Maybe I can set it somewhere else, like an amusement park? There could also be like investigators, but that wouldn't work since that actually makes sense.
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by Ammar » Sun Oct 19, 2014 1:58 pm

by Quamunsia » Sun Oct 19, 2014 2:19 pm
Ammar wrote:Quamunsia wrote:Too much of an enclosed setting. Also, how would it even work? Would half the players be employees/night guards and the other half mechanical animals?
Maybe I can set it somewhere else, like an amusement park? There could also be like investigators, but that wouldn't work since that actually makes sense.

by Ammar » Sun Oct 19, 2014 2:29 pm
Quamunsia wrote:Ammar wrote:Maybe I can set it somewhere else, like an amusement park? There could also be like investigators, but that wouldn't work since that actually makes sense.
Well, that would be better. However, there would have to be some sort of day-to-night mechanic since the robots only turn malevolent at night. But the switch to Amusement Park sounds cool.

by The Empire of Pretantia » Sun Oct 19, 2014 3:19 pm
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The Empire of Pretantia wrote:I think you're better off not doing 5NaF at all.

by Ammar » Sun Oct 19, 2014 3:33 pm
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by Quamunsia » Sun Oct 19, 2014 5:10 pm
Abserdia wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: 2 groups of gods compete to have the greatest solar system in the galaxy.
Genre/s: God, Space. (Or sci-fi, if you will.)
Character or Faction Based: A bit of both.
Detailed Description: A god named Guardian was created to watch the galaxy named Maximus, created by other gods. He was created by Watcher, because watching these 600+ systems at once was difficult. Later Watcher defected to another galaxy. After Maximus was almost completely abandoned, because of a raid by other gods, Guardian decided to start from scratch. It took 3.4 mil years to erase everything he watched. And another 4.7 mil to create these solar systems. But after 23 thousand years of creating these two systems, he decided to create two groups of gods. Bent on pleasing the Guardian, they could have almost complete power of the entire galaxy if they dethroned Guardian. They will now have to decide how to destroy the others. Thus started the Tale of Two Systems. These gods can change planets, orbits, comets, asteroids, the temperature of the sun, you can even betray or defect to the other solar system. Create intelligent life, create moons, and even raid the other system. If it's impossible, you can do it!
Need Help With: Story.
Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

by The Empire of Pretantia » Sun Oct 19, 2014 5:12 pm

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by Quamunsia » Sun Oct 19, 2014 5:39 pm
RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
RP's Overarching Concept: It takes place in the Godzilla Universe in which the players must save mankind.
Genre/s: Science Fiction, Action, Tokusatsu
Character or Faction Based: Character
Detailed Description: The year is 2037, and for decades humanity has struggled fighting a menace that they have never seen before. Kaiju from all corners of our planet and the cosmos are destroying Man's final refuges. But none are as powerful as The King; Godzilla. There are five major organizations (Monarch, G-Force, CCI, Red Bamboo, and the Xilieans) who wish to eliminate their competition and survive in a world now dominated by monsters. The surviving factions wage war with the Kaiju and each other with their Jaegers and other forms of advanced weaponry.
Need Help With: Revising, Gaining Interest
Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp

by Ammar » Sun Oct 19, 2014 5:40 pm

by The Mausoleum » Sun Oct 19, 2014 5:51 pm

by Quamunsia » Sun Oct 19, 2014 6:03 pm
The Mausoleum wrote:Hello everyone, you might remember me as The Ferret Revolution from other RP's I've made. Well I'm back and with a new name making a new, equally as dark as usual, RP. Ever wonder what it would be like if the demons were the ones watching over and protecting you?
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=316598

by Zeinbrad » Sun Oct 19, 2014 6:31 pm
Zeinbrad wrote:Basically Space Marines chapter, the Silver Eaters, gets sucked into a void of the warp and are stuck in their for a few hundred years occasionally coming out of the warp only to be sucked back in.
Then they find a way out but have to fight through a Tomb world which is filled with all kinds of Necrons So they fight a one year campaign (known as the Arrival of Silver) to get back home. Much of the Chapter will be lost in this campaign (which will be larger than most Space Marine chapters so we don't run out of shit, but we will be outnumbered.)
Thoughts?

by The Mausoleum » Sun Oct 19, 2014 6:39 pm
Quamunsia wrote:The Mausoleum wrote:Hello everyone, you might remember me as The Ferret Revolution from other RP's I've made. Well I'm back and with a new name making a new, equally as dark as usual, RP. Ever wonder what it would be like if the demons were the ones watching over and protecting you?
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?f=31&t=316598
Not bad... not bad...

by Abserdia » Mon Oct 20, 2014 7:35 am
Quamunsia wrote:Abserdia wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
Please provide as much detail as possible.
RP's Overarching Concept: 2 groups of gods compete to have the greatest solar system in the galaxy.
Genre/s: God, Space. (Or sci-fi, if you will.)
Character or Faction Based: A bit of both.
Detailed Description: A god named Guardian was created to watch the galaxy named Maximus, created by other gods. He was created by Watcher, because watching these 600+ systems at once was difficult. Later Watcher defected to another galaxy. After Maximus was almost completely abandoned, because of a raid by other gods, Guardian decided to start from scratch. It took 3.4 mil years to erase everything he watched. And another 4.7 mil to create these solar systems. But after 23 thousand years of creating these two systems, he decided to create two groups of gods. Bent on pleasing the Guardian, they could have almost complete power of the entire galaxy if they dethroned Guardian. They will now have to decide how to destroy the others. Thus started the Tale of Two Systems. These gods can change planets, orbits, comets, asteroids, the temperature of the sun, you can even betray or defect to the other solar system. Create intelligent life, create moons, and even raid the other system. If it's impossible, you can do it!
Need Help With: Story.
Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp
So many RP's lately involving gods. I'd like to know what you think separates this idea from other god-oriented roleplays, aside from the sci-fi aspect. I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just extremely curious.
Edit: Never mind what I said, after some thought, your idea is actually pretty awesome.

by Zarkenis Ultima » Mon Oct 20, 2014 4:54 pm
Quamunsia wrote:RP INTEREST AND FEEDBACK REQUEST
RP's Overarching Concept: It takes place in the Godzilla Universe in which the players must save mankind.
Genre/s: Science Fiction, Action, Tokusatsu
Character or Faction Based: Character
Detailed Description: The year is 2037, and for decades humanity has struggled fighting a menace that they have never seen before. Kaiju from all corners of our planet and the cosmos are destroying Man's final refuges. But none are as powerful as The King; Godzilla. There are five major organizations (Monarch, G-Force, CCI, Red Bamboo, and the Xilieans) who wish to eliminate their competition and survive in a world now dominated by monsters. The surviving factions wage war with the Kaiju and each other with their Jaegers and other forms of advanced weaponry.
This is it
Need Help With: Revising, Gaining Interest
Please leave this hashtag in place: #Mentorhelp
Zeinbrad wrote:Zeinbrad wrote:Basically Space Marines chapter, the Silver Eaters, gets sucked into a void of the warp and are stuck in their for a few hundred years occasionally coming out of the warp only to be sucked back in.
Then they find a way out but have to fight through a Tomb world which is filled with all kinds of Necrons So they fight a one year campaign (known as the Arrival of Silver) to get back home. Much of the Chapter will be lost in this campaign (which will be larger than most Space Marine chapters so we don't run out of shit, but we will be outnumbered.)
Thoughts?
Hello?
Abserdia wrote:Quamunsia wrote:So many RP's lately involving gods. I'd like to know what you think separates this idea from other god-oriented roleplays, aside from the sci-fi aspect. I'm not saying it's bad, I'm just extremely curious.
Edit: Never mind what I said, after some thought, your idea is actually pretty awesome.
Any ideas to improve it?
These are my gods in plan to be created.
Sun God: (Controls the temperature of the Sun. Vital for planets to survive)
Rock Planet God: (Creates Solid Planets)
Gas Giant God: (Creates Gas Giants)
Bacteria God: (Creates bacteria)
Orbit God: (Required for Intelligent Life that exists only in certain temperatures)
Polar God: (Creates the Polar Ice Caps of a planet. Required for life that thrives on water or ice)
Comet God: (Creates and controls comets)
Asteroid God: (Creates and controls asteroids)
Still a w.i.p though.

by The Empire of Pretantia » Mon Oct 20, 2014 5:03 pm
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