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New Babylonia
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Postby New Babylonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:55 am

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New Babylonia wrote:
I don't think so.... *The guard commander bursts in*

"My Princess! We have an urgent situation, you are needed downstairs immediately!" He shouts, before the door closes.

"So much for not wearing clothes."


(I tried editing that, interwebs was slow.)
The power of self is unlimited and ultimate, an unending wave of pure energy and being that could never be stopped, apart from time and forever ingrained into the fabrics of all being, this is the truth of Korrelian Existentialism.

⚧Copy and paste this in your sig if you passed biology and know gender and sex aren't the same thing ⚧
Pronouns? Just use whatever, it's all the same to me :P
You will always have your friends, with your friends, you will never be alone. There will always be a light. Friendship is Magic, its the magic that brings the most glimmering lights of hope to the darkest of worlds. And as long as you have it, you will never have to be afraid of the dark. - Me, New Babylonia ^^

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Postby Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:57 am

New Babylonia wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:(I still view your characters unrealistic, even after you pointed out these views, and indeed, you need to.)


(I try, no easy though. Being oppressed forever as a child makes your imagination difficult to handle. And sadly Mak is the most realistic...although the only working, perfected weapons he has is a sword and a flintlock rifle. Yeah...i see your point.)

(*sigh* Maybe you should consider having your characters more laid-back, see the 'Roo, for an example, that's my goal, making TSB more laid-back than of a dramatic series...)


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Lonbonia";p="<a href="tel:18539151">18539151</a> wrote:"It's practically a huge village..."

"Any significant details there that I may know of?"

"The place is all sand."
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Kyzanthia
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Postby Kyzanthia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:58 am

(Gtg don't start the fighting without meh)
List of Characters: Elliot Domnall: 19 year old Sarcus demon (recently resurrected). and Mathias's younger brother. Brown hair/ eyes and is white. he can't swim and is terrified of water. He is sort of a hipster but wears a tee shirt and jeans. Both are both are blank. his hair is shaggy and he is in shape but nothing over the top. He is married to Lilly.

Baf:
a 100 year old dwarf blacksmith. loves whiskey and his axe.
DECEASED

Mathias Domnall (Elliot's older brother): A rogue fugitive of the Federation's Space Navy. He is dressed in fatigues and carries a rifle. He is 23 and dating Jacob

I support thermonuclear warfare. Do you?
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Sungai Pusat
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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:59 am

Lonbonia wrote:
New Babylonia wrote:
(I try, no easy though. Being oppressed forever as a child makes your imagination difficult to handle. And sadly Mak is the most realistic...although the only working, perfected weapons he has is a sword and a flintlock rifle. Yeah...i see your point.)

(*sigh* Maybe you should consider having your characters more laid-back, see the 'Roo, for an example, that's my goal, making TSB more laid-back than of a dramatic series...)


(Setting up the backdrop for a nomad invasion doesn't sound like the best way to go about it... neither is allowing for disaster after disaster to strike...)

Sungai Pusat wrote:"Any significant details there that I may know of?"

"The place is all sand."

She nodded and pictured a large village smacked in the middle of an arid desert, her horn glowing as she did so.
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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:59 am

Kyzanthia wrote:(Gtg don't start the fighting without meh)

(K.)
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Postby New Babylonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:59 am

Lonbonia wrote:
New Babylonia wrote:
(I try, no easy though. Being oppressed forever as a child makes your imagination difficult to handle. And sadly Mak is the most realistic...although the only working, perfected weapons he has is a sword and a flintlock rifle. Yeah...i see your point.)

(*sigh* Maybe you should consider having your characters more laid-back, see the 'Roo, for an example, that's my goal, making TSB more laid-back than of a dramatic series...)


Sungai Pusat wrote:"Any significant details there that I may know of?"

"The place is all sand."


(I have begun working on idea for doing just that...but knowing my ideas it'll take awhile to kill all the other...ridiculous, stuff. I'm sure it can be done, though. I believe in myself :P)
The power of self is unlimited and ultimate, an unending wave of pure energy and being that could never be stopped, apart from time and forever ingrained into the fabrics of all being, this is the truth of Korrelian Existentialism.

⚧Copy and paste this in your sig if you passed biology and know gender and sex aren't the same thing ⚧
Pronouns? Just use whatever, it's all the same to me :P
You will always have your friends, with your friends, you will never be alone. There will always be a light. Friendship is Magic, its the magic that brings the most glimmering lights of hope to the darkest of worlds. And as long as you have it, you will never have to be afraid of the dark. - Me, New Babylonia ^^

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Postby Morlodania » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:00 am

Sungai Pusat wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:

*Glances at menu once more, then orders something, I have no clue what, though*
Beware, I live
Prophet of MorloKitty!

Officially Thernsymantic!
Statty: Un-Daughter
New Cinoth: Insane Mistress
Sungai: Cousin of Sorts
Pinki3: Living Cupcake
LadyRebels: The Witch
Fort: That Crazy Guy in the Corner
Gidge: The Fluffy Queen
Valerie: Vampire Cookie Queen
Glee: Glee-chan
Greater Appalachia: The Ghost
Earthy/Uni: Platonic Lover
Nana: Kitteh Mama

Gallade wrote:My Little Morlo, Abduction is Magic~

I am the Night. I am Nightmare and Shadow, I am Fear and Death, I am Rest and Peace. I am your deepest Fears, I am your greatest Comfort. I am all you hide from, and yet, I am all you want.

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Postby Morlodania » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:00 am

Dillistan wrote:
Morlodania wrote:*Miranda is still with Sun*

*I think Val is still with Blood...*

*Trit is... Hell, I dunno*

*Stacy looks for somebody to flirt with*

Halene grabs Stacy and drags her over to Rionus. "Meet uncle Rion!"

"Okay, then!"
Beware, I live
Prophet of MorloKitty!

Officially Thernsymantic!
Statty: Un-Daughter
New Cinoth: Insane Mistress
Sungai: Cousin of Sorts
Pinki3: Living Cupcake
LadyRebels: The Witch
Fort: That Crazy Guy in the Corner
Gidge: The Fluffy Queen
Valerie: Vampire Cookie Queen
Glee: Glee-chan
Greater Appalachia: The Ghost
Earthy/Uni: Platonic Lover
Nana: Kitteh Mama

Gallade wrote:My Little Morlo, Abduction is Magic~

I am the Night. I am Nightmare and Shadow, I am Fear and Death, I am Rest and Peace. I am your deepest Fears, I am your greatest Comfort. I am all you hide from, and yet, I am all you want.

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Lonbonia
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Postby Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:00 am

Sungai Pusat wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:(*sigh* Maybe you should consider having your characters more laid-back, see the 'Roo, for an example, that's my goal, making TSB more laid-back than of a dramatic series...)


(Setting up the backdrop for a nomad invasion doesn't sound like the best way to go about it... neither is allowing for disaster after disaster to strike...)

"The place is all sand."

She nodded and pictured a large village smacked in the middle of an arid desert, her horn glowing as she did so.

(Well, I'll do the goal soon after 500 pages.)

Tanto sighs and grips the handle of his sword.
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Dillistan
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Postby Dillistan » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:01 am

New Babylonia wrote:
Dillistan wrote:"So much for not wearing clothes."


(I tried editing that, interwebs was slow.)

(Ignore the clothes thing)
"I think being out of breath is fun. Because usually it involves you putting me in a ecstatic state of pleasure."
Mother: Nitralia
Sensei: Vandoosa
Big brother: The Non
Little sister: Tsuyoi tekikoku
Cousin: Morlodania
Other Cousin: Fortitudinem
Unconsciously gives really good advice. Tg me if you need any advice.
❤LOGIC BOMBED BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:02 am

Lonbonia wrote:
Sungai Pusat wrote:
(Setting up the backdrop for a nomad invasion doesn't sound like the best way to go about it... neither is allowing for disaster after disaster to strike...)


She nodded and pictured a large village smacked in the middle of an arid desert, her horn glowing as she did so.

(Well, I'll do the goal soon after 500 pages.)

Tanto sighs and grips the handle of his sword.

(Okay then.)

Horseshoes inhaled deeply and cast the spell, momentarily blinding Tanto with the bright light before they vanished from the barracks, appearing on top of a sand dune.
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Postby New Babylonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:03 am

Dillistan wrote:
New Babylonia wrote:
(I tried editing that, interwebs was slow.)

(Ignore the clothes thing)
"I think being out of breath is fun. Because usually it involves you putting me in a ecstatic state of pleasure."


Finally, someone who understands! *Giggles*
The power of self is unlimited and ultimate, an unending wave of pure energy and being that could never be stopped, apart from time and forever ingrained into the fabrics of all being, this is the truth of Korrelian Existentialism.

⚧Copy and paste this in your sig if you passed biology and know gender and sex aren't the same thing ⚧
Pronouns? Just use whatever, it's all the same to me :P
You will always have your friends, with your friends, you will never be alone. There will always be a light. Friendship is Magic, its the magic that brings the most glimmering lights of hope to the darkest of worlds. And as long as you have it, you will never have to be afraid of the dark. - Me, New Babylonia ^^

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Lonbonia
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Postby Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:03 am

Sungai Pusat wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:(Well, I'll do the goal soon after 500 pages.)

Tanto sighs and grips the handle of his sword.

(Okay then.)

Horseshoes inhaled deeply and cast the spell, momentarily blinding Tanto with the bright light before they vanished from the barracks, appearing on top of a sand dune.

Tanto blinks, and aims at southwest, where a huge, scattered groups of villages are there. "There's the tribe!"
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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:04 am

Morlodania wrote:
Sungai Pusat wrote:

*Glances at menu once more, then orders something, I have no clue what, though*

He shrugged, the waitress simply took note of the items and smiled. "Would you like to have water served?"

Sungai nodded. "Give us a pitcher of water and two cups of water, please." She nodded and walked away.
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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:04 am

Lonbonia wrote:
Sungai Pusat wrote:(Okay then.)

Horseshoes inhaled deeply and cast the spell, momentarily blinding Tanto with the bright light before they vanished from the barracks, appearing on top of a sand dune.

Tanto blinks, and aims at southwest, where a huge, scattered groups of villages are there. "There's the tribe!"

She gasped. "So we're here..." She began walking towards the groups of villages, placing a hoof over her eyes.
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Dillistan
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Postby Dillistan » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:05 am

Morlodania wrote:
Dillistan wrote:Halene grabs Stacy and drags her over to Rionus. "Meet uncle Rion!"

"Okay, then!"

"Stace-Stace meet Uncle Rion." Rionus takes off his helmet and looks at them. "Hello."
Mother: Nitralia
Sensei: Vandoosa
Big brother: The Non
Little sister: Tsuyoi tekikoku
Cousin: Morlodania
Other Cousin: Fortitudinem
Unconsciously gives really good advice. Tg me if you need any advice.
❤LOGIC BOMBED BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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Postby Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:07 am

Sungai Pusat wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:Tanto blinks, and aims at southwest, where a huge, scattered groups of villages are there. "There's the tribe!"

She gasped. "So we're here..." She began walking towards the groups of villages, placing a hoof over her eyes.

Suddenly, 30 soldiers appear from the village, running to Horseshoes.

Tanto holds the grip of his sword, following Horseshoes.
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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:08 am

Lonbonia wrote:
Sungai Pusat wrote:She gasped. "So we're here..." She began walking towards the groups of villages, placing a hoof over her eyes.

Suddenly, 30 soldiers appear from the village, running to Horseshoes.

Tanto holds the grip of his sword, following Horseshoes.

She skidded to a stop, causing some of the sand to fly off a little, and stared at the approaching soldiers.
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Lonbonia
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Postby Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:10 am

Sungai Pusat wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:Suddenly, 30 soldiers appear from the village, running to Horseshoes.

Tanto holds the grip of his sword, following Horseshoes.

She skidded to a stop, causing some of the sand to fly off a little, and stared at the approaching soldiers.

Suddenly, a thrown javelin can be seen approaching Horseshoes.
The Empire of Lonbonia wishes to greet you!

Would you like to make an embassy in our nation? Please do so!

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Dillistan
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Postby Dillistan » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:11 am

New Babylonia wrote:
Dillistan wrote:(Ignore the clothes thing)
"I think being out of breath is fun. Because usually it involves you putting me in a ecstatic state of pleasure."


Finally, someone who understands! *Giggles*

"You did bring me to that understanding, thank you." *kisses her deeply*
Mother: Nitralia
Sensei: Vandoosa
Big brother: The Non
Little sister: Tsuyoi tekikoku
Cousin: Morlodania
Other Cousin: Fortitudinem
Unconsciously gives really good advice. Tg me if you need any advice.
❤LOGIC BOMBED BY THE VAMPIRE QUEEN OF COOKIES❤

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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:11 am

Lonbonia wrote:
Sungai Pusat wrote:She skidded to a stop, causing some of the sand to fly off a little, and stared at the approaching soldiers.

Suddenly, a thrown javelin can be seen approaching Horseshoes.

Horseshoes stopped the javelin and struck it down to the ground.

"Seize your fire!" She cried out. "We come in peace!"
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Postby Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:12 am

Sungai Pusat wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:Suddenly, a thrown javelin can be seen approaching Horseshoes.

Horseshoes stopped the javelin and struck it down to the ground.

"Seize your fire!" She cried out. "We come in peace!"

The soldiers charge at Horseshoes with battle cries.

Tanto unsheathes his sword and charges at them as well.
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Postby New Babylonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:12 am

Dillistan wrote:
New Babylonia wrote:
Finally, someone who understands! *Giggles*

"You did bring me to that understanding, thank you." *kisses her deeply*


*Kisses back* You mean i had to bring you there? You didn't already know? Well, you have come far my young pupil.
The power of self is unlimited and ultimate, an unending wave of pure energy and being that could never be stopped, apart from time and forever ingrained into the fabrics of all being, this is the truth of Korrelian Existentialism.

⚧Copy and paste this in your sig if you passed biology and know gender and sex aren't the same thing ⚧
Pronouns? Just use whatever, it's all the same to me :P
You will always have your friends, with your friends, you will never be alone. There will always be a light. Friendship is Magic, its the magic that brings the most glimmering lights of hope to the darkest of worlds. And as long as you have it, you will never have to be afraid of the dark. - Me, New Babylonia ^^

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Postby Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:14 am

Lonbonia wrote:
Sungai Pusat wrote:Horseshoes stopped the javelin and struck it down to the ground.

"Seize your fire!" She cried out. "We come in peace!"

The soldiers charge at Horseshoes with battle cries.

Tanto unsheathes his sword and charges at them as well.

She sighed and cast a shield surrounding herself, walking slowly towards the approaching cry.
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Lonbonia
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Postby Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:15 am

Sungai Pusat wrote:
Lonbonia wrote:The soldiers charge at Horseshoes with battle cries.

Tanto unsheathes his sword and charges at them as well.

She sighed and cast a shield surrounding herself, walking slowly towards the approaching cry.

They change to Tanto's direction, charging at him.

Tanto soon approaches them and pierces his blade through the stomach of a soldier.
The Empire of Lonbonia wishes to greet you!

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