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Ideas for a post-apocalyptic world

Postby Shadowwell » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:22 am

Hello fellow denizens of Nationstates, this thread will be a discussion in order to help me come up with good ideas for weapons and the like in a post apocalyptic world for one of more than a dozen novels that I have started to write. the world itself will be essentially a cross between fallout and Rage with some of my own ideas thrown in. if this is not where it is supposed to be or if this sort of thread is frowned upon tell me and I shall take it down or whatever needs to be done, be aware that I may or may not comply right away seeing as how my access to the interwebs is intermittent at best.
EDIT: below there will be rough information about the world and the technology, beings, and Items contained within.
The world: this story will take place about a hundred years in the future, in a post apocalyptic America.
The people: the vast majority of Americas population will be in vaults similar to those in Fallout. All of the original people who were sent into the vaults had nanotech within them. the Nanobots will be carried down through the peoples bloodlines to there descendants. the purpose of the Nanobots are to keep the inhabitants healthy. they are also the key to operating the more advanced weaponry and armor left behind in the Armory Vaults.
The Vaults: the vaults in my world will be substantially larger than those featured in fallout. there will be the community vaults which will house the people and the food, water, and energy sources. then their will be vaults which have/had a minimal amount of human occupants, these vaults will hold the guns and other militaristic devices for the vaults to take back their regions when the world can support them.
The Characters: so far I have Only thought up two definite characters, the protagonist and the antagonist.
Protagonist: he will be booted from the vault early on in the novel after I describe the events that caused the world to be how it is, he will be a practical joker and the event that gets him booted from the vault will be one of the more important members of the vaults is killed in what appears to be a joke gone wrong. He will then be Exiled into the wasteland.
I can think up what I want to happen but my character development and other things may be lacking as I am not much of a people person and don't know how an actual person would most likely react in certain situations.
EDIT: any changes and/or ideas that I like I shall add to the OP under the corresponding sections.
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Postby Devvo Mate » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:23 am

This belongs in arts anf fiction, also wait until you're out of your early teens before writing a novel.

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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:25 am

thank for telling me where this thread goes. I am out of my teens I have been for a few years now.
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Postby MERIZoC » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:26 am

Devvo Mate wrote:This belongs in arts anf fiction, also wait until you're out of your early teens before writing a novel.

We saw how that worked out for that Eragon kid….. :p

Shadowwell wrote:thank for telling me where this thread goes. I am out of my teens I have been for a few years now.

I just requested a move, so no need to repost.

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Postby Devvo Mate » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:28 am

Merizoc wrote:We saw how that worked out for that Eragon kid….. :p


I knew someone would bring him up, think he was 19 when he wrote the bulk of it though, so not really early teens.

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Postby Devvo Mate » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:28 am

Shadowwell wrote:thank for telling me where this thread goes. I am out of my teens I have been for a few years now.


Oh. You write like one.

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Postby Bulgar Rouge » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:28 am

the world itself will be essentially a cross between fallout and Rage

Why not something original ?

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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:29 am

might I ask how exactly would I move this thread this is around the second that I have made on this site and the other one was on a now nonexistent Nation.
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Postby Securitan » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:30 am

Bulgar Rouge wrote:
the world itself will be essentially a cross between fallout and Rage

Why not something original ?

Because then it wouldn't be realistic.
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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:30 am

Devvo Mate wrote:
Shadowwell wrote:thank for telling me where this thread goes. I am out of my teens I have been for a few years now.


Oh. You write like one.

I am not sure whether that should be taken as an insult or acompliment
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Postby Bulgar Rouge » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:31 am

Securitan wrote:
Bulgar Rouge wrote:Why not something original ?

Because then it wouldn't be realistic.


I don't get it.

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Postby MERIZoC » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:31 am

Shadowwell wrote:might I ask how exactly would I move this thread this is around the second that I have made on this site and the other one was on a now nonexistent Nation.

As I said, I already requested a move.

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Postby Devvo Mate » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:32 am

Shadowwell wrote:I am not sure whether that should be taken as an insult or acompliment


You just don't write very well, maybe English isn't your first language?

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Postby Securitan » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:32 am

Bulgar Rouge wrote:
Securitan wrote:Because then it wouldn't be realistic.


I don't get it.

Well there's not that many ways a post apocalyptic world can go you know.
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Postby Securitan » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:33 am

Shadowwell wrote:
Devvo Mate wrote:
Oh. You write like one.

I am not sure whether that should be taken as an insult or acompliment

Be insulted.
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Postby Scomagia » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:33 am

Devvo Mate wrote:This belongs in arts anf fiction, also wait until you're out of your early teens before writing a novel.

That's terrible advice. It's better to get the practice novels out of the way early.
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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:33 am

No English is my first language, although when people hear me speak they think I am from some other country beside the one that I am actually from.
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Postby Bulgar Rouge » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:36 am

Securitan wrote:
Bulgar Rouge wrote:
I don't get it.

Well there's not that many ways a post apocalyptic world can go you know.


True, though Fallout is probably far from being the best representation of a post-nuclear war environment.
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Postby Securitan » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:37 am

Bulgar Rouge wrote:
Securitan wrote:Well there's not that many ways a post apocalyptic world can go you know.


True, though Fallout is probably far from being the best representation of a post-nuclear war environment.

Yeah with alternate timelines, aliens, towns full of kids, etc.
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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:37 am

the world will take influences from both RAGE and Fallout, however the majority of the world will largely be of my own creation. it will be post apocalyptic and there will be certain items and the like that are in the worlds depicted on those games that I rather like and shall be using as a blueprint for similar items in the world.
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Postby Devvo Mate » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:39 am

Shadowwell wrote:No English is my first language, although when people hear me speak they think I am from some other country beside the one that I am actually from.


Right well in that case you really need to work on your literary abilities.

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Postby Shadowwell » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:40 am

the world will be a more modern version of the one depicted in Fallout, the buildings, cars and the like will be similar if not more advanced than the ones of today.
EDIT: the "vaults" (for lack of a better word at this time) in this world will be substantially larger than those in Fallout and every dweller of the Vaults will possess Nanotech which is carried down through the bloodlines of the original people who were put in the vaults to begin with.
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Postby Scomagia » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:50 am

Shadowwell wrote:the world will be a more modern version of the one depicted in Fallout, the buildings, cars and the like will be similar if not more advanced than the ones of today.
EDIT: the "vaults" (for lack of a better word at this time) in this world will be substantially larger than those in Fallout and every dweller of the Vaults will possess Nanotech which is carried down through the bloodlines of the original people who were put in the vaults to begin with.

You're talking a lot about the world but not much about characters. Have you got any characters in mind?
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Postby Bulgar Rouge » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:55 am

I'm just throwing this in but I think the most essential element of post-apocalyptic fiction is the effect of the catastrophe on human psychology. If technology is more advanced than it was before the event, it won't be quite post-apocalyptic.

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Postby The Wolven League » Thu Feb 05, 2015 10:57 am

I hope your grammar in the novels is better than on here.
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