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Do you like writing poetry, and/or reading it?

I like reading it
27
55%
I like writing it
22
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Total votes : 49

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Ihury
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Postby Ihury » Thu Sep 13, 2018 4:54 am

Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
Ihury wrote:
Personally, I feel like her poems are way too simplistic. Her poems have no nuance at all, and a lot of them read more like a contrived form of prose than actual poems. They just make you feel emo, but they don't make you think about why you feel emo.


Agreed. Her poems do not promote introspection. But I must admit that I do find her presentation (the fonts she uses and the art used for her poems) nice. The poetry however? Eh.

Then again, unlike me, she's published so she must be appealing to some or must be doing something right to have the following she does.


To a certain extent, I suppose poems also have to make themselves understood. In that aspect, she's more successful than the more esoteric poets like, say, Geoffrey Hill (whose poems, while good, would probably sound the same if you read them backwards).

I'd imagine that for many people, the first thing that comes to mind when they think of poetry is the 17th-century poetry of weird people like John Donne.

Batter my heart, three-person'd God, for you
As yet but knocke, breathe, shine, and seeke to mend;
That I may rise and stand, o'erthrow mee, and bend
Your force to break, blow, burn and make mee new.
I, like an usurp'd town to another due,
Labour to admit you, but oh, to no end;
Reason, your viceroy in mee, mee should defend,
But is captiv'd, and proves weak or untrue.
Yet dearly I love you, and would be lov'd fain,
But am betroth'd unto your enemy;
Divorce mee, untie or break that knot again,
Take mee to you, imprison mee, for I,
Except you enthrall mee, never shall be free,
Nor ever chaste, except you ravish mee.

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Postby Nanatsu no Tsuki » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:14 am

Ihury wrote:
Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
Agreed. Her poems do not promote introspection. But I must admit that I do find her presentation (the fonts she uses and the art used for her poems) nice. The poetry however? Eh.

Then again, unlike me, she's published so she must be appealing to some or must be doing something right to have the following she does.


To a certain extent, I suppose poems also have to make themselves understood. In that aspect, she's more successful than the more esoteric poets like, say, Geoffrey Hill (whose poems, while good, would probably sound the same if you read them backwards).

I'd imagine that for many people, the first thing that comes to mind when they think of poetry is the 17th-century poetry of weird people like John Donne.

Batter my heart, three-person'd God, for you
As yet but knocke, breathe, shine, and seeke to mend;
That I may rise and stand, o'erthrow mee, and bend
Your force to break, blow, burn and make mee new.
I, like an usurp'd town to another due,
Labour to admit you, but oh, to no end;
Reason, your viceroy in mee, mee should defend,
But is captiv'd, and proves weak or untrue.
Yet dearly I love you, and would be lov'd fain,
But am betroth'd unto your enemy;
Divorce mee, untie or break that knot again,
Take mee to you, imprison mee, for I,
Except you enthrall mee, never shall be free,
Nor ever chaste, except you ravish mee.


I usually go for the sonnets of Garcilaso de la Vega.

Is there significance for Donne writing "me" with two es? Or is that just for the rhyming scheme?
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Postby Ihury » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:15 am

Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
Ihury wrote:
To a certain extent, I suppose poems also have to make themselves understood. In that aspect, she's more successful than the more esoteric poets like, say, Geoffrey Hill (whose poems, while good, would probably sound the same if you read them backwards).

I'd imagine that for many people, the first thing that comes to mind when they think of poetry is the 17th-century poetry of weird people like John Donne.

Batter my heart, three-person'd God, for you
As yet but knocke, breathe, shine, and seeke to mend;
That I may rise and stand, o'erthrow mee, and bend
Your force to break, blow, burn and make mee new.
I, like an usurp'd town to another due,
Labour to admit you, but oh, to no end;
Reason, your viceroy in mee, mee should defend,
But is captiv'd, and proves weak or untrue.
Yet dearly I love you, and would be lov'd fain,
But am betroth'd unto your enemy;
Divorce mee, untie or break that knot again,
Take mee to you, imprison mee, for I,
Except you enthrall mee, never shall be free,
Nor ever chaste, except you ravish mee.


I usually go for the sonnets of Garcilaso de la Vega.

Is there significance for Donne writing "me" with two es? Or is that just for the rhyming scheme?


During the Renaissance era, English spelling was not set in stone; as such, a lot of poets and writers spelt words as they sounded.

A lot of publications will usually modernise the spelling to some extent, but this is how I remember the poem as I read it.
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Postby Nanatsu no Tsuki » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:17 am

Ihury wrote:
Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
I usually go for the sonnets of Garcilaso de la Vega.

Is there significance for Donne writing "me" with two es? Or is that just for the rhyming scheme?


During the Renaissance era, English spelling was not set in stone; as such, a lot of poets and writers spelt words as they sounded.


Ah, yes. English spelling has changed a lot throughout the ages. I just thought it had something to do with the metrics of that poem in question.
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Postby Ihury » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:19 am

Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
Ihury wrote:
During the Renaissance era, English spelling was not set in stone; as such, a lot of poets and writers spelt words as they sounded.


Ah, yes. English spelling has changed a lot throughout the ages. I just thought it had something to do with the metrics of that poem in question.


TMK Donne's poems usually don't follow the meter as closely as Shakespeare's or other contemporaries. They were also pretty explicit.

If I recall correctly, he had one poem where he scolded a woman and told her something along the lines of "you'll be shunned like a used dildo", and another one where he said "Get away little boy, I'm having an affair with your mother".

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Postby Free Arabian Nation » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:20 am

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Postby Nanatsu no Tsuki » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:21 am

Ihury wrote:
Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
Ah, yes. English spelling has changed a lot throughout the ages. I just thought it had something to do with the metrics of that poem in question.


TMK Donne's poems usually don't follow the meter as closely as Shakespeare's or other contemporaries. They were also pretty explicit.

If I recall correctly, he had one poem where he scolded a woman and told her something along the lines of "you'll be shunned like a used dildo", and another one where he said "Get away little boy, I'm having an affair with your mother".


I'm not familiar with his work, but he sounds amusing. Less pomp, straight to the point. :lol2:
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Postby Ihury » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:22 am

Free Arabian Nation wrote:Roses are red
Happy people are gay
I hope you have a good day


Alas, it is my heav'nly duty to
Inform thee of the newest trends around;
For 'xample, that the coolest people write,
For no good reason, in iambic lines!
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Postby Ihury » Thu Sep 13, 2018 5:23 am

Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
Ihury wrote:
TMK Donne's poems usually don't follow the meter as closely as Shakespeare's or other contemporaries. They were also pretty explicit.

If I recall correctly, he had one poem where he scolded a woman and told her something along the lines of "you'll be shunned like a used dildo", and another one where he said "Get away little boy, I'm having an affair with your mother".


I'm not familiar with his work, but he sounds amusing. Less pomp, straight to the point. :lol2:


Indeed XD

The obvious irony, of course, being that he later became a priest.

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Postby Nanatsu no Tsuki » Thu Sep 13, 2018 7:36 am

Ihury wrote:
Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:
I'm not familiar with his work, but he sounds amusing. Less pomp, straight to the point. :lol2:


Indeed XD

The obvious irony, of course, being that he later became a priest.


Now that's what I call a plot twist.
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Postby Cosmopolitan borovan » Sun Sep 16, 2018 1:25 pm

Yo no quiero cuando siento,
Yo nunca espero algo,
Cuando tu eres algo,
eso es sale,

Todo algo parece muy lento,
No consigue porque lleva va,
No puedo regresar, cada momento parece derecha,
Pero mi mente es nunca el mismo.

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Postby Fecaw » Sun Sep 16, 2018 1:27 pm

I write poems for school assignments only.

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Postby Westward Rosebay » Wed Nov 28, 2018 5:45 pm

Cosmopolitan borovan wrote:Poems suck I don't understand them


Aside from music, poetry is the most abstract form of art. The only reason music is more abstract is because it's a universal language. WIth poetry, anyone can give off any emotion or thought at a given time. look at some poems by percy bysshe shelley. He struggled with the ideas of knowing the purpose of ones self, something we all can relate to, and he did a remarkable job of putting it on paper. :)

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Postby Jyzeria » Mon Dec 03, 2018 1:31 pm

I write poems or songs sometimes even though I can't really sing the songs that I've written. I'd love to write short stories as well if I have some free time. Because when I was in Year 12, my English teacher said I have a unique way of telling stories, and the plot of some short stories I wrote are interesting. Though the teacher said I need to improve my grammar. Just one of those problems if English is not your first language.
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Postby Nanatsu no Tsuki » Mon Dec 03, 2018 1:36 pm

Cosmopolitan borovan wrote:Yo no quiero cuando siento,
Yo nunca espero algo,
Cuando tu eres algo,
eso es sale,

Todo algo parece muy lento,
No consigue porque lleva va,
No puedo regresar, cada momento parece derecha,
Pero mi mente es nunca el mismo.


If I may suggest this: don't use a translator for poetry. That sounds ok in English but in Spanish... (as a native Spanish speaker), it translated very cringy. Like someone dragging their nails against a chalkboard. :?
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Postby Nidon » Tue Jan 15, 2019 4:18 pm

Clutching on a lavender
A sweetheart gave to me,
it was very tender
with a feeble sensory

The delicate smell
Slid through my nose
A feeling I could tell,
that I would be more close

A smell that is intricate
Its petals lovely
A sense that is not irate
Sedate and lovely.

Looking out the night sky
through my window
I wondered why
it got in my bungalow
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