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Cannot think of a name wrote:

Tarsonis wrote:
well one person is writing and producing all three, so that's already a step ahead.

What now?

Cannot think of a name wrote:Well, you're full of surprises.

Ameriganastan wrote:

Cannot think of a name wrote:Well, you're full of surprises.

What can I say, I'm a multifaceted individual.

Lord Dominator wrote:I’m all for well-written fanfiction, but it’s been like 8 hours.

I think many of us are using different definitions of rewriting a movie

Lady Victory wrote:Alright, I got TFA done. Now I just gotta do TLJ and TROS.

The other two should be shorter as I had to change a few lore things that I think Disney mucked up when they were making the setting for the Sequels. Hopefully it seems less like a copy-paste of the Original Trilogy now. Also went and reworked a few characters and their personalities, behavior, etc. to be more realistic.

But it's like 11:15 right now and I'm incredibly tired so I gotta get to bed. Saved as a draft; I'll finish the rest tomorrow.

Imperial Rifta wrote:Feel like you finished an entire movie incredibly quick. You were just changing some details though. keep up the good work LV

Lord Dominator wrote:I’m all for well-written fanfiction, but it’s been like 8 hours.

I think many of us are using different definitions of rewriting a movie

The Huskar Social Union wrote:

I liked this one more than the last few episodes but it was still only okay.

Nice to see Rex again and Wrecker got his chip sorted. Was hoping to see more of Crosshair though. I hope he shows up next episode.

Dont really have a lot to say honestly. Again.

Christian Confederation wrote:

Lord Dominator wrote:I’m all for well-written fanfiction, but it’s been like 8 hours.

I think many of us are using different definitions of rewriting a movie

Literally a plot synopsis will do. As it sets the sequel trilogy is as fallows.
The Force Awakens-

Kylo Ren is looking for Luke Skywalker, Only one Droid knows Skywalker's location but the pilot won't reveal where the droid is. The Droid Teams up with a girl named Rey. The Pilot Escapes From the First order with the help of a Stormtrooper. They are shot down on the Planet Rey and the Droid are on. The Stormtrooper survives but the Pilot dies. The Stormtrooper joins the girl and Droid to get the intel on Skywalker to the Resistance. The First Order Attacks and our Heroes take the Millennium Falcon that was abandoned on this planet. Han Solo and Chewbacca Want their ship back and intercept them. Some gangsters want Solo dead so they fight before going to a castle to contact Princess Leia. Meanwhile Kylo Ren meets with his master Snoke, They Decide that the girl is strong with the force. The First Order destroy the Capitol of the Republic with there new Mega Death Star 'Starkiller Base'. The Heroes get the Skywalker Lightsaber from the castle. Then Kylo Ren attacks and Kidnaps Rey. Princess Leia Arrives with the Resistance to save everyone else. Plot twist the Pilot from the beginning is ok. The Resistance need to Destroy Starkiller base, but the Shields need to be down. So a crack team of Solo, Chewbacca, and the Stormtrooper go to take down the Shield. Rey is interrogated but Escapes. The Heroes kidnap the leader of the Stormtroopers Captain Phasma and force her to take down the Shields. The Heros Reunite with Rey before going to help the Airstrike take down the weakness. Han Solo confronts Kylo Ren who is actually the Son of Him and Leia, Ben Solo. Han is killed. The Heroes Destroy the Weakness and the Base starts to Explode. The Heroes Fight Kylo Ren, He beats the Stormtrooper Finn before getting destroyed by Rey. R2-D2 wakes up from his Luke left depression hybrination and reveals Skywalker's Location. Rey finds Luke Skywalker.

The Last Jedi-

The First Order has Conquered the Galaxy Despite Losing the Mega Death Star. Kylo Ren's Fleet arrives to destroy the Rebel Base, but Everyone escapes in the nick of time. Princess Leia wants to leave Immediately but the Pilot Poe wants to take down the Dreadnought first. He goes in without permission and loses all of the Resistance Bombers but does manage to Destroy the Dreadnought. The Rebels Jump to Hyperspace but the First Order fallows them because they can track through Hyperspace now. Rey wants Luke to train her but he refuses. Back at the fleet Kylo Ren attacks killing everyone on the bridge but Princess Leia. Finn and the new girl Rose are sent by Poe to find a weakness in the First Orders Flying Wing Mega Ship. The fleet is runing out of fuel and will soon be desemated by First Order Guns. Admiral Laura Duran takes over the Fleet. Rey gets trained but secretly communicates with Kylo Ren. The Rebels Get the Intel from a war profiteering Casino Planet. Luke Forbes Rey from talking to Kylo and explains how he murdered Luke's Jedi school. Rey steals the Jedi texts and leaves. Yoda's Ghost Destroys the Knowledge Tree. Rey confronts Kylo Ren as the Other Rebels Attempt to Destroy the Tracker and get captured. The Rebels are almost out of Fuel so Admiral Laura Dunn orderes everyone Evacuate to a nearby abandoned Base. Rey and Kylo kill Snoke before fighting his Gaurds. The Admiral Hypocrisy Rams the Resistance Flagship into the First Order Flagship ripping it in half and destroying the fleet. The Rebels Escape in the Chaos but the first order fallows to there new base. The First Order use a siege Cannon to break down the Door/ Wall of the 1 way in/out base. The rebels attack head on with speeders but fail thanks to the new girl Rose "Saving" Finn the Stormtrooper. Luke Skywalker Arrives to fight Kylo Ren as the Rebels Escape. Luke was a force projection, he dies.

The Rise of Skywalker-

Emperor Palpatine is back from the dead. The Rebels need to find his location to kill him. Rey finds a Dark Side knife and fights Kylo Ren. The First Order Capture Chewbacca, Rey Accidentally Kills him. The Rebels go to get information on where the Emperor is. Princess Leia Dies. Palpatine shows off his collection of secret Star Destroyers with massive canons on them to Kylo Ren. Ren is sent to capture Rey. Rey and Kylo Ren Fight, He starts to rejoin the Light side. Rey runs off to fight Palpatine. General Hux leaks the location of the Fleet to the rebels because he wanted to be Supreme Leader. Rey and Kylo fight Palpatine who wants their souls so he may return. The rebel fleet looks at a lose when a crap load of ships lead by Lando arrive to defeat the Empire. Palpatine kills Ben Solo before Rey kills him. Rey goes off to train new Jedi and steals the name Skywalker after learning she's a Palpatine.

The Huskar Social Union wrote:Mad how they can track people through lightspeed these days.

Idzequitch wrote:

Christian Confederation wrote:Literally a plot synopsis will do. As it sets the sequel trilogy is as fallows.
The Force Awakens-

Kylo Ren is looking for Luke Skywalker, Only one Droid knows Skywalker's location but the pilot won't reveal where the droid is. The Droid Teams up with a girl named Rey. The Pilot Escapes From the First order with the help of a Stormtrooper. They are shot down on the Planet Rey and the Droid are on. The Stormtrooper survives but the Pilot dies. The Stormtrooper joins the girl and Droid to get the intel on Skywalker to the Resistance. The First Order Attacks and our Heroes take the Millennium Falcon that was abandoned on this planet. Han Solo and Chewbacca Want their ship back and intercept them. Some gangsters want Solo dead so they fight before going to a castle to contact Princess Leia. Meanwhile Kylo Ren meets with his master Snoke, They Decide that the girl is strong with the force. The First Order destroy the Capitol of the Republic with there new Mega Death Star 'Starkiller Base'. The Heroes get the Skywalker Lightsaber from the castle. Then Kylo Ren attacks and Kidnaps Rey. Princess Leia Arrives with the Resistance to save everyone else. Plot twist the Pilot from the beginning is ok. The Resistance need to Destroy Starkiller base, but the Shields need to be down. So a crack team of Solo, Chewbacca, and the Stormtrooper go to take down the Shield. Rey is interrogated but Escapes. The Heroes kidnap the leader of the Stormtroopers Captain Phasma and force her to take down the Shields. The Heros Reunite with Rey before going to help the Airstrike take down the weakness. Han Solo confronts Kylo Ren who is actually the Son of Him and Leia, Ben Solo. Han is killed. The Heroes Destroy the Weakness and the Base starts to Explode. The Heroes Fight Kylo Ren, He beats the Stormtrooper Finn before getting destroyed by Rey. R2-D2 wakes up from his Luke left depression hybrination and reveals Skywalker's Location. Rey finds Luke Skywalker.

The Last Jedi-

The First Order has Conquered the Galaxy Despite Losing the Mega Death Star. Kylo Ren's Fleet arrives to destroy the Rebel Base, but Everyone escapes in the nick of time. Princess Leia wants to leave Immediately but the Pilot Poe wants to take down the Dreadnought first. He goes in without permission and loses all of the Resistance Bombers but does manage to Destroy the Dreadnought. The Rebels Jump to Hyperspace but the First Order fallows them because they can track through Hyperspace now. Rey wants Luke to train her but he refuses. Back at the fleet Kylo Ren attacks killing everyone on the bridge but Princess Leia. Finn and the new girl Rose are sent by Poe to find a weakness in the First Orders Flying Wing Mega Ship. The fleet is runing out of fuel and will soon be desemated by First Order Guns. Admiral Laura Duran takes over the Fleet. Rey gets trained but secretly communicates with Kylo Ren. The Rebels Get the Intel from a war profiteering Casino Planet. Luke Forbes Rey from talking to Kylo and explains how he murdered Luke's Jedi school. Rey steals the Jedi texts and leaves. Yoda's Ghost Destroys the Knowledge Tree. Rey confronts Kylo Ren as the Other Rebels Attempt to Destroy the Tracker and get captured. The Rebels are almost out of Fuel so Admiral Laura Dunn orderes everyone Evacuate to a nearby abandoned Base. Rey and Kylo kill Snoke before fighting his Gaurds. The Admiral Hypocrisy Rams the Resistance Flagship into the First Order Flagship ripping it in half and destroying the fleet. The Rebels Escape in the Chaos but the first order fallows to there new base. The First Order use a siege Cannon to break down the Door/ Wall of the 1 way in/out base. The rebels attack head on with speeders but fail thanks to the new girl Rose "Saving" Finn the Stormtrooper. Luke Skywalker Arrives to fight Kylo Ren as the Rebels Escape. Luke was a force projection, he dies.

The Rise of Skywalker-

Emperor Palpatine is back from the dead. The Rebels need to find his location to kill him. Rey finds a Dark Side knife and fights Kylo Ren. The First Order Capture Chewbacca, Rey Accidentally Kills him. The Rebels go to get information on where the Emperor is. Princess Leia Dies. Palpatine shows off his collection of secret Star Destroyers with massive canons on them to Kylo Ren. Ren is sent to capture Rey. Rey and Kylo Ren Fight, He starts to rejoin the Light side. Rey runs off to fight Palpatine. General Hux leaks the location of the Fleet to the rebels because he wanted to be Supreme Leader. Rey and Kylo fight Palpatine who wants their souls so he may return. The rebel fleet looks at a lose when a crap load of ships lead by Lando arrive to defeat the Empire. Palpatine kills Ben Solo before Rey kills him. Rey goes off to train new Jedi and steals the name Skywalker after learning she's a Palpatine.

On a note that is completely unrelated to your synopses, thank you for saying that they were tracked through hyperspace. I hate the fact that the movie actually says that they were tracked through lightspeed, as if that was a place or a state of being and not, you know, a speed.

It's like if I got pulled over by a policeman and said, "How did they track me through 80 mph?" (Or, for our metric friends, "How did they track me through 130 kph?"). It just doesn't make sense and it makes me sad that no one stopped it.

Christian Confederation wrote:I think it's funny the First Order magical lost Interdiction Technology between Endor and The Last Jedi.

Christian Confederation wrote:I think it's funny the First Order magical lost Interdiction Technology between Endor and The Last Jedi.

Lady Victory wrote:

Christian Confederation wrote:I think it's funny the First Order magical lost Interdiction Technology between Endor and The Last Jedi.

Funny you mention that...

Christian Confederation wrote:

Lord Dominator wrote:I’m all for well-written fanfiction, but it’s been like 8 hours.

I think many of us are using different definitions of rewriting a movie

Literally a plot synopsis will do. As it sets the sequel trilogy is as fallows.
The Force Awakens-

Kylo Ren is looking for Luke Skywalker, Only one Droid knows Skywalker's location but the pilot won't reveal where the droid is. The Droid Teams up with a girl named Rey. The Pilot Escapes From the First order with the help of a Stormtrooper. They are shot down on the Planet Rey and the Droid are on. The Stormtrooper survives but the Pilot dies. The Stormtrooper joins the girl and Droid to get the intel on Skywalker to the Resistance. The First Order Attacks and our Heroes take the Millennium Falcon that was abandoned on this planet. Han Solo and Chewbacca Want their ship back and intercept them. Some gangsters want Solo dead so they fight before going to a castle to contact Princess Leia. Meanwhile Kylo Ren meets with his master Snoke, They Decide that the girl is strong with the force. The First Order destroy the Capitol of the Republic with there new Mega Death Star 'Starkiller Base'. The Heroes get the Skywalker Lightsaber from the castle. Then Kylo Ren attacks and Kidnaps Rey. Princess Leia Arrives with the Resistance to save everyone else. Plot twist the Pilot from the beginning is ok. The Resistance need to Destroy Starkiller base, but the Shields need to be down. So a crack team of Solo, Chewbacca, and the Stormtrooper go to take down the Shield. Rey is interrogated but Escapes. The Heroes kidnap the leader of the Stormtroopers Captain Phasma and force her to take down the Shields. The Heros Reunite with Rey before going to help the Airstrike take down the weakness. Han Solo confronts Kylo Ren who is actually the Son of Him and Leia, Ben Solo. Han is killed. The Heroes Destroy the Weakness and the Base starts to Explode. The Heroes Fight Kylo Ren, He beats the Stormtrooper Finn before getting destroyed by Rey. R2-D2 wakes up from his Luke left depression hybrination and reveals Skywalker's Location. Rey finds Luke Skywalker.

The Last Jedi-

The First Order has Conquered the Galaxy Despite Losing the Mega Death Star. Kylo Ren's Fleet arrives to destroy the Rebel Base, but Everyone escapes in the nick of time. Princess Leia wants to leave Immediately but the Pilot Poe wants to take down the Dreadnought first. He goes in without permission and loses all of the Resistance Bombers but does manage to Destroy the Dreadnought. The Rebels Jump to Hyperspace but the First Order fallows them because they can track through Hyperspace now. Rey wants Luke to train her but he refuses. Back at the fleet Kylo Ren attacks killing everyone on the bridge but Princess Leia. Finn and the new girl Rose are sent by Poe to find a weakness in the First Orders Flying Wing Mega Ship. The fleet is runing out of fuel and will soon be desemated by First Order Guns. Admiral Laura Duran takes over the Fleet. Rey gets trained but secretly communicates with Kylo Ren. The Rebels Get the Intel from a war profiteering Casino Planet. Luke Forbes Rey from talking to Kylo and explains how he murdered Luke's Jedi school. Rey steals the Jedi texts and leaves. Yoda's Ghost Destroys the Knowledge Tree. Rey confronts Kylo Ren as the Other Rebels Attempt to Destroy the Tracker and get captured. The Rebels are almost out of Fuel so Admiral Laura Dunn orderes everyone Evacuate to a nearby abandoned Base. Rey and Kylo kill Snoke before fighting his Gaurds. The Admiral Hypocrisy Rams the Resistance Flagship into the First Order Flagship ripping it in half and destroying the fleet. The Rebels Escape in the Chaos but the first order fallows to there new base. The First Order use a siege Cannon to break down the Door/ Wall of the 1 way in/out base. The rebels attack head on with speeders but fail thanks to the new girl Rose "Saving" Finn the Stormtrooper. Luke Skywalker Arrives to fight Kylo Ren as the Rebels Escape. Luke was a force projection, he dies.

The Rise of Skywalker-

Emperor Palpatine is back from the dead. The Rebels need to find his location to kill him. Rey finds a Dark Side knife and fights Kylo Ren. The First Order Capture Chewbacca, Rey Accidentally Kills him. The Rebels go to get information on where the Emperor is. Princess Leia Dies. Palpatine shows off his collection of secret Star Destroyers with massive canons on them to Kylo Ren. Ren is sent to capture Rey. Rey and Kylo Ren Fight, He starts to rejoin the Light side. Rey runs off to fight Palpatine. General Hux leaks the location of the Fleet to the rebels because he wanted to be Supreme Leader. Rey and Kylo fight Palpatine who wants their souls so he may return. The rebel fleet looks at a lose when a crap load of ships lead by Lando arrive to defeat the Empire. Palpatine kills Ben Solo before Rey kills him. Rey goes off to train new Jedi and steals the name Skywalker after learning she's a Palpatine.