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by The Pacifican Islands » Sun Oct 08, 2017 11:00 pm

by North Arkana » Sun Oct 08, 2017 11:05 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:https://www.nationstates.net/nation=the_pacifican_islands/detail=factbook/id=888586
Ok, so I've spent the past month kitbashing shipbucket models on my stupid phone and I've come up with something I think is reasonable. Can you guys tear into this for me please? Thanks!

by The Pacifican Islands » Sun Oct 08, 2017 11:05 pm
North Arkana wrote:The Pacifican Islands wrote:https://www.nationstates.net/nation=the_pacifican_islands/detail=factbook/id=888586
Ok, so I've spent the past month kitbashing shipbucket models on my stupid phone and I've come up with something I think is reasonable. Can you guys tear into this for me please? Thanks!
I'm a bit too distracted with all the "it's the bestest ever" marketing speak.

by Austria-Bohemia-Hungary » Sun Oct 08, 2017 11:10 pm

by The Akasha Colony » Mon Oct 09, 2017 12:03 am
The Pacifican Islands wrote:https://www.nationstates.net/nation=the_pacifican_islands/detail=factbook/id=888586
Ok, so I've spent the past month kitbashing shipbucket models on my stupid phone and I've come up with something I think is reasonable. Can you guys tear into this for me please? Thanks!

by Austrasien » Mon Oct 09, 2017 12:38 am
The Pacifican Islands wrote:https://www.nationstates.net/nation=the_pacifican_islands/detail=factbook/id=888586
Ok, so I've spent the past month kitbashing shipbucket models on my stupid phone and I've come up with something I think is reasonable. Can you guys tear into this for me please? Thanks!
The PVLS is armed exclusively with CRKV-7 (Close Range Kill Vehicle) Sparrow missiles. Despite its name and form, the CRKV-7 shares more similarities with the Russian Tor/Kinzhal system than the ESSM missile it is commonly compared to
The MPKV-3 Longbow long range missiles are the dedicated area defence missiles of the navy. The MPKV-3 has a range of over 500km, one of the longest in the world. The missile can also intercept MRBMs/IRBMs, such as the DF-21, in their terminal stage. The impressive range and capability of the MPKV-3 stems from its original design as an ABM, but was repurposed and modified to provide a different role. The missile consists of three stages, a large solid first stage, which propels it to its speed of Mach 5, a dual thrust solid sustainer rocket system and a smaller terminal stage, which maneuvers the payload and increases the speed to Mach 5.5. The MPKV-3 uses the eponymous MPKV (Multiple Projectile Kill Vehicle) system. It consists of a group of small, unguided tungsten kill vehicles that deploy in a consistent conical shape. Once the radar detects the missiles and determines to use the MPKV-3, the information is passed on to the Sea Cobra system, which then groups the enemy missiles together and assigns interceptors to destroy that group. When the MPKV-3 reaches its target, just prior to final stage separation, it coordinates with other missiles for an optimum release angle to destroy the largest amount of missiles. Because of this technology, the MPKV-3 has the unique ability take out more than one missile at a single time with a single launch.
With the standard module, the main anti ship armament of the Surrey class is in its two four anti ship missile canister launchers. The launchers are placed in front of the VLS system, and are retracted into the hull when not in use to decrease RCS. Each missile launcher holds four ENT/SSCM (Enhanced Nautical Tactical/Strategic Strike Cruise Missile) missiles, which are the most advanced missiles in the Pacifican Military. It has a range of anything from 3-3100 km, and can travel at 0.8 Mach to over Mach 2. The exact specifications of the ENT/SSCM are highly classified but it is confirmed to be sea skimming and use stealth technology, with an assortment of warheads, one of which is nuclear. The ENT/SSCM is also reported to use an active radar, optical and thermal guidance system, allowing it to detect threats, even pop-up threats, and respond to them autonomously. The ENT/SSCM uses organic area of uncertainty reduction systems which allow it to classify zones of danger and electronically classify vessels and targets from a distance. The missiles also pack an electronic protective measures (EPM) suite. The EPM suite can work with the guidance systems to distinguish and detect jamming and to cancel out the signal. The suite also has extreme frequency agility, which allows it to jump through frequencies within fractions of a millisecond, which foils most ECM systems, as they cannot predict and detect which frequency the missile is using, and can divert the missile to use up to a dozen different frequencies at the same time, which reduces the power of the jammer immensely. In the case where the jamming cannot be overcome, the suite will switch over navigation to a separate system, to completely mitigate the problem of jamming. The missiles are loaded with a reaction control system with 8 rocket nozzles (three at the rear) allowing for faster control and movement during its high speed terminal phase. Each missile also packs a single flare each and a single load of chaff, in hopes of diverting point defense missiles. The ENT/SSCM also scans known maps of the area of its operation, allowing it to use natural barriers like islands to shield it from detection. After firing, the ENT/SSCM soars to a high altitude, using its stealthy form to hide from long range enemy radar. From there, it follows a pre planned route and a satellite weapons datalink. Once it reaches a distance about 350 to 400km from the target, it dives to sea skimming level and disconnects its datalink. At this point, the missile's autonomous systems are switched on, which uses the missile's radar, sensors and relevant maps to calculate the best possible route, using parameters such as fastest transit speed, lowest chance of detection or known threats. This feature is most useful in littoral zones in which the nation is composed of, as the missile can weave around islands and small obstacles. Once it reaches the target zone, the missile begins to accelerate to its terminal speed of Mach 2. When the missile is eventually detected, it sends a message which notifies command that it is entering its attack. At this point in time, the missile engages its reaction control system and conducts erratic movements to disperse missile fire. As the missile closes in to a distance of 20km, three small rocket engines mounted near the rear of the missile fire and propel the missile to a speed of Mach 3. Combined with a nuclear or a large conventional payload, one of these missiles alone could bypass through even the most advanced missile defence systems and destroy even the largest carriers.

by Martantaka » Mon Oct 09, 2017 6:26 am
Kassaran wrote:
Nevermind the grammar in the above sentence... what makes you think that battleships and 'superships' are a good idea?
Why do you have cruiser carriers and aircraft carriers, but not the obviously best type of carrier, a supercarrier?
Why do you have so many types of ship when you really might not need more than six or so classes of vessel?
Why do you have no fleet tenders?
Why in the name of the gods are you making a super submarine?
What in the fuck is a Battleship Carrier?
Do I even want to ask about the certain abomination that is a Megaship?

by Kassaran » Mon Oct 09, 2017 7:16 am
Martantaka wrote:1.super ship used for big battles only
2.Cruiser carrier carry 2 cruisers,super carrier is a prototype.....But never go to battle
3.i dunno
4.i dunno
5.supersubs are in progress to
6.battleship carrier........Never seen war
Megaship is a prototype and seen war once......But then never again
But hey it's 2048 for me rn!
Zarkenis Ultima wrote:Tristan noticed footsteps behind him and looked there, only to see Eric approaching and then pointing his sword at the girl. He just blinked a few times at this before speaking.
"Put that down, Mr. Eric." He said. "She's obviously not a chicken."

by The Pacifican Islands » Mon Oct 09, 2017 10:56 am

by Austria-Bohemia-Hungary » Mon Oct 09, 2017 11:01 am

by The Pacifican Islands » Mon Oct 09, 2017 2:20 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:Thanks for the feedback everyone! So the course of action is to:
- Remove modules
- Remove AEGIS
- Remove long range AAM
- Tweak other missiles
- Write in a neutral tone
- Write more about ASW
I've got another question. I'm envisioning this ship also operating in the dense litorrals in which my nation is composed of. Would a high dash speed be useful, and, would waterjets be more efficient?

by The Akasha Colony » Mon Oct 09, 2017 3:09 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:The Pacifican Islands wrote:Thanks for the feedback everyone! So the course of action is to:
- Remove modules
- Remove AEGIS
- Remove long range AAM
- Tweak other missiles
- Write in a neutral tone
- Write more about ASW
I've got another question. I'm envisioning this ship also operating in the dense litorrals in which my nation is composed of. Would a high dash speed be useful, and, would waterjets be more efficient?
https://www.nationstates.net/nation=the ... /id=888586
I've edited the factbook. Can you guys look over it again please? Thanks!
The missile is said to be operational in temperatures as low as -120 degrees celsius and as high as 160 degrees celsius and in any known weather pattern. The solid rocket motor system of the missile incorporates an aramid-filled ethylene propylene diene monomer insulator, a blast tube nozzle, dual concentric hydroxyl-terminated polyether (HTPE) propellant, igniter, a solid-state laser initiation system and a limited thrust vector control system.
The PVLS is armed exclusively with CRKV-7 (Close Range Kill Vehicle) Sparrow missiles. The CRKV-7 is designed to provide short range defense against both sea-skimming and diving anti-ship missiles. The CRKV-7 is claimed by the Pacifican Navy to have a reliability rate of a over 99.9% and a 96% intercept rate, which reportedly allows it to be fired as a 'one shot, one kill' missile. The CRKV-7 has a maximum range of over 60 km and has the ability to be quad packed in a VLS cell, increasing the number of missiles carried to 32. The CRKV-7 uses a multi-mode X-band radar and electro-optical seeker, which provides a threefold reduction in illumination time. The missile also has a secondary anti-surface role, which allows it to combat small surface targets such as corvettes efficiently from 50 km away with an intercept time of 45 seconds in crowded littoral spaces. This mode also allows the CRKV-7 to reportedly destroy surfaced submarines. The CRKV-7 is commonly compared to the ESSM, Kinzhal and Umkhonto missile systems.

by The Pacifican Islands » Mon Oct 09, 2017 3:33 pm
The Akasha Colony wrote:It's much cleaner now, and easier to read. But there are still a few awkwardly long paragraphs. I'm still not entirely sure most of the paragraph on the CRKV-7 is needed, given that its features are so similar to ESSM and it would be easier to just link someone to the article an ESSM instead, reserving the paragraph only to note the few places in which it differs. And this entire section is completely unnecessary:The missile is said to be operational in temperatures as low as -120 degrees celsius and as high as 160 degrees celsius and in any known weather pattern. The solid rocket motor system of the missile incorporates an aramid-filled ethylene propylene diene monomer insulator, a blast tube nozzle, dual concentric hydroxyl-terminated polyether (HTPE) propellant, igniter, a solid-state laser initiation system and a limited thrust vector control system.
In fact, the entire paragraph could be shortened:The PVLS is armed exclusively with CRKV-7 (Close Range Kill Vehicle) Sparrow missiles. The CRKV-7 is designed to provide short range defense against both sea-skimming and diving anti-ship missiles. The CRKV-7 is claimed by the Pacifican Navy to have a reliability rate of a over 99.9% and a 96% intercept rate, which reportedly allows it to be fired as a 'one shot, one kill' missile. The CRKV-7 has a maximum range of over 60 km and has the ability to be quad packed in a VLS cell, increasing the number of missiles carried to 32. The CRKV-7 uses a multi-mode X-band radar and electro-optical seeker, which provides a threefold reduction in illumination time. The missile also has a secondary anti-surface role, which allows it to combat small surface targets such as corvettes efficiently from 50 km away with an intercept time of 45 seconds in crowded littoral spaces. This mode also allows the CRKV-7 to reportedly destroy surfaced submarines. The CRKV-7 is commonly compared to the ESSM, Kinzhal and Umkhonto missile systems.
Which is fewer than five lines while still providing the important information a reader might be interested in. It could probably be shortened even further with a more comprehensive rewrite. Most of the information removed was either unnecessary (does a reader need to know the operational temperature range or the rocket motor's chemistry?) or repetitive (a missile that can intercept maneuvering targets is presumably also capable of defeating simpler things like precision glide bombs and diving missiles, this doesn't really need to be spelled out separately). If you want to go really in depth into the missile's workings, a separate entry is advisable.
The Akasha Colony wrote:Is "SHIELD" intentionally misspelled? It's also nitpicky but "Aegis" is not an acronym and isn't capitalized.
The Akasha Colony wrote:How large is the hangar? V-22 is a pretty huge aircraft, it's not impossible for a smaller combatant to carry it but it's not a normal feature. Even the large San Antonio-class can only fit a single V-22 in its hangar.
The Akasha Colony wrote:There's a part of me that really dislikes including the Rick Astley anecdote. This is a writing issue more than a technical one, although indiscriminately blasting the airwaves with a particular song is not a very effective jamming method against modern military communications anyway (and instead a very good way to get targeted and destroyed).

by The Akasha Colony » Mon Oct 09, 2017 4:48 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:Again, I envision this ship needing to go really fast. Would waterjets be a good idea?
I'm thinking of replacing the 76mm with a 127mm cannon. I think it'd give the ship a better way to bombard shores in litorral operations. Would that make sense?

by The Pacifican Islands » Mon Oct 09, 2017 7:20 pm


by United Vallerian Republic » Tue Oct 10, 2017 5:58 pm

by Martantaka » Thu Oct 12, 2017 8:30 am
Kassaran wrote:Martantaka wrote:1.super ship used for big battles only
2.Cruiser carrier carry 2 cruisers,super carrier is a prototype.....But never go to battle
3.i dunno
4.i dunno
5.supersubs are in progress to
6.battleship carrier........Never seen war
Megaship is a prototype and seen war once......But then never again
But hey it's 2048 for me rn!
1. Why do you have 'super ships'?
2. W-what, why would you do that to yourself?
3. Do some reduction.
4. Unless you're adding these.
5. Why do you need supersubs?
6. Is this similar to your cruiser carrier in that it carries battleships?
Why would you ever make a supership, nevermind a megaship... this is a bad idea all around. No matter what year it is, ships aren't getting bigger unless they absolutely need to. Notice how nobody even uses battleships anymore? The current trending isn't the future is going to have battleships and weird dreadnaught-wannabes. It's going to be full of utilitarian escort cruiser/destroyers supporting Supercarriers and all the while being supported by an extensive submarine fleet designed to be as minimalistic and quiet as possible, to avoid being detected for longer periods of time. that is, unless I've learned wrong from everyone else in this thread...

by The Pacifican Islands » Sun Oct 22, 2017 6:11 pm

by Laritaia » Sun Oct 22, 2017 6:14 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:Hi all!
Does it make sense to fit heavyweight torpedoes onto a frigate as an additional anti ship weapon or as a more effective anti submarine weapon? I'm guessing that it would be effective because many torpedoes can travel over 50km and at high speeds.

by North Arkana » Sun Oct 22, 2017 6:14 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:Hi all!
Does it make sense to fit heavyweight torpedoes onto a frigate as an additional anti ship weapon or as a more effective anti submarine weapon? I'm guessing that it would be effective because many torpedoes can travel over 50km and at high speeds.

by The Akasha Colony » Sun Oct 22, 2017 6:50 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:Hi all!
Does it make sense to fit heavyweight torpedoes onto a frigate as an additional anti ship weapon or as a more effective anti submarine weapon? I'm guessing that it would be effective because many torpedoes can travel over 50km and at high speeds.

by The Pacifican Islands » Sun Oct 22, 2017 6:55 pm

by Laritaia » Sun Oct 22, 2017 6:57 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:Thanks! Does it help at all for the missile that Arkana mentioned to use a supercavitating torpedo? Or to use a supercavitating torpedo at all?

by The Akasha Colony » Sun Oct 22, 2017 7:06 pm
The Pacifican Islands wrote:Thanks! Does it help at all for the missile that Arkana mentioned to use a supercavitating torpedo? Or to use a supercavitating torpedo at all?
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