Cadia wrote:Fnordgasm 5 wrote:
Ah.. perhaps you need some tremelo on that last "wha" to make it clearer.. and then some way of displaying that tremelo in text form that makes it obvious to the readers that that was the effect you were going for. How about you work on that and I'll come up with another "Hey, how about those BLANK" joke for you to test it on?
I'll change it up a bit.
Instead of a trumpet (as vibrato is really hard to convey in text form), how bout' I throw a tomato at you? And if that's not enough, how bout' a brick?
Bricks are funny. Well, funnier.




