Main Military Weapon of Your Country: Mod 7

[Kalmarium]

I stumbled across Pimp My gun today and decided to use my horrible knowledge of modern firearms to make an assault rifle. I know without a doubt there are problems with it, which is why I ask for some help on it. CONSTRUCTIVE criticism please.

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EDIT: Was re-directed here, so you may see this post on the Creating You thread

Is "a lot better than much of what comes through here" constructive criticism? The size of the magazine would imply a battle rifle cartridge, and possibly a large one at that.
The way to 'save' on PMG is to go to 'export' and then 'export code'. It will save to your clipboard the code in PMG that the gun takes up. Save it as a notepad file (notepad does not alter the formatting or symbols of code, itself being a code-based programme), and then you can go to PMG 'import' and presumably copy the code into there, to pick up where you left off.

Thanks! Will help me later-on.

Is "a lot better than much of what comes through here" constructive criticism? The size of the magazine would imply a battle rifle cartridge, and possibly a large one at that.

Hmm really? And yes, I suppose

Also the Mag had been changed, I believe that was a .50 cal cartridge, but not sure.

[Immoren]

...wat?

[Benomia]

Something like this? (yes the mag is too small, I forgot to fix that).

Also do you know how to save these on PMG so I don't have to keep rebuilding these from scratch? Also I am aware some parts are missing, I'm new to this.

That's a lot better, but here is some stuff I have to say about it:

The magazine you chose? Perfect. The gun itself is obviously based on an HK 417 so you might want to go with the SCAR-H 20 round magazine, but the one you have is fine.
The rail system you have only really looks good when it's on the 417 itself, so you'll probably want to go with a system that doesn't have those gaps near the left edge. There is one that is longer, I can't remember the name of it now.
Other than that, you're going to want to move the flash hinder over about a centimeter so you can't see the little part of the barrel, and you may want to shrink the stock slightly so it fits on the receiver nicely. Other than that, you're pretty much good.

EDIT: When you think you're done, go to File and hit Export. Copy that code and paste it into a text document. When you want to resume working on it, just copy the code from the document, hit Import, and paste it in there.

[-The Auroran Empire]

The Auroran Empire currently issues the Mosin-Winchester lever action rifle in .405 Winchester.

(Ignore the watermark on the image, it was the best I could find)

[Eastern Slavia]

Upgrade program for 2016, Volk assault rifles accessories actually enter production.(though still only issued to VV units on a wide scale)

An improved design of the under barrel 23mm shotgun is included(still a WIP, can't decide what trigger to use), along with a combination vertical grip/tactical light - its shape was copied from the Hungarian AMD series. A flash supressor/sound modulator is supplied for night fighting, completely elimination visible flash and distorting the report, making gunfire nearly impossible to pinpoint at ranges of 300m or greater. it is suitable for long instances of prolonged contact and was designed to be easily cleaned and repaired.



Need an optical sight for close fighting that isn't large, since we don't really make electronic sights and mostly use older Soviet designed glass optics. it still uses the old GP-25 since there wasn't a reason to change it.

[Benomia]

T-17 PROTO2:



.44 Magnum, 30 box, gas piston.
Improvements over PROTO1: Improved flash hinder, swapped iron sights for some EOTech, grenade launcher

[Samozaryadnyastan]

Is "a lot better than much of what comes through here" constructive criticism? The size of the magazine would imply a battle rifle cartridge, and possibly a large one at that.

Hmm really? And yes, I suppose

Also the Mag had been changed, I believe that was a .50 cal cartridge, but not sure.

It's a .338 Lapua Magnum magazine, for the M98B rifle.

...wat?

I don't see why it wouldn't technically work, but it looks incredibly space inefficient and would result in a tall receiver.

[Virana]

T-17 PROTO2:

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.44 Magnum, 30 box, gas piston.
Improvements over PROTO1: Improved flash hinder, swapped iron sights for some EOTech, grenade launcher

What's up with those random colors in your PMG work?

that's a blue you don't normally see in firearms.

[Eastern Slavia]

T-17 PROTO2:

(Image)

.44 Magnum, 30 box, gas piston.
Improvements over PROTO1: Improved flash hinder, swapped iron sights for some EOTech, grenade launcher

What's up with those random colors in your PMG work?

that's a blue you don't normally see in firearms.

he's stylin' on you~

[Benomia]

T-17 PROTO2:

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.44 Magnum, 30 box, gas piston.
Improvements over PROTO1: Improved flash hinder, swapped iron sights for some EOTech, grenade launcher

What's up with those random colors in your PMG work?

that's a blue you don't normally see in firearms.

If the rifle ever goes into production, it won't have the various hues and shades the prototypes have.

Anyway,
T-17 PROCAR:



Prototype Carbine. Shorter barrel, collapsible stock, revised flash hinder.

[Kouralia]

Is "a lot better than much of what comes through here" constructive criticism? The size of the magazine would imply a battle rifle cartridge, and possibly a large one at that.
The way to 'save' on PMG is to go to 'export' and then 'export code'. It will save to your clipboard the code in PMG that the gun takes up. Save it as a notepad file (notepad does not alter the formatting or symbols of code, itself being a code-based programme), and then you can go to PMG 'import' and presumably copy the code into there, to pick up where you left off.

Thanks! Will help me later-on.

Is "a lot better than much of what comes through here" constructive criticism? The size of the magazine would imply a battle rifle cartridge, and possibly a large one at that.

Hmm really? And yes, I suppose

Also the Mag had been changed, I believe that was a .50 cal cartridge, but not sure.

As Samoz said: better than most. May I direct you to the PMG usage guide in my signature? You may find it helpful, I don't know.

[Coltarin]

here is a WIP of the upper.

[Yes Im Biop]

What's up with those random colors in your PMG work?

that's a blue you don't normally see in firearms.

If the rifle ever goes into production, it won't have the various hues and shades the prototypes have.

Anyway,
T-17 PROCAR:



Prototype Carbine. Shorter barrel, collapsible stock, revised flash hinder.

That's a long ass barrel for a .44 Pistol round.

[Benomia]

If the rifle ever goes into production, it won't have the various hues and shades the prototypes have.

Anyway,
T-17 PROCAR:



Prototype Carbine. Shorter barrel, collapsible stock, revised flash hinder.

That's a long ass barrel for a .44 Pistol round.

And you're looking at the carbine version. The full rifle has a barrel 100mm longer than that.

[The Republic of Lanos]

The big question is why are you using a .44 Magnum round for a service rifle?

[Kalmarium]

Thanks! Will help me later-on.



Hmm really? And yes, I suppose

Also the Mag had been changed, I believe that was a .50 cal cartridge, but not sure.

As Samoz said: better than most. May I direct you to the PMG usage guide in my signature? You may find it helpful, I don't know.

Already found it, but thanks anyway.

[Benomia]

The big question is why are you using a .44 Magnum round for a service rifle?

Stopping power, power, muzzle velocity (power), power, and more power. And because we can't reasonably use it in a handgun.

[Kalmarium]

T-17 PROTO2:

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.44 Magnum, 30 box, gas piston.
Improvements over PROTO1: Improved flash hinder, swapped iron sights for some EOTech, grenade launcher

Nice

[Torrocca]

Eh, my second try and making a weapon by myself

[Kouralia]

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Eh, my second try and making a weapon by myself

I think I shall gesture vaguely toward my signature to you as well!

[Benomia]

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Eh, my second try and making a weapon by myself

My eyes...they hurt...

[Kouralia]

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Eh, my second try and making a weapon by myself

My eyes...they hurt...

You can talk.

[Torrocca]

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Eh, my second try and making a weapon by myself

My eyes...they hurt...

It's still much better than the first rifle I made.

No, I won't post it because I don't feel like getting sued for any faces melting due to people seeing it.

[Yes Im Biop]

That's a long ass barrel for a .44 Pistol round.

And you're looking at the carbine version. The full rifle has a barrel 100mm longer than that.

Hope you don't plan on these lasting long, Pistol round foul up pretty quickly.

The big question is why are you using a .44 Magnum round for a service rifle?

Stopping power, power, muzzle velocity (power), power, and more power. And because we can't reasonably use it in a handgun.

Use a 9 or 10mm Rifle round then, Pistol round's aren't good at range's.

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Eh, my second try and making a weapon by myself

Well...It seem's to have the right part's in the right place's. Just a bit of problem with the layering of it

[Torrocca]

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Eh, my second try and making a weapon by myself

I think I shall gesture vaguely toward my signature to you as well!

any suggestions on what to fix would be nicer than that