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by New Babylonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:55 am

by Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:57 am
New Babylonia wrote:Lonbonia wrote:(I still view your characters unrealistic, even after you pointed out these views, and indeed, you need to.)
(I try, no easy though. Being oppressed forever as a child makes your imagination difficult to handle. And sadly Mak is the most realistic...although the only working, perfected weapons he has is a sword and a flintlock rifle. Yeah...i see your point.)
Sungai Pusat wrote:Lonbonia";p="<a href="tel:18539151">18539151</a> wrote:"It's practically a huge village..."
"Any significant details there that I may know of?"

by Kyzanthia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:58 am

by Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:59 am
Lonbonia wrote:New Babylonia wrote:
(I try, no easy though. Being oppressed forever as a child makes your imagination difficult to handle. And sadly Mak is the most realistic...although the only working, perfected weapons he has is a sword and a flintlock rifle. Yeah...i see your point.)
(*sigh* Maybe you should consider having your characters more laid-back, see the 'Roo, for an example, that's my goal, making TSB more laid-back than of a dramatic series...)
Sungai Pusat wrote:"Any significant details there that I may know of?"
"The place is all sand."

by Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:59 am
Kyzanthia wrote:(Gtg don't start the fighting without meh)

by New Babylonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 6:59 am
Lonbonia wrote:New Babylonia wrote:
(I try, no easy though. Being oppressed forever as a child makes your imagination difficult to handle. And sadly Mak is the most realistic...although the only working, perfected weapons he has is a sword and a flintlock rifle. Yeah...i see your point.)
(*sigh* Maybe you should consider having your characters more laid-back, see the 'Roo, for an example, that's my goal, making TSB more laid-back than of a dramatic series...)Sungai Pusat wrote:"Any significant details there that I may know of?"
"The place is all sand."
)
by Morlodania » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:00 am
Gallade wrote:My Little Morlo, Abduction is Magic~

by Morlodania » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:00 am
Gallade wrote:My Little Morlo, Abduction is Magic~

by Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:00 am
Sungai Pusat wrote:Lonbonia wrote:(*sigh* Maybe you should consider having your characters more laid-back, see the 'Roo, for an example, that's my goal, making TSB more laid-back than of a dramatic series...)
(Setting up the backdrop for a nomad invasion doesn't sound like the best way to go about it... neither is allowing for disaster after disaster to strike...)"The place is all sand."
She nodded and pictured a large village smacked in the middle of an arid desert, her horn glowing as she did so.

by Dillistan » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:01 am

by Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:02 am
Lonbonia wrote:Sungai Pusat wrote:
(Setting up the backdrop for a nomad invasion doesn't sound like the best way to go about it... neither is allowing for disaster after disaster to strike...)
She nodded and pictured a large village smacked in the middle of an arid desert, her horn glowing as she did so.
(Well, I'll do the goal soon after 500 pages.)
Tanto sighs and grips the handle of his sword.

by New Babylonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:03 am

by Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:03 am
Sungai Pusat wrote:Lonbonia wrote:(Well, I'll do the goal soon after 500 pages.)
Tanto sighs and grips the handle of his sword.
(Okay then.)
Horseshoes inhaled deeply and cast the spell, momentarily blinding Tanto with the bright light before they vanished from the barracks, appearing on top of a sand dune.

by Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:04 am

by Sungai Pusat » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:04 am
Lonbonia wrote:Sungai Pusat wrote:(Okay then.)
Horseshoes inhaled deeply and cast the spell, momentarily blinding Tanto with the bright light before they vanished from the barracks, appearing on top of a sand dune.
Tanto blinks, and aims at southwest, where a huge, scattered groups of villages are there. "There's the tribe!"

by Dillistan » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:05 am

by Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:07 am

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by Lonbonia » Fri Jan 24, 2014 7:12 am

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