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Rhodevus
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Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

International Factbook Raters (OPEN)

Postby Rhodevus » Mon Jun 02, 2014 4:12 pm

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What We Do

We here at IFR want to make sure that every factbook entry a nation provides to the public is informative, accurate and all around enjoyable to read. So, to make sure that all factbooks are as perfect as can be, this rating system will be in place to help and even make some suggestions!

Rating Explanations

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1 star- poor quality factbook. There are plenty of spelling/grammar mistakes. There is little information about the subject. It is uninteresting to read.

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2 stars- Lacking quality factbook. There are some spelling/grammar mistakes. There is a small amount of information about the subject. It is interesting to read.

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3 stars- Average quality factbook. There are few spelling/grammar mistakes. There is a good amount of information, but some is off topic. It is quite interesting to read.

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4 stars- Great quality factbook. Little to no spelling/grammar mistakes. There is a lot of information that is on topic. Great to read.

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5 stars- Perfect quality factbook. No spelling/Grammar mistakes. There is more than enough information about the topic, plus extra on how the topic relates to other aspects of the nation. Very fascinating to read.




Marking Scheme

SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?/10


Factbooks are rated out of a total of 110.

0-50= 1 star*
51-70= 2 stars
71-85= 3 stars
86-95= 4 stars
96-110= 5 stars

*side note: If a factbook is rated low enough, the rater is allowed to reduce a star from your overall factbook rating.




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[size=150]APPLICATION[/size]
[b]Nation Name:[/b]
[b]Factbook Link:[/b]
[b]Factbook Category:[/b]
[b]Factbook Name:[/b]
[b]Would you like to have any suggestions?[/b]
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The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

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Rhodevus
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Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Mon Jun 02, 2014 4:12 pm

1. Cypriae
2. Tolmakia
3. Felucian Planetary Republic
4. Cerillium
5. Regica
6. Velistorm
7. Kingston-Atlantis
8. Union Of Canadorian Socialists Republic
9. Tongola
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The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

Factbook
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Punkvania
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1401
Founded: Nov 01, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Punkvania » Mon Jun 02, 2014 4:22 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name: Punkvania
Factbook Link: Here
Factbook Category: Overview!!!
Factbook Name: Uhhh Punkvania?
Would you like to have any suggestions? Hit me with your best shot.
I wanna take you
Take you way down
To my favorite place in town

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Rhodevus
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Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Mon Jun 02, 2014 6:28 pm

Punkvania wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name: Punkvania
Factbook Link: Here
Factbook Category: Overview!!!
Factbook Name: Uhhh Punkvania?
Would you like to have any suggestions? Hit me with your best shot.


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?8/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?24/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?19/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?0/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?3/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?15/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?10/10


Overall ranking: 89

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Thoughts on the Factbook
An incredible score! All spelling is correct and there are a few run-on sentences and lack of punctuation, but it does not impede on the overall content of the factbook, which was quite well done and very funny to read. The pictures were great, as well as the very 'informative' video of the governor.

Next Step
The next step that you should take is beefing up the actual content. It is understandable, being an overview that it is short, but a suggestion would be to add a bit more information on each mini-subject. Other things to add would be:
-History of the nation
-More about the national animal
-More about actual everyday life in Punkvania
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The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

Factbook
International Exchange Student Program Member
XENOS MEMBER OF THE MULTI-SPECIES UNION!

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New Hayesalia
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Posts: 7451
Founded: Jul 21, 2009
Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby New Hayesalia » Mon Jun 02, 2014 6:31 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name: New Hayesalia
Factbook Link: http://newhayesalia.weebly.com/
Factbook Category: General
Factbook Name: New Hayesalian Official Site
Would you like to have any suggestions? Yes

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Rhodevus
Negotiator
 
Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Mon Jun 02, 2014 7:18 pm

New Hayesalia wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name: New Hayesalia
Factbook Link: http://newhayesalia.weebly.com/
Factbook Category: General
Factbook Name: New Hayesalian Official Site
Would you like to have any suggestions? Yes


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?9/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?28/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?19/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?4/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?2/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?17/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?10/10


Overall Ranking: 99

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Thoughts on the Factbook
Magnificent! This is what most people want when they begin to write up their factbooks. Very neat and well written. More pictures than one will ever need, as well as maps, flags and symbols. The national anthem is a great add-on to help others understand the main concept of the nation without even reading any other information.

Next Step
Fix up some of the sentences that contain 'opposites', such as "The population now hovered around 80,000,000, and growing fast." (When a population is hovering, it is not growing) Other things to change would be in the first paragraph, the constant use of the word amalgamated and forms of it, thereof. Try other synonyms, so the writing does not become repetitive.
The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

Factbook
International Exchange Student Program Member
XENOS MEMBER OF THE MULTI-SPECIES UNION!

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New Hayesalia
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Posts: 7451
Founded: Jul 21, 2009
Civil Rights Lovefest

Postby New Hayesalia » Mon Jun 02, 2014 7:43 pm

Rhodevus wrote:
New Hayesalia wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name: New Hayesalia
Factbook Link: http://newhayesalia.weebly.com/
Factbook Category: General
Factbook Name: New Hayesalian Official Site
Would you like to have any suggestions? Yes


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?9/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?28/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?19/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?4/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?2/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?17/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?10/10


Overall Ranking: 99

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Thoughts on the Factbook
Magnificent! This is what most people want when they begin to write up their factbooks. Very neat and well written. More pictures than one will ever need, as well as maps, flags and symbols. The national anthem is a great add-on to help others understand the main concept of the nation without even reading any other information.

Next Step
Fix up some of the sentences that contain 'opposites', such as "The population now hovered around 80,000,000, and growing fast." (When a population is hovering, it is not growing) Other things to change would be in the first paragraph, the constant use of the word amalgamated and forms of it, thereof. Try other synonyms, so the writing does not become repetitive.


I'm currently in a rewrite of the history, pending the delivery of a more HD map.

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Grand Britannia
Postmaster-General
 
Posts: 14234
Founded: Apr 15, 2012
Capitalizt

Postby Grand Britannia » Mon Jun 02, 2014 8:19 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name: The Holy Empire of Britannia
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=gran ... k/id=17608
Factbook Category:Overview
Factbook Name:Enter Britannia
Would you like to have any suggestions? Sure, I need to change the map, though.
Last edited by Grand Britannia on Mon Jun 02, 2014 8:19 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Member of laissez-fair right-wing worker-mistreatment brigade
Why Britannians are always late
Me as a good capitalist.
Mainland Map | "Weebs must secure the existence of anime and a future for cute aryan waifus"| IIwiki
I Identify as a Graf Zeppelin class aircraft carrier, please refer to me as she.
Economic Left/Right: 2.25 | Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: 6.72

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Pavonistade
Minister
 
Posts: 2688
Founded: Jan 26, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Pavonistade » Mon Jun 02, 2014 8:21 pm

I have a question: does the factbook have to be on NS or can it be elsewhere (e.g. IIwiki)?
Political Compass:
Economic Left/Right: 0.75
Social Libertarian/Authoritarian: -3.54
President: Otakhtay Sgriki
Vice President: Aurrul Lokni
IIwiki | News
I don't use NS stats | Not everything I post pertains to the Pavonistade in Esquarium

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Scientia Eterna
Attaché
 
Posts: 68
Founded: Apr 09, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Scientia Eterna » Mon Jun 02, 2014 10:45 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name:Scientia Eterna
Factbook Link:Link
Factbook Category: History
Factbook Name: "Scientian History: From Founding to Today"
Would you like to have any suggestions? Sure
Our Embassy Program
We are pacifistic, but will not hesitate to retaliate with overwhelming force if attacked.
We are an FT nation with some aspects of FanT
Class A: Tier 0, Type VII, Universal/Multiversal power on the Civilization Index
Patron-State of the Interstellar Trade Confederation
XENO AND A MEMBER OF THE MULTI-SPECIES UNION!

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Desmendura
Minister
 
Posts: 2741
Founded: Oct 13, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Desmendura » Tue Jun 03, 2014 2:27 am

APPLICATION
Nation Name: The Greater Imperium of Desmendura
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=desm ... /id=189747
Factbook Category: Overview
Factbook Name: Basically the nation name.
Would you like to have any suggestions? The factbook is incomplete. No need to point that out in your review.
It's glad to be back after almost 3 months of inactivity!
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I am:
An F&NI specialist
A Generalite (Not too much now however)
A Role-player
Extra stuffs include:
(-_Q) If you support Capitalism put this in your Signature
98% of all Internet users would cry if Facebook, Instagram, Vine, Kik and/or Twitter broke down. If you are part of that 2% who simply would sit back and laugh, if you are that two percent copy and paste into your sig.
LIKES: Capitalism, Libertarianism, Monarchism, Imperialism
NEUTRAL: Communism, Socialism, Fascism, and Feminism
DISLIKES: Gender Supremacy of any kind and Nazism

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Rhodevus
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Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Tue Jun 03, 2014 4:32 am

Pavonistade wrote:I have a question: does the factbook have to be on NS or can it be elsewhere (e.g. IIwiki)?


The factbook can be anywhere
The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

Factbook
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Herrebrugh
Post Marshal
 
Posts: 15122
Founded: Aug 24, 2007
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Herrebrugh » Tue Jun 03, 2014 4:35 am

APPLICATION
Nation Name: Herrebrugh
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=herr ... ok/id=main
Factbook Category: General information and international relations
Factbook Name: Herre-info.hb
Would you like to have any suggestions? Sure
Geteekendt, Jozef III, bij den gratiën Godts, Koningh der Herrebrugheylanden ende Prins van Rheda
Unterzeichnet, Joſeph III., von Gottes Gnaden König der Herrenbrückinſeln und Prinz von Rheda
Signé, Joſeph III, par la grâce de Dieu, Roi des Îles Dompont et Prince de Rheda

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Bresdenn
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1302
Founded: Oct 16, 2011
Ex-Nation

Postby Bresdenn » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:37 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name:The Most Christian Bresdennian Realm
Factbook Link:www.minofstate.gov.br/officeofnatlinfo
Factbook Category:General
Factbook Name: The Bresdennian Realm's Factbook, Websites & Encyclopedia
Would you like to have any suggestions?Yes, of course
Le Royaume le plus Chrétien de Bresdennian
The Most Christian Bresdennian Realm
Kingdoms of Bresdenn, Varionae, Bresdennique, Antionique & Territories


King Brian IV Paul of the Bresdennian Realm
Evangeline Carter, Secretariat
Deborah Chapman-Lewis, Min. of State/Antoine Kelly, Min. of Foreign Affairs & Trade/ Vaughn Paul Jones, Min. of Finance & HM's Treasury/Jefferey St.Goode, Min. of Justice/Dr. Brian Morco, Min. of Education/H.William Hall, Min. of Commerce,Labor & Economics/Amaud- Antoine Bellamy, Min. of National Security/Dr. Jean-Francois Louvre, Min of the Environment, Science & Technology/Karla Peterson, HM's Executive Secretary

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Stasnov
Minister
 
Posts: 2438
Founded: Mar 16, 2014
Democratic Socialists

Postby Stasnov » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:41 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name: Stasnov
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=stasnov/detail=factbook/id=231910
Factbook Category: Overview
Factbook Name: Overview {WIP}
Would you like to have any suggestions? Sure
Note that it is WIP, so rate accordingly
Last edited by Stasnov on Tue Jun 03, 2014 1:57 pm, edited 1 time in total.
#ValaranSoFab
My alt/secondary account: Chalcia
My FT alt account: Union of Collectivist Systems
19 years old, Greek, male, heterosexual, Communist, LGBT rights supporter, secularist, atheist
Puzikas wrote:"Wanna know how I got these scars?"- Gorby probably

Yalos wrote:"Nazi Germany lost WW2 because it thought like an NS player"

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New Austzeland
Ambassador
 
Posts: 1720
Founded: Nov 11, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby New Austzeland » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:42 pm

I feel like my factbooks are not very good, so I may as well get some tips on how to make them better :p

APPLICATION
Nation Name: Republic of New Austzeland
Factbook Link: Factbook
Factbook Category: Military
Factbook Name: New Austzeland Defense Forces
Would you like to have any suggestions? I'm occasionally adding more info to it, just an FYI.
Last edited by New Austzeland on Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:43 pm, edited 1 time in total.
18 year old Canadian with Irish-English ancestry and the most confusing political views, even to myself. Warrant Officer in Army Cadets. Send me love letters through telegrams if you want <3
PROS:Meme Man (donald trump)
ANTI: Everybody and everything


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Oaledonia
Postmaster of the Fleet
 
Posts: 21487
Founded: Mar 17, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Oaledonia » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:45 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name: Oaledonia
Factbook Link: link
Factbook Category: Overview
Factbook Name: ☯Oaledonia, The Azure Blue Union☯
Would you like to have any suggestions? N/A
Last edited by Wikipe-tan on January 13, 2006 4:00 pm, edited 3 times in total.
The lovable PMT nation of hugs and chibi! Now with 75% more Hanyū!
Oaledonian wiki | Decoli Defense | Embassy | OAF Military Info
Blackjack-and-Hookers wrote:
Oaledonia wrote:I'll go make my own genocidal galactic empire! with blackjack and hookers

You bet your ass you will!
Divair wrote:NSG summer doesn't end anymore. Climate change.
Under construction
*POLITICALLY CONTENTIOUS STATEMENTS INTENSIFY*

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Patistan
Minister
 
Posts: 2174
Founded: Jun 09, 2013
Ex-Nation

Postby Patistan » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:50 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name:Patistan
Factbook Link:http://www.nationstates.net/nation=patistan/detail=factbook
Factbook Category: Culture
Factbook Name: National football team
Would you like to have any suggestions? Yeah,but please dont comment on the grammar. I have to update it but want you to look at it first.
Last edited by Patistan on Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:51 pm, edited 1 time in total.
"When Muslims commit crime the media exposes them as radical Islamists, but when NON-Muslims commit crimes it is just a crime that is not associated with their beliefs."
Pakistani in Karachi
"Glory to Manchester United"
Really do like telegrams :P
"Okay it's your choice if you don't want to submit to Allah but I for one like to submit to him because he created me and gave me everything I have right now and he will be the one who will judge how I lived my life and he will be the one who decides if I go to Heaven or hell and I for one submit to him because I don't want to live my second life (which will be never-ending) in hell just because I have a ego and want to live in this world partying and enjoying it's luxuries. "

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Anollasia
Postmaster of the Fleet
 
Posts: 25398
Founded: Apr 05, 2012
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Anollasia » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:51 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name: The Peaceful Republic of Anollasia
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=anol ... k/id=11865
Factbook Category: Overview (in the form of a Wiki-style factbook)
Factbook Name: Anollasia (Wiki-style factbook)
Would you like to have any suggestions? Yes. Btw, I still have things to add in Culture and perhaps See Also.

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Rhodevus
Negotiator
 
Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Tue Jun 03, 2014 12:54 pm

Grand Britannia wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name: The Holy Empire of Britannia
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=gran ... k/id=17608
Factbook Category:Overview
Factbook Name:Enter Britannia
Would you like to have any suggestions? Sure, I need to change the map, though.


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?8/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?28/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?14/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?1/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?2/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?18/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?8/10


Overall ranking: 89

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Thoughts on the Factbook
A great start. There are some punctuation mistakes here and there, but it does not impede on the actual information being provided. It is quite concise, but that is to be expected of overall overviews in a 'wiki' format. It did seem to discuss the history of the nation more than a 'wiki' overview should

Next Step
Finish up the factbook! All the layout is done, all that is needed is the actual information. Try making the top overview more of an overview of the nation, while leaving the history to the history section.
The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

Factbook
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XENOS MEMBER OF THE MULTI-SPECIES UNION!

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Rhodevus
Negotiator
 
Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Tue Jun 03, 2014 1:08 pm

Scientia Eterna wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name:Scientia Eterna
Factbook Link:Link
Factbook Category: History
Factbook Name: "Scientian History: From Founding to Today"
Would you like to have any suggestions? Sure


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?9/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?25/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?18/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?3/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?3/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?18/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?4/10


Overall Ranking: 90

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Thoughts on the Factbook
Incredible and detailed factbook. Very long with all the main events put into different eras. Large amounts of knowledge and very little grammatical mistakes. Well structured, but needs some colour to keep a hold on the reader's interest.

Next Step
Add some colour or pictures. Another add-on that may be quite helpful to the viewers would be a linking column to allow easy access to skip directly to a particular era.
The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

Factbook
International Exchange Student Program Member
XENOS MEMBER OF THE MULTI-SPECIES UNION!

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Rhodevus
Negotiator
 
Posts: 7180
Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Tue Jun 03, 2014 1:26 pm

Desmendura wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name: The Greater Imperium of Desmendura
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=desm ... /id=189747
Factbook Category: Overview
Factbook Name: Basically the nation name.
Would you like to have any suggestions? The factbook is incomplete. No need to point that out in your review.


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?9/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?27/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?19/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?3/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?3/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?17/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?10/10


Overall ranking: 98

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The King In The North!
My nation's people are called Rhodeve not Rhodevan.
IATA Member Embassy Character Creation 101 Head RP Mentor for Sunalaya
Do not argue against me, you will lose...or win, depending on the situation
Sunalaya's One and Only Head Role Play Mentor
Sunalaya's Official Madman with a Box
Rodrania wrote:Rhod, I f*cking love you, man. <3
Divergia wrote:The Canadian Polar-Potato-Moose-Cat has spoken!
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Rhodevus
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Founded: Apr 19, 2013
Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Tue Jun 03, 2014 1:37 pm

Herrebrugh wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name: Herrebrugh
Factbook Link: http://www.nationstates.net/nation=herr ... ok/id=main
Factbook Category: General information and international relations
Factbook Name: Herre-info.hb
Would you like to have any suggestions? Sure


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?8/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?27/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?19/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?3/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?4/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?20/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?10/10


Overall ranking: 101

Thoughts on the Factbook
Firstly, I would like to congratulate you on having one of the nicest factbooks I have seen in a long time. It had a very unique format and incredibly captivating pictures. The layout was easy to follow and there were large amount of information.

Next Step
There are quite a few run-on sentences, as well as some punctuation errors. Nothing hinders the reading of the factbook, but it is always good to have a factbook with perfect grammar. More cities should be added to teh visit Herrebrugh page. Not much else to add, I am happy to say.
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Liberal Democratic Socialists

Postby Rhodevus » Tue Jun 03, 2014 2:02 pm

Bresdenn wrote:APPLICATION
Nation Name:The Most Christian Bresdennian Realm
Factbook Link:www.minofstate.gov.br/officeofnatlinfo
Factbook Category:General
Factbook Name: The Bresdennian Realm's Factbook, Websites & Encyclopedia
Would you like to have any suggestions?Yes, of course


SpellingAre there any spelling mistakes?10/10
GrammarIs everything grammatically correct?6/10
LayoutDoes the factbook have a nice layout? Is it easy to follow?21/30
TopicDoes the factbook stay on topic or does it stray?17/20
Extra InformationIs there any extra info that may add to the original topic?3/5
UpdatesIs the factbook updated occasionally?2/5
Overall QualityOverall, is the factbook pleasant to read? Is everything well structured?15/20
DetailsDoes the factbook have pictures to add to the understanding of the factbook? Are there any side-links to other factbooks or anything else that may help the reader to understand the factbook?10/10


Overall Ranking: 84

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Thoughts on the Factbook
Very in depth, but very long as well. There are quite a few grammatical mistakes, as well as an unnecessary amount of descriptions on various people working in HM's household. Overall, it was interesting.

Next Step
Fix up the grammar. Try placing people that are not important (such as deputy ministers and "HM's Steward of the Royal Marijuana Plantation & Reserve") in spoilers, so that there is not endless scrolling to reach the bottom of the page. But, do add more to the Geography, Climate and Ecology section. Try adding a "back to top" link, so get from a specific section back to the main overview, wherein one can choose which topic to go to next.
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Beiluxia wrote:Is it just me, or does your name keep getting better the more I see it?

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Republic of South Carolina
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Founded: Apr 24, 2013
Inoffensive Centrist Democracy

Postby Republic of South Carolina » Tue Jun 03, 2014 2:45 pm

APPLICATION
Nation Name:
The Commonwealth of the Republic of South Carolina
Factbook Link:
http://www.nationstates.net/nation=repu ... l=factbook
Factbook Category:
General.
Factbook Name:
Republic of South Carolina factbook.
Would you like to have any suggestions?
Yes.
Current Conflicts:
None.

Past Conflicts:
Jandarian War.
Dennorn Civil War.

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