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South Waxhaw
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Postby South Waxhaw » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:30 pm

Conoga wrote:
South Waxhaw wrote:I don't think I said that... :unsure:

Just saying. If "Bad Romance" can reach the top 10 internationally, I'm sure he could sell that song.

That's true. I see what you are saying. Probably could be sold if it had some good music.

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Postby North Wiedna » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:33 pm

South Waxhaw wrote:
Conoga wrote:Just saying. If "Bad Romance" can reach the top 10 internationally, I'm sure he could sell that song.

That's true. I see what you are saying. Probably could be sold if it had some good music.

I'm working on that...
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Postby South Waxhaw » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:34 pm

North Wiedna wrote:
South Waxhaw wrote:That's true. I see what you are saying. Probably could be sold if it had some good music.

I'm working on that...

I'm not musical either :( I have written lyrics before though. So fun! :lol:

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Postby Conoga » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:36 pm

South Waxhaw wrote:
North Wiedna wrote:I'm working on that...

I'm not musical either :( I have written lyrics before though. So fun! :lol:

I'm not musical, and I've never tried writing lyrics.

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Postby South Waxhaw » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:38 pm

Conoga wrote:
South Waxhaw wrote:I'm not musical either :( I have written lyrics before though. So fun! :lol:

I'm not musical, and I've never tried writing lyrics.

You should try.

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Postby Conoga » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:41 pm

South Waxhaw wrote:
Conoga wrote:I'm not musical, and I've never tried writing lyrics.

You should try.

I prefer drawing.

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Postby South Waxhaw » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:45 pm

Conoga wrote:
South Waxhaw wrote:You should try.

I prefer drawing.

I can't draw either. :unsure: The only thing from "the arts" I am good at is drama.

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Postby North Wiedna » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:54 pm

I've got an idea for a song, I'll post it later.
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Postby South Waxhaw » Tue Oct 19, 2010 5:56 pm

Sorry to get off topic. :blush:

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Postby Mad hatters in jeans » Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:35 pm

North Wiedna wrote:Can I ask you all to refrain posting your lyrics? I kinda wanted this to be my personal thread... :/

aww i had some awesome lyrics i thought you could borrow i'll put a spoiler on it so no noobs can steal the idea it's quite genius really.


boat boat boat
merrily merrily down the boat
row the stream merrily boat boat boat
sailing boat boat boat down the stream
stream stream boat merrily merrily boat stream
oars in stream boat boat merrily merrily
like a dream boat

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Postby The REAL Glasers » Tue Oct 19, 2010 10:54 pm

North Wiedna wrote:
Conoga wrote:
I find it a bit rude. Considering it says 'my lyrics' and not 'your lyrics'..

Yeah. A bit. Though, I must say, you're all very good.

Here's one that's not quite done, and I don't quite like the way it's turning out, but I'd like some creative input on the song. It's a ballad, supposed to be backed by a psychedelic rock or an acid rock band.

The Strawman looks up
At the purple sky
Everyone knows
He's the stupidest guy

"If rainy days were relevant
The famine would pass
And all of this torture
Would be in our past"

The people stared at Strawman,
A look on their face,
Of disgust, and anger,
At his stupid race.

"You idiot, we know.
We've known for a while,
that if the rain comes,
the people shall smile!"

The Strawman was crushed,
His dreams went astray,
"If I can't have their audience,
They won't survive next day!"


It seems too blunt, in my opinion. Lyrics don't have to be incredibly direct to get the point across. I like the ideas you have though.
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