noreia - 16
Brief History:
Originally, the Entwined People were humans. That was before the Shadow. They were tortured, experimented on, given drugs, as well as given more... spiritual treatment. Rumour had it the Shadow wanted to create a perfect species. Every time was different, until the first Entwined was... "created". It was around 350 years into the darkness. 9 more were "created" in succession before the methods suddenly changed again. All of the First Ten were female, according to lore, and this has never been questioned (You can probably understand what I'm trying to say without being too explicit). The ten Entwined, traumatised, were shunned by the humans, and came together to form the first village, which they named "Hiron" - which became the first word of the Entwined language.
Centuries later, the legacy of the First Ten had been continued, and the Entwined People had their own language, culture, and so on. While the Shadow had ignored them initially (as the Entwined People were the results of their own experiments), however, they started taking Entwined as slaves, or to be tortured or experimented on - never to be seen again. Division and distrust grew, and then the Shadow launched a giant offensive. Hiron was ruined, the Entwined People were scattered, and many were captured. Those that escaped formed new settlements, but those that grew too large were attacked by the Shadow yet again. The settlements became towns, and when the Shadow disappeared, they grew even further into rivalling city states. Today, the cities are operating under fragile alliances, attempting to put back together a fractured civilisation.
by Taledonia » Wed Oct 03, 2018 11:37 am
Joushiki Nante Iranai wrote:Joushiki Nante Iranai wrote:Name of Nation: Lytrin (Composed of the Human words "Light" and "Ruin" - meaning a legacy of the Shadow)
Primary Race(s): Entwined People (Collective), Entwined (Singular/Plural) - a variation of the Elves, with light skin (think halfway between the Elves and Aventi on the People Page)
Society: 3 - Composed of a series of cities known as 'Hiron' (plural is 'Hirona'), each functions almost completely independently of each other (almost like separate nations) and each house (aka 'tislan', plural 'tislana') is within a large tree (think redwood but slightly smaller and 4-5 times wider). Matriarchal society. Each province is an alliance of city-states.
Technology: 2 - Technology is limited and the sea is unheard of... as of now.
Economy: 4 - Everyone has everything they need to live in relative comfort, but only that.
Magic: 5 - Magic is almost a necessity, and non-magics are frowned upon. Some extreme Entwined kill non-magics at birth.
Area Claimed: Noreia - 15 and Noreia - 16
Brief History:
Originally, the Entwined People were humans. That was before the Shadow. They were tortured, experimented on, given drugs, as well as given more... spiritual treatment. Rumour had it the Shadow wanted to create a perfect species. Every time was different, until the first Entwined was... "created". It was around 350 years into the darkness. 9 more were "created" in succession before the methods suddenly changed again. All of the First Ten were female, according to lore, and this has never been questioned (You can probably understand what I'm trying to say without being too explicit). The ten Entwined, traumatised, were shunned by the humans, and came together to form the first village, which they named "Hiron" - which became the first word of the Entwined language.
Centuries later, the legacy of the First Ten had been continued, and the Entwined People had their own language, culture, and so on. While the Shadow had ignored them initially (as the Entwined People were the results of their own experiments), however, they started taking Entwined as slaves, or to be tortured or experimented on - never to be seen again. Division and distrust grew, and then the Shadow launched a giant offensive. Hiron was ruined, the Entwined People were scattered, and many were captured. Those that escaped formed new settlements, but those that grew too large were attacked by the Shadow yet again. The settlements became towns, and when the Shadow disappeared, they grew even further into rivalling city states. Today, the cities are operating under fragile alliances, attempting to put back together a fractured civilisation.
Just realised I never got accepted. Are there any problems?
by Joushiki Nante Iranai » Thu Oct 04, 2018 7:59 am
by Joushiki Nante Iranai » Thu Oct 04, 2018 8:55 am
(Note: All speech is translated)
[size=200][u][b][color=#00A20E]Green[/color] Under [color=#46D6FF]Blue[/b][/u][/color][/size]
[b][i]37th of Gildas, 1066, 1st Era[/b]
"OUT, I said. OUT!"
It was the last straw. She had been an embarrassment to the whole city, and couldn't achieve anything in life that wouldn't be one too. She had been allowed to stay far too long as it was - the other cities' princesses had warned about this.
As the lost cause ran through the dirt tracks, the people celebrated - they could get back to their everyday life without a disaster every few hours. They could finish recovering from the Shadow, which had destroyed everyone - even if it had created them. They could live peacefully.
In retrospect, it was obvious - but back then, nobody had realised what was going to happen. Nobody knew was how much of an impact this would have on the lives of them and their children.
She set out towards the sea.[/i]
This is meant to be an almost sandbox-type roleplay, set on Noreia-13, in Meridia. It marks first the journey of a young Entwined female westwards, towards the sea, and what she does afterwards. Eventually, she will return (reaching the first city she arrives at at approximately the start of the 2nd Era), and this RP will last for approximately 3.6 IC years. There will be a sequel, covering the spread of news and the colonisation of Noreia-13.
by Taledonia » Thu Oct 04, 2018 12:02 pm
by Joushiki Nante Iranai » Fri Oct 05, 2018 5:36 am
Taledonia wrote:Only thing I see that's wrong is your dates; unless this is meant as a historical RP, rather than a current events one. We're in the 2nd Era, you see, but if this is indeed set in the past, all the more power to you.
As another note, it's a bit short. Perhaps you can add more. Setting, character descriptions and motivations, etc. Give us a reason to join by laying out what it is you're doing, and what the point of the RP is.
by A m e n r i a » Sun Oct 07, 2018 7:24 am
by A m e n r i a » Tue Oct 09, 2018 5:20 pm
by A m e n r i a » Wed Oct 10, 2018 5:42 am
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