Traveller's Cafe 3: Brainstorming, discussion, tea, advice

[The Starlight]

It just seems... Gaudy I think is the term? Like Gaudy inn the same fashion those old school batman episodes were... with the poor CG and everything. That's the feel this gives me, and that's not exactly a good thing in my perspective as it seems to detract perhaps from the feel you were going for. I also can't help but feel that this Dallen character is nothing but a total "Jesus" in that he seems to be utterly perfect with nothing wrong with him and that's not good either unless that's what you want him to be.

Make this a Grey vs Grey Morality. Both Dallen and Evan has redeeming and annoying sides.

Thanks, I'll add in those components.

[The Starlight]

Its been updated, I hope it's better now.

[Altito Asmoro]

RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: The new and better reboot of the previous VRO RP made by yours truly. A VR RP where you run around the various Multiverses, making alliances and fighting the people you think are bad in preparation for the final battle.
Genre/s: Virtual Reality
Character or Faction Based: Character
Detailed Description:

In the year 2030, Earth finally reached a new age, one of technology and discovery. A young boy, named Dallen Thomsen had burst onto the scene of the world. Dallen had single-handily advanced the world, inventing holograms, hoverboards, flying cars with no fuel emission, along with several popular video games and a new smartphone, better than all the rest, featuring an AI, connection to video game systems and could do basically anything that one wanted. The brand, was simply known as Tom. Dallen also facilitated the reemergence of renewable energy systems, making wind turbines noiseless, popularizing hybrid cars with the Thomsen car, powered by water alone. He made solar panels more effective, and procured a way to retrieve energy from the tides cheaply and inexpensively. He was arguably one of the greatest mind the world had ever seen. Gas and oil were nonexistent, Africa was self-dependent and there were no "third-world countries." Everyone had enough to eat, and a place to eat. Child prostitution was gone, epidemics and diseases were stomped out with very little loss of life.The threat of nuclear war became apparent as tensions became hot between the West and Russia, but Dallen ended that, creating a shield that could shield entire cities, powered by a high tech shield generator. He then secretly traveled all over the world, occurred anymore.

The world was at peace, all thanks to this young man, who quickly became the richest in the world, thanks to his ingenuity and apparent charisma. He had created a company, Thomsen Tech, and the slogan was simply "For the future." He was the epitome of the Renaissance man. He was a master cellist, fencer, played soccer, and was at the top of his classes, far beyond his classmates. He managed to invent the first sonic screwdriver, being a immense fan of Doctor Who, though Thomsen Tech didn't release it for sale. That prompted BBC to hire Dallen as the 15th Doctor, who he would act as after the 14th Doctor's time was up.
But his success made him proud and quite haughty at time, due to all that he had done for the world. He was quite the workaholic and he impacted all of those around him, having high expectations of them, expecting all of those in his company Thomsen Tech to be as "perfect" as he was. He tended to ramble on, not paying attention to others, making some feel hurt. And in public, his words and actions made others feel unfulfilled and drove several people who tried to follow his example to exhaustion and comas, in rare cases. Though he had his fans, many were disillusioned with the college genius. But his loyalty to his company and those close to him was unsurpassed and he had a good heart inside. At his best he was a brilliant, hopeful and optimistic genius, at his worst, a demanding, annoying and infuriating man.
But if there was one man to match Dallen Thomsen, it was Evan Rigerson.They were the Google vs Apple of their time, the lion and the tiger and the Doctor and the Master of their world. But who was which? They had gone to the same school up into college, and whatever Dallen did, Evan Rigerson was close behind, or at times, just ahead. The two had started out as friends but as they got older, it became clear that Evan was jealous of Dallen, but then again, who wouldn't be? Dallen formed Thomsen Tech, Evan, Rigerson Corporations. All that Evan did ever since out of pure green envy, at the success and opportunities Dallen had had. Evan became totally obssessed with the defeat of Thomsen Tech and its creator, forming Rigerson Corp. to attempt to wrest control and influence from Dallen. He believed that Dallen had some malicious scheme, that he had created all these things and done all this in a master plan to control the world, and it was Evan's job to stop him. Rigerson Corp soon became headed by a conspiracy theorist, who was so intent on the defeat of Thomsen and his company that he would sacrifice anything and everything, including his morals. Dallen thought of Evan as a once brilliant colleague who had now become a fruit fly buzzing around him, always close behind, hindering him and attempting to stop the world from becoming a better place. Dallen regarded Evan as annoying, Evan looked at Dallen with an obsession which had become pure hate.

Thomsen Tech specialized in all future tech, along with being a research and development company for all fields.

One day, Thomsen Tech made an announcement. Their theme song, To Glory by Two Steps from Hell played out before Dallen appeared on the screen, sitting behind his desk. " Greetings. As you know, I am Dallen Thomsen, and I have some very exciting news for you today. I and my small team have created something brilliant, something that will blow your minds.

We have created, virtual reality. You can buy it today, for $20, at our stores anywhere in the world. However, there are limited copies, but a few lucky random people will find a card in the box which simply reads: "Congratulations, you have been chosen." They will have the chance to, and go into multiple multiverses. Have you ever wanted to travel to Middle-Earth, Narnia, Alagaesia, or the world of Percy Jackson? How about Marvel, or DC, or both of them combined, or Star Wars, or how about Redwall? Doctor Who perhaps? Perhaps you want to go to the world of Ranger's Apprentice, Tron or the world of books like Steelheart. The choice is yours. Dive into your favorite books and movies today. Even if you are not chosen, you still have the chance to go into all of your favorite fictional worlds. You can become your favorite characters, or you can invent an entirely new character and impact events. Became an Adventurer, a swashbuckler, a hero, a tank, a hunter, a thief, a warrior, a mage, a healer and more. If your favorite isn't in there currently, or you have a brilliant idea for one, please submit it, and we will most likely add it. However, there is a condition. One, only those of the ages of 15-18 will be allowed to join for now, sorry adults. But my final words are this, as is the logo for this game:
"Go therefore, where no kid has gone before. Become who you were born to be. Out there, is our future. Out there, is our destiny."
And on that day, June 15th of 2030, VRO: The Multiverse became available to the world.

This is where you are in. You, after filling out your application on your Tom laptop, were launched into Virtual Reality Online. But there was a problem. Unknown to you, and Dallen at the time, Evan had somehow managed to get into the servers of VRO and had put Dallen and his robots under siege. Wherever Dallen went, Evan went, making alliances with anyone and everything, and attacking Dallen and his small forces. Using the VRO version of our world, Evan was able to procure his weapons. Evan is now assembling an army, bred for a single purpose. To save our world from Dallen and put forth a new world order, with him in charge, the only person capable to stop Dallen, in his beliefs. Somehow, he has managed to find a way to bring virtual characters from VRO into our world. Dallen believes that Evan will destroy the world by bringing virtual characters into our world which he can't control. You must stop Dallen or Evan, or our world is doomed, depending on your point of view.You will do this by traveling with Dallen/Evan, making alliances of our own with the good factions of the Multiverse, but first, you must get to Dallen, who is currently under heavy siege by Evan's forces in an unknown world. Dallen is trapped but fortified in a mountain. You must break the siege and relieve Dallen's forces, or help Evan defeat Dallen. Good luck, the fate of the Multiverse and our world is in your hands. The choice is in your hands, who will you support? Who is the good guy, and who is the bad guy? The lines between the two sides appears blurred but you must decide, and the Multiverse will never be the same.

Need Help With: Interest, Plot.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

Great.

Dallen is a Jerk with A Heart of Gold, more or less, I suppose.

While Evan is a...Well-Intentioned Extremist, I suppose.

Yes, I pick these up from TVTropes.

[Altito Asmoro]

Its been updated, I hope it's better now.

It's better.

Do the old players can use their characters again?

[The Starlight]

RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: The new and better reboot of the previous VRO RP made by yours truly. A VR RP where you run around the various Multiverses, making alliances and fighting the people you think are bad in preparation for the final battle.
Genre/s: Virtual Reality
Character or Faction Based: Character
Detailed Description:

In the year 2030, Earth finally reached a new age, one of technology and discovery. A young boy, named Dallen Thomsen had burst onto the scene of the world. Dallen had single-handily advanced the world, inventing holograms, hoverboards, flying cars with no fuel emission, along with several popular video games and a new smartphone, better than all the rest, featuring an AI, connection to video game systems and could do basically anything that one wanted. The brand, was simply known as Tom. Dallen also facilitated the reemergence of renewable energy systems, making wind turbines noiseless, popularizing hybrid cars with the Thomsen car, powered by water alone. He made solar panels more effective, and procured a way to retrieve energy from the tides cheaply and inexpensively. He was arguably one of the greatest mind the world had ever seen. Gas and oil were nonexistent, Africa was self-dependent and there were no "third-world countries." Everyone had enough to eat, and a place to eat. Child prostitution was gone, epidemics and diseases were stomped out with very little loss of life.The threat of nuclear war became apparent as tensions became hot between the West and Russia, but Dallen ended that, creating a shield that could shield entire cities, powered by a high tech shield generator. He then secretly traveled all over the world, occurred anymore.

The world was at peace, all thanks to this young man, who quickly became the richest in the world, thanks to his ingenuity and apparent charisma. He had created a company, Thomsen Tech, and the slogan was simply "For the future." He was the epitome of the Renaissance man. He was a master cellist, fencer, played soccer, and was at the top of his classes, far beyond his classmates. He managed to invent the first sonic screwdriver, being a immense fan of Doctor Who, though Thomsen Tech didn't release it for sale. That prompted BBC to hire Dallen as the 15th Doctor, who he would act as after the 14th Doctor's time was up.
But his success made him proud and quite haughty at time, due to all that he had done for the world. He was quite the workaholic and he impacted all of those around him, having high expectations of them, expecting all of those in his company Thomsen Tech to be as "perfect" as he was. He tended to ramble on, not paying attention to others, making some feel hurt. And in public, his words and actions made others feel unfulfilled and drove several people who tried to follow his example to exhaustion and comas, in rare cases. Though he had his fans, many were disillusioned with the college genius. But his loyalty to his company and those close to him was unsurpassed and he had a good heart inside. At his best he was a brilliant, hopeful and optimistic genius, at his worst, a demanding, annoying and infuriating man.
But if there was one man to match Dallen Thomsen, it was Evan Rigerson.They were the Google vs Apple of their time, the lion and the tiger and the Doctor and the Master of their world. But who was which? They had gone to the same school up into college, and whatever Dallen did, Evan Rigerson was close behind, or at times, just ahead. The two had started out as friends but as they got older, it became clear that Evan was jealous of Dallen, but then again, who wouldn't be? Dallen formed Thomsen Tech, Evan, Rigerson Corporations. All that Evan did ever since out of pure green envy, at the success and opportunities Dallen had had. Evan became totally obssessed with the defeat of Thomsen Tech and its creator, forming Rigerson Corp. to attempt to wrest control and influence from Dallen. He believed that Dallen had some malicious scheme, that he had created all these things and done all this in a master plan to control the world, and it was Evan's job to stop him. Rigerson Corp soon became headed by a conspiracy theorist, who was so intent on the defeat of Thomsen and his company that he would sacrifice anything and everything, including his morals. Dallen thought of Evan as a once brilliant colleague who had now become a fruit fly buzzing around him, always close behind, hindering him and attempting to stop the world from becoming a better place. Dallen regarded Evan as annoying, Evan looked at Dallen with an obsession which had become pure hate.

Thomsen Tech specialized in all future tech, along with being a research and development company for all fields.

One day, Thomsen Tech made an announcement. Their theme song, To Glory by Two Steps from Hell played out before Dallen appeared on the screen, sitting behind his desk. " Greetings. As you know, I am Dallen Thomsen, and I have some very exciting news for you today. I and my small team have created something brilliant, something that will blow your minds.

We have created, virtual reality. You can buy it today, for $20, at our stores anywhere in the world. However, there are limited copies, but a few lucky random people will find a card in the box which simply reads: "Congratulations, you have been chosen." They will have the chance to, and go into multiple multiverses. Have you ever wanted to travel to Middle-Earth, Narnia, Alagaesia, or the world of Percy Jackson? How about Marvel, or DC, or both of them combined, or Star Wars, or how about Redwall? Doctor Who perhaps? Perhaps you want to go to the world of Ranger's Apprentice, Tron or the world of books like Steelheart. The choice is yours. Dive into your favorite books and movies today. Even if you are not chosen, you still have the chance to go into all of your favorite fictional worlds. You can become your favorite characters, or you can invent an entirely new character and impact events. Became an Adventurer, a swashbuckler, a hero, a tank, a hunter, a thief, a warrior, a mage, a healer and more. If your favorite isn't in there currently, or you have a brilliant idea for one, please submit it, and we will most likely add it. However, there is a condition. One, only those of the ages of 15-18 will be allowed to join for now, sorry adults. But my final words are this, as is the logo for this game:
"Go therefore, where no kid has gone before. Become who you were born to be. Out there, is our future. Out there, is our destiny."
And on that day, June 15th of 2030, VRO: The Multiverse became available to the world.

This is where you are in. You, after filling out your application on your Tom laptop, were launched into Virtual Reality Online. But there was a problem. Unknown to you, and Dallen at the time, Evan had somehow managed to get into the servers of VRO and had put Dallen and his robots under siege. Wherever Dallen went, Evan went, making alliances with anyone and everything, and attacking Dallen and his small forces. Using the VRO version of our world, Evan was able to procure his weapons. Evan is now assembling an army, bred for a single purpose. To save our world from Dallen and put forth a new world order, with him in charge, the only person capable to stop Dallen, in his beliefs. Somehow, he has managed to find a way to bring virtual characters from VRO into our world. Dallen believes that Evan will destroy the world by bringing virtual characters into our world which he can't control. You must stop Dallen or Evan, or our world is doomed, depending on your point of view.You will do this by traveling with Dallen/Evan, making alliances of our own with the good factions of the Multiverse, but first, you must get to Dallen, who is currently under heavy siege by Evan's forces in an unknown world. Dallen is trapped but fortified in a mountain. You must break the siege and relieve Dallen's forces, or help Evan defeat Dallen. Good luck, the fate of the Multiverse and our world is in your hands. The choice is in your hands, who will you support? Who is the good guy, and who is the bad guy? The lines between the two sides appears blurred but you must decide, and the Multiverse will never be the same.

Need Help With: Interest, Plot.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

Great.

Dallen is a Jerk with A Heart of Gold, more or less, I suppose.

While Evan is a...Well-Intentioned Extremist, I suppose.

Yes, I pick these up from TVTropes.

I suppose so, though I kinda wish I didn't have to do that to my nigh perfect character. Yep, Tvtropes, the first time I saw that, I opened up so many tabs that each one took 2 minutes to load and Chrome eventually crashed.

[The Starlight]

Its been updated, I hope it's better now.

It's better.

Do the old players can use their characters again?

Yes, all you'll have to do is fill out the app, or really copy and paste. It'll be more or less the same with a few additions.

[Togeria]

When will you post the IC, I'm interested.

[Finland SSR]

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RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: The new and better reboot of the previous VRO RP made by yours truly. A VR RP where you run around the various Multiverses, making alliances and fighting the people you think are bad in preparation for the final battle.
Genre/s: Virtual Reality
Character or Faction Based: Character
Detailed Description:

In the year 2030, Earth finally reached a new age, one of technology and discovery. A young boy, named Dallen Thomsen had burst onto the scene of the world. Dallen had single-handily advanced the world, inventing holograms, hoverboards, flying cars with no fuel emission, along with several popular video games and a new smartphone, better than all the rest, featuring an AI, connection to video game systems and could do basically anything that one wanted. The brand, was simply known as Tom. Dallen also facilitated the reemergence of renewable energy systems, making wind turbines noiseless, popularizing hybrid cars with the Thomsen car, powered by water alone. He made solar panels more effective, and procured a way to retrieve energy from the tides cheaply and inexpensively. He was arguably one of the greatest mind the world had ever seen. Gas and oil were nonexistent, Africa was self-dependent and there were no "third-world countries." Everyone had enough to eat, and a place to eat. Child prostitution was gone, epidemics and diseases were stomped out with very little loss of life.The threat of nuclear war became apparent as tensions became hot between the West and Russia, but Dallen ended that, creating a shield that could shield entire cities, powered by a high tech shield generator. He then secretly traveled all over the world, occurred anymore.

The world was at peace, all thanks to this young man, who quickly became the richest in the world, thanks to his ingenuity and apparent charisma. He had created a company, Thomsen Tech, and the slogan was simply "For the future." He was the epitome of the Renaissance man. He was a master cellist, fencer, played soccer, and was at the top of his classes, far beyond his classmates. He managed to invent the first sonic screwdriver, being a immense fan of Doctor Who, though Thomsen Tech didn't release it for sale. That prompted BBC to hire Dallen as the 15th Doctor, who he would act as after the 14th Doctor's time was up.
But his success made him proud and quite haughty at time, due to all that he had done for the world. He was quite the workaholic and he impacted all of those around him, having high expectations of them, expecting all of those in his company Thomsen Tech to be as "perfect" as he was. He tended to ramble on, not paying attention to others, making some feel hurt. And in public, his words and actions made others feel unfulfilled and drove several people who tried to follow his example to exhaustion and comas, in rare cases. Though he had his fans, many were disillusioned with the college genius. But his loyalty to his company and those close to him was unsurpassed and he had a good heart inside. At his best he was a brilliant, hopeful and optimistic genius, at his worst, a demanding, annoying and infuriating man.
But if there was one man to match Dallen Thomsen, it was Evan Rigerson.They were the Google vs Apple of their time, the lion and the tiger and the Doctor and the Master of their world. But who was which? They had gone to the same school up into college, and whatever Dallen did, Evan Rigerson was close behind, or at times, just ahead. The two had started out as friends but as they got older, it became clear that Evan was jealous of Dallen, but then again, who wouldn't be? Dallen formed Thomsen Tech, Evan, Rigerson Corporations. All that Evan did ever since out of pure green envy, at the success and opportunities Dallen had had. Evan became totally obssessed with the defeat of Thomsen Tech and its creator, forming Rigerson Corp. to attempt to wrest control and influence from Dallen. He believed that Dallen had some malicious scheme, that he had created all these things and done all this in a master plan to control the world, and it was Evan's job to stop him. Rigerson Corp soon became headed by a conspiracy theorist, who was so intent on the defeat of Thomsen and his company that he would sacrifice anything and everything, including his morals. Dallen thought of Evan as a once brilliant colleague who had now become a fruit fly buzzing around him, always close behind, hindering him and attempting to stop the world from becoming a better place. Dallen regarded Evan as annoying, Evan looked at Dallen with an obsession which had become pure hate.

Thomsen Tech specialized in all future tech, along with being a research and development company for all fields.

One day, Thomsen Tech made an announcement. Their theme song, To Glory by Two Steps from Hell played out before Dallen appeared on the screen, sitting behind his desk. " Greetings. As you know, I am Dallen Thomsen, and I have some very exciting news for you today. I and my small team have created something brilliant, something that will blow your minds.

We have created, virtual reality. You can buy it today, for $20, at our stores anywhere in the world. However, there are limited copies, but a few lucky random people will find a card in the box which simply reads: "Congratulations, you have been chosen." They will have the chance to, and go into multiple multiverses. Have you ever wanted to travel to Middle-Earth, Narnia, Alagaesia, or the world of Percy Jackson? How about Marvel, or DC, or both of them combined, or Star Wars, or how about Redwall? Doctor Who perhaps? Perhaps you want to go to the world of Ranger's Apprentice, Tron or the world of books like Steelheart. The choice is yours. Dive into your favorite books and movies today. Even if you are not chosen, you still have the chance to go into all of your favorite fictional worlds. You can become your favorite characters, or you can invent an entirely new character and impact events. Became an Adventurer, a swashbuckler, a hero, a tank, a hunter, a thief, a warrior, a mage, a healer and more. If your favorite isn't in there currently, or you have a brilliant idea for one, please submit it, and we will most likely add it. However, there is a condition. One, only those of the ages of 15-18 will be allowed to join for now, sorry adults. But my final words are this, as is the logo for this game:
"Go therefore, where no kid has gone before. Become who you were born to be. Out there, is our future. Out there, is our destiny."
And on that day, June 15th of 2030, VRO: The Multiverse became available to the world.

This is where you are in. You, after filling out your application on your Tom laptop, were launched into Virtual Reality Online. But there was a problem. Unknown to you, and Dallen at the time, Evan had somehow managed to get into the servers of VRO and had put Dallen and his robots under siege. Wherever Dallen went, Evan went, making alliances with anyone and everything, and attacking Dallen and his small forces. Using the VRO version of our world, Evan was able to procure his weapons. Evan is now assembling an army, bred for a single purpose. To save our world from Dallen and put forth a new world order, with him in charge, the only person capable to stop Dallen, in his beliefs. Somehow, he has managed to find a way to bring virtual characters from VRO into our world. Dallen believes that Evan will destroy the world by bringing virtual characters into our world which he can't control. You must stop Dallen or Evan, or our world is doomed, depending on your point of view.You will do this by traveling with Dallen/Evan, making alliances of our own with the good factions of the Multiverse, but first, you must get to Dallen, who is currently under heavy siege by Evan's forces in an unknown world. Dallen is trapped but fortified in a mountain. You must break the siege and relieve Dallen's forces, or help Evan defeat Dallen. Good luck, the fate of the Multiverse and our world is in your hands. The choice is in your hands, who will you support? Who is the good guy, and who is the bad guy? The lines between the two sides appears blurred but you must decide, and the Multiverse will never be the same.

Need Help With: Interest, Plot.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

VRO: Round 2?

[Kassaran]

Welp, at the urging of a friend of mine, I'm going to begin writing up the Rough Draft of the Villain Academy that I had brought up in passing with him. He has not stopped with his threats to never talk to me again if I don't so in hopefully about an hour, I will have a thought out exposition to all of the ideas now cooking up in my head. Just thought some of you might want to know that.

[Kassaran]

RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Title: Divaunt's School for Extraordinary People

RP's Overarching Concept: Superhero ^^villain Academy

Genre/s:Superhero Supervillain Training 101 not certain how much more frank I can get...

Character or Faction Based: Character, without a doubt.

Detailed Description:

Somewhere in the deepest darkest forests of the planet where no mortal man dares to tread, there lies an structure sitting atop a single rock-crested hill, this... is Divant's house. He lives here in seclusion atop a mountain overlooking the bright and sunny city of Valehelm, and in this bright and sunny town, he has gone on to train thousands of talented young individuals in the arts of fighting those pesky and destructively moralistic heroes whom crop up in society every once in a while. The purpose of this academy? To weed out those not gifted with abilities from those are, and from those he separates them between those whom have minor abiilities and those who don't. This is the purpose of the academy, to train up supervillains and their powerful armies so that they can go out and rule the lands that have been left leaderless in the aftermath of so many wars that have stretched across the land. However, why is it that they are considered evil? Because they simply wish to rule over the land perhaps? Why is this so evil, what is evil, why is it so important that there are those whom are trained for the purpose of being evil? This is the purpose behind the Academy Divant has set up, to pursue the true purpose behind why there must be evil, by spawning uncontainable amounts of it, and thus stdying what becomes of that evil he sends out into the world.

Staffing the brillian,shining, and enormous campus of the School for Extraordinary People are the few supervillains whom have managed to find the reason behind why evil exists in the world, and have come back to report their findings to the Master Divant himself. Having proven their worth, they have moved on to becomme the leaders over all those prospective and wishful students now rising up through the ranks to try and become their own evil overlords over their own little dominions. That's where you come in, having been found as someone containing some inkling of power and influence in your hometown, you have been sent here to study the art of evil overlording, and hopefully, to become an apprentice to one of thousands of evil overlords spread out across the planet of Ginyanyg (Pronounced Jin-E-An-Ihg) as they return to spend time in Valehelm and relax. Indeed, reaping the benefits of being successful in their evil exploits, they come back to have their names entered into the Hall of Scum and Villainy and rest for a month allowing dozens of students to wait on them hand-and-foot in the hopes of learning something from these returning supervillains.

However, when one is not waiting on a supervillain, hoping to gather some sage and helpful advice, one can be in school, working hard and studying to become the best at being a villain. In this school, there are limited rules and the results of what happens based on those rules belong solely in the hands of the evil overlords now staffing the enormous complex. Your job, is to survive this school and come out as a fully-fledged and educated evil overlord being sent out into the world however there is an issue, out of each year, only six students can move up to the next rank, leaving the rest of their fellow acolytes to continue toiling in the dust below them or die. Indeed in order to graduate one must enter in a life-or-death competition to progress to the next rank, and with so many hopefuls each year, rarely the maximmum make it out of the battle alive and in one piece to continue on being overlords. However, upon successfully graduating to the next year, those whom have been slated to become evil overlords gain leadership over several lesser beings known only as minions and if they are lucky, throughout their years spent at the academy, they can accrue more underlings in the form of winning minions in battles, or enlisting actual students to become their henchmen and soldiers for when they as an evil overlord finally graduate.

Need Help With: Meh, just seeing if there's any interest in this idea, it's rough draft as I said before.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

[Togeria]

RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Title: Divaunt's School for Extraordinary People

RP's Overarching Concept: Superhero ^^villain Academy

Genre/s:Superhero Supervillain Training 101 not certain how much more frank I can get...

Character or Faction Based: Character, without a doubt.

Detailed Description:

Somewhere in the deepest darkest forests of the planet where no mortal man dares to tread, there lies an structure sitting atop a single rock-crested hill, this... is Divant's house. He lives here in seclusion atop a mountain overlooking the bright and sunny city of Valehelm, and in this bright and sunny town, he has gone on to train thousands of talented young individuals in the arts of fighting those pesky and destructively moralistic heroes whom crop up in society every once in a while. The purpose of this academy? To weed out those not gifted with abilities from those are, and from those he separates them between those whom have minor abiilities and those who don't. This is the purpose of the academy, to train up supervillains and their powerful armies so that they can go out and rule the lands that have been left leaderless in the aftermath of so many wars that have stretched across the land. However, why is it that they are considered evil? Because they simply wish to rule over the land perhaps? Why is this so evil, what is evil, why is it so important that there are those whom are trained for the purpose of being evil? This is the purpose behind the Academy Divant has set up, to pursue the true purpose behind why there must be evil, by spawning uncontainable amounts of it, and thus stdying what becomes of that evil he sends out into the world.

Staffing the brillian,shining, and enormous campus of the School for Extraordinary People are the few supervillains whom have managed to find the reason behind why evil exists in the world, and have come back to report their findings to the Master Divant himself. Having proven their worth, they have moved on to becomme the leaders over all those prospective and wishful students now rising up through the ranks to try and become their own evil overlords over their own little dominions. That's where you come in, having been found as someone containing some inkling of power and influence in your hometown, you have been sent here to study the art of evil overlording, and hopefully, to become an apprentice to one of thousands of evil overlords spread out across the planet of Ginyanyg (Pronounced Jin-E-An-Ihg) as they return to spend time in Valehelm and relax. Indeed, reaping the benefits of being successful in their evil exploits, they come back to have their names entered into the Hall of Scum and Villainy and rest for a month allowing dozens of students to wait on them hand-and-foot in the hopes of learning something from these returning supervillains.

However, when one is not waiting on a supervillain, hoping to gather some sage and helpful advice, one can be in school, working hard and studying to become the best at being a villain. In this school, there are limited rules and the results of what happens based on those rules belong solely in the hands of the evil overlords now staffing the enormous complex. Your job, is to survive this school and come out as a fully-fledged and educated evil overlord being sent out into the world however there is an issue, out of each year, only six students can move up to the next rank, leaving the rest of their fellow acolytes to continue toiling in the dust below them or die. Indeed in order to graduate one must enter in a life-or-death competition to progress to the next rank, and with so many hopefuls each year, rarely the maximmum make it out of the battle alive and in one piece to continue on being overlords. However, upon successfully graduating to the next year, those whom have been slated to become evil overlords gain leadership over several lesser beings known only as minions and if they are lucky, throughout their years spent at the academy, they can accrue more underlings in the form of winning minions in battles, or enlisting actual students to become their henchmen and soldiers for when they as an evil overlord finally graduate.

Need Help With: Meh, just seeing if there's any interest in this idea, it's rough draft as I said before.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

It has my interest.

[Kassaran]

It has my interest.

Good, I intend to teach people the ways of Peter Divant... the fictional character which will share in common with the famous evil overlord of reality the first name. Indeed I shall be covering all of the 300 or so rules for becoming an evil overlord over the course of various different classes present in the school, and likewise I shall expound upon each and let the players choose how to respond to each. There shall also be a test at the end of each unit which will judge someone on whether or not they passed or not. Cheating is allowed given this is a supervillain RP. No need for honor or doing the right thing here. It's every man for himself in the regards of succeeding, but now to decide what rules should be in place to keep everything remotely sane...

[TriStates]

It has my interest.

Good, I intend to teach people the ways of Peter Divant... the fictional character which will share in common with the famous evil overlord of reality the first name. Indeed I shall be covering all of the 300 or so rules for becoming an evil overlord over the course of various different classes present in the school, and likewise I shall expound upon each and let the players choose how to respond to each. There shall also be a test at the end of each unit which will judge someone on whether or not they passed or not. Cheating is allowed given this is a supervillain RP. No need for honor or doing the right thing here. It's every man for himself in the regards of succeeding, but now to decide what rules should be in place to keep everything remotely sane...

Sounds like Anarcho-Captialism with mind powers.

OOC ETA?

[Hotgrat]

RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
Name: Skies of Thunder/Thunderous Skies/Suggestions.
RP's Overarching Concept: Aerial warfare.
Genre/s: Warfare, Aerial.
Character or Faction Based: Character based, i think.
Detailed Description: After two months of instability in [To be decided], who is recovering from a failing economy, on the [Date and month] on the year 2025, a surprise attack is launched by the seemingly neutral neighbour, [To be decided]. The first few attacks cripple [Nation 1]'s military, and after having lost the entirety of their airforce, an emergency air squadron is created, named the Legendary Squadron. The unique about the Legendary Squadron (or LS, for short), is that pilot were no longer restricted to people from [Nation 1], but allowed others in.
If interest if found, more will be added.

Need Help With: Suggestions for thread name, ideas for a defender and an enemy, a more advanced backstory.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

[Tes Enger]

RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Title: Divaunt's School for Extraordinary People

RP's Overarching Concept: Superhero ^^villain Academy

Genre/s:Superhero Supervillain Training 101 not certain how much more frank I can get...

Character or Faction Based: Character, without a doubt.

Detailed Description:

Somewhere in the deepest darkest forests of the planet where no mortal man dares to tread, there lies an structure sitting atop a single rock-crested hill, this... is Divant's house. He lives here in seclusion atop a mountain overlooking the bright and sunny city of Valehelm, and in this bright and sunny town, he has gone on to train thousands of talented young individuals in the arts of fighting those pesky and destructively moralistic heroes whom crop up in society every once in a while. The purpose of this academy? To weed out those not gifted with abilities from those are, and from those he separates them between those whom have minor abiilities and those who don't. This is the purpose of the academy, to train up supervillains and their powerful armies so that they can go out and rule the lands that have been left leaderless in the aftermath of so many wars that have stretched across the land. However, why is it that they are considered evil? Because they simply wish to rule over the land perhaps? Why is this so evil, what is evil, why is it so important that there are those whom are trained for the purpose of being evil? This is the purpose behind the Academy Divant has set up, to pursue the true purpose behind why there must be evil, by spawning uncontainable amounts of it, and thus stdying what becomes of that evil he sends out into the world.

Staffing the brillian,shining, and enormous campus of the School for Extraordinary People are the few supervillains whom have managed to find the reason behind why evil exists in the world, and have come back to report their findings to the Master Divant himself. Having proven their worth, they have moved on to becomme the leaders over all those prospective and wishful students now rising up through the ranks to try and become their own evil overlords over their own little dominions. That's where you come in, having been found as someone containing some inkling of power and influence in your hometown, you have been sent here to study the art of evil overlording, and hopefully, to become an apprentice to one of thousands of evil overlords spread out across the planet of Ginyanyg (Pronounced Jin-E-An-Ihg) as they return to spend time in Valehelm and relax. Indeed, reaping the benefits of being successful in their evil exploits, they come back to have their names entered into the Hall of Scum and Villainy and rest for a month allowing dozens of students to wait on them hand-and-foot in the hopes of learning something from these returning supervillains.

However, when one is not waiting on a supervillain, hoping to gather some sage and helpful advice, one can be in school, working hard and studying to become the best at being a villain. In this school, there are limited rules and the results of what happens based on those rules belong solely in the hands of the evil overlords now staffing the enormous complex. Your job, is to survive this school and come out as a fully-fledged and educated evil overlord being sent out into the world however there is an issue, out of each year, only six students can move up to the next rank, leaving the rest of their fellow acolytes to continue toiling in the dust below them or die. Indeed in order to graduate one must enter in a life-or-death competition to progress to the next rank, and with so many hopefuls each year, rarely the maximmum make it out of the battle alive and in one piece to continue on being overlords. However, upon successfully graduating to the next year, those whom have been slated to become evil overlords gain leadership over several lesser beings known only as minions and if they are lucky, throughout their years spent at the academy, they can accrue more underlings in the form of winning minions in battles, or enlisting actual students to become their henchmen and soldiers for when they as an evil overlord finally graduate.

Need Help With: Meh, just seeing if there's any interest in this idea, it's rough draft as I said before.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

It's good to be bad.

[Nature-Spirits]

RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Title: Divaunt's School for Extraordinary People

RP's Overarching Concept: Superhero ^^villain Academy

Genre/s:Superhero Supervillain Training 101 not certain how much more frank I can get...

It's good to be bad.

If you want to be in a supervillain academy RP, make one or find an open already-existent one. Don't hijack other people's RP concepts.

[Tes Enger]

It's good to be bad.

If you want to be in a supervillain academy RP, make one or find an open already-existent one. Don't hijack other people's RP concepts.

Hijack? Who's hijacking anything? That was my way of saying I like it, not plagiarism.

[Ammar]

I'm thinking about doing a gladiator RP. Now the questions is, sci-fi or ancient Rome?

[Nature-Spirits]

If you want to be in a supervillain academy RP, make one or find an open already-existent one. Don't hijack other people's RP concepts.

Hijack? Who's hijacking anything? That was my way of saying I like it, not plagiarism.

I'm not saying you're plagiarising. I'm just saying that you shouldn't tell someone to completely change the concept of their RP. And if you like the idea as-is, then make that clear.

Oh! I'm sorry, I thought you were the one who added in the villain parts! My mistake!

[Kassaran]

Hijack? Who's hijacking anything? That was my way of saying I like it, not plagiarism.

I'm not saying you're plagiarising. I'm just saying that you shouldn't tell someone to completely change the concept of their RP. And if you like the idea as-is, then make that clear.

Oh! I'm sorry, I thought you were the one who added in the villain parts! My mistake!

*Looks around* Well, he did say it was good to be bad... but yeah, anyways that was just a concept post, but does anyone think it can be used as is?

[The Starlight]

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RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST

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Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: The new and better reboot of the previous VRO RP made by yours truly. A VR RP where you run around the various Multiverses, making alliances and fighting the people you think are bad in preparation for the final battle.
Genre/s: Virtual Reality
Character or Faction Based: Character
Detailed Description:

In the year 2030, Earth finally reached a new age, one of technology and discovery. A young boy, named Dallen Thomsen had burst onto the scene of the world. Dallen had single-handily advanced the world, inventing holograms, hoverboards, flying cars with no fuel emission, along with several popular video games and a new smartphone, better than all the rest, featuring an AI, connection to video game systems and could do basically anything that one wanted. The brand, was simply known as Tom. Dallen also facilitated the reemergence of renewable energy systems, making wind turbines noiseless, popularizing hybrid cars with the Thomsen car, powered by water alone. He made solar panels more effective, and procured a way to retrieve energy from the tides cheaply and inexpensively. He was arguably one of the greatest mind the world had ever seen. Gas and oil were nonexistent, Africa was self-dependent and there were no "third-world countries." Everyone had enough to eat, and a place to eat. Child prostitution was gone, epidemics and diseases were stomped out with very little loss of life.The threat of nuclear war became apparent as tensions became hot between the West and Russia, but Dallen ended that, creating a shield that could shield entire cities, powered by a high tech shield generator. He then secretly traveled all over the world, occurred anymore.

The world was at peace, all thanks to this young man, who quickly became the richest in the world, thanks to his ingenuity and apparent charisma. He had created a company, Thomsen Tech, and the slogan was simply "For the future." He was the epitome of the Renaissance man. He was a master cellist, fencer, played soccer, and was at the top of his classes, far beyond his classmates. He managed to invent the first sonic screwdriver, being a immense fan of Doctor Who, though Thomsen Tech didn't release it for sale. That prompted BBC to hire Dallen as the 15th Doctor, who he would act as after the 14th Doctor's time was up.
But his success made him proud and quite haughty at time, due to all that he had done for the world. He was quite the workaholic and he impacted all of those around him, having high expectations of them, expecting all of those in his company Thomsen Tech to be as "perfect" as he was. He tended to ramble on, not paying attention to others, making some feel hurt. And in public, his words and actions made others feel unfulfilled and drove several people who tried to follow his example to exhaustion and comas, in rare cases. Though he had his fans, many were disillusioned with the college genius. But his loyalty to his company and those close to him was unsurpassed and he had a good heart inside. At his best he was a brilliant, hopeful and optimistic genius, at his worst, a demanding, annoying and infuriating man.
But if there was one man to match Dallen Thomsen, it was Evan Rigerson.They were the Google vs Apple of their time, the lion and the tiger and the Doctor and the Master of their world. But who was which? They had gone to the same school up into college, and whatever Dallen did, Evan Rigerson was close behind, or at times, just ahead. The two had started out as friends but as they got older, it became clear that Evan was jealous of Dallen, but then again, who wouldn't be? Dallen formed Thomsen Tech, Evan, Rigerson Corporations. All that Evan did ever since out of pure green envy, at the success and opportunities Dallen had had. Evan became totally obssessed with the defeat of Thomsen Tech and its creator, forming Rigerson Corp. to attempt to wrest control and influence from Dallen. He believed that Dallen had some malicious scheme, that he had created all these things and done all this in a master plan to control the world, and it was Evan's job to stop him. Rigerson Corp soon became headed by a conspiracy theorist, who was so intent on the defeat of Thomsen and his company that he would sacrifice anything and everything, including his morals. Dallen thought of Evan as a once brilliant colleague who had now become a fruit fly buzzing around him, always close behind, hindering him and attempting to stop the world from becoming a better place. Dallen regarded Evan as annoying, Evan looked at Dallen with an obsession which had become pure hate.

Thomsen Tech specialized in all future tech, along with being a research and development company for all fields.

One day, Thomsen Tech made an announcement. Their theme song, To Glory by Two Steps from Hell played out before Dallen appeared on the screen, sitting behind his desk. " Greetings. As you know, I am Dallen Thomsen, and I have some very exciting news for you today. I and my small team have created something brilliant, something that will blow your minds.

We have created, virtual reality. You can buy it today, for $20, at our stores anywhere in the world. However, there are limited copies, but a few lucky random people will find a card in the box which simply reads: "Congratulations, you have been chosen." They will have the chance to, and go into multiple multiverses. Have you ever wanted to travel to Middle-Earth, Narnia, Alagaesia, or the world of Percy Jackson? How about Marvel, or DC, or both of them combined, or Star Wars, or how about Redwall? Doctor Who perhaps? Perhaps you want to go to the world of Ranger's Apprentice, Tron or the world of books like Steelheart. The choice is yours. Dive into your favorite books and movies today. Even if you are not chosen, you still have the chance to go into all of your favorite fictional worlds. You can become your favorite characters, or you can invent an entirely new character and impact events. Became an Adventurer, a swashbuckler, a hero, a tank, a hunter, a thief, a warrior, a mage, a healer and more. If your favorite isn't in there currently, or you have a brilliant idea for one, please submit it, and we will most likely add it. However, there is a condition. One, only those of the ages of 15-18 will be allowed to join for now, sorry adults. But my final words are this, as is the logo for this game:
"Go therefore, where no kid has gone before. Become who you were born to be. Out there, is our future. Out there, is our destiny."
And on that day, June 15th of 2030, VRO: The Multiverse became available to the world.

This is where you are in. You, after filling out your application on your Tom laptop, were launched into Virtual Reality Online. But there was a problem. Unknown to you, and Dallen at the time, Evan had somehow managed to get into the servers of VRO and had put Dallen and his robots under siege. Wherever Dallen went, Evan went, making alliances with anyone and everything, and attacking Dallen and his small forces. Using the VRO version of our world, Evan was able to procure his weapons. Evan is now assembling an army, bred for a single purpose. To save our world from Dallen and put forth a new world order, with him in charge, the only person capable to stop Dallen, in his beliefs. Somehow, he has managed to find a way to bring virtual characters from VRO into our world. Dallen believes that Evan will destroy the world by bringing virtual characters into our world which he can't control. You must stop Dallen or Evan, or our world is doomed, depending on your point of view.You will do this by traveling with Dallen/Evan, making alliances of our own with the good factions of the Multiverse, but first, you must get to Dallen, who is currently under heavy siege by Evan's forces in an unknown world. Dallen is trapped but fortified in a mountain. You must break the siege and relieve Dallen's forces, or help Evan defeat Dallen. Good luck, the fate of the Multiverse and our world is in your hands. The choice is in your hands, who will you support? Who is the good guy, and who is the bad guy? The lines between the two sides appears blurred but you must decide, and the Multiverse will never be the same.

Need Help With: Interest, Plot.

Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

VRO: Round 2?

Yep, the reboot.

[The Starlight]

The reboot of Virtual Reality Online is up!
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=322292

[Escalan Corps-Star Island]

The reboot of Virtual Reality Online is up!
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=322292

私はその後、キリトだ。
Looks fun. I hope I have time. . .

[The Starlight]

The reboot of Virtual Reality Online is up!
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=322292

私はその後、キリトだ。
Looks fun. I hope I have time. . .

Hopefully, you will.

[The Starlight]

I know that I just launched an RP, but I suddenly got another brilliant idea for a series of RPs, based on Brandon Sanderson's high fantasy books. They are some of the most epic books I've ever read, and though they're long, it's not too wordy and I encourage all with enough patience to read them. So, I ask, do we have any other Sanderson fans here?