That's true. I see what you are saying. Probably could be sold if it had some good music.
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by South Waxhaw » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:30 pm

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by Mad hatters in jeans » Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:35 pm
North Wiedna wrote:Can I ask you all to refrain posting your lyrics? I kinda wanted this to be my personal thread... :/

by The REAL Glasers » Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:54 pm
North Wiedna wrote:Conoga wrote:
I find it a bit rude. Considering it says 'my lyrics' and not 'your lyrics'..
Yeah. A bit. Though, I must say, you're all very good.
Here's one that's not quite done, and I don't quite like the way it's turning out, but I'd like some creative input on the song. It's a ballad, supposed to be backed by a psychedelic rock or an acid rock band.The Strawman looks up
At the purple sky
Everyone knows
He's the stupidest guy
"If rainy days were relevant
The famine would pass
And all of this torture
Would be in our past"
The people stared at Strawman,
A look on their face,
Of disgust, and anger,
At his stupid race.
"You idiot, we know.
We've known for a while,
that if the rain comes,
the people shall smile!"
The Strawman was crushed,
His dreams went astray,
"If I can't have their audience,
They won't survive next day!"
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