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Postby Ameriganastan » Fri Apr 07, 2017 7:06 pm

Trotskylvania wrote:I can say from personal experience that writing erotic fiction is also the quickest way to get people to read what you write. Make of that what you will

Not the kind of readers I'd want, quite frankly.
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Postby Osnil Returns » Mon Apr 10, 2017 4:10 am

Ameriganastan wrote:
Trotskylvania wrote:I can say from personal experience that writing erotic fiction is also the quickest way to get people to read what you write. Make of that what you will

Not the kind of readers I'd want, quite frankly.

Me neither.
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Postby The Grene Knyght » Fri Apr 21, 2017 5:09 pm

Someone should reboot the NS short story competition, just sayin'.

(I'd consider doing it but if I did it I'd do it as a flashfic competition out of laziness)
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Postby The first Galactic Republic » Fri Apr 21, 2017 5:41 pm

The Grene Knyght wrote:Someone should reboot the NS short story competition, just sayin'.

(I'd consider doing it but if I did it I'd do it as a flashfic competition out of laziness)

Maybe we could do a summer version?
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Postby USS Monitor » Fri Apr 21, 2017 9:14 pm

The Grene Knyght wrote:Someone should reboot the NS short story competition, just sayin'.

(I'd consider doing it but if I did it I'd do it as a flashfic competition out of laziness)


You're welcome to do a flashfic contest if you want to try that.

I currently have enough to do with RL and mod stuff, so I don't want to make any additional commitments like running a new short story contest.
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Postby Lady Scylla » Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:27 am

Trotskylvania wrote:I can say from personal experience that writing erotic fiction is also the quickest way to get people to read what you write. Make of that what you will


Can make a lot of money off of erotica as well.

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Postby Lady Scylla » Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:28 am

The first Galactic Republic wrote:
The Grene Knyght wrote:Someone should reboot the NS short story competition, just sayin'.

(I'd consider doing it but if I did it I'd do it as a flashfic competition out of laziness)

Maybe we could do a summer version?


As long as we don't end up with the drama from the poetry competition. Volunteering to be a judge for that was a massive mistake.

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Postby USS Monitor » Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:44 am

Lady Scylla wrote:
The first Galactic Republic wrote:Maybe we could do a summer version?


As long as we don't end up with the drama from the poetry competition. Volunteering to be a judge for that was a massive mistake.


I really don't know why the poetry one had so much drama. Every contest is a little different because people come and go and their moods change, but it seemed like it was going well, and then all of a sudden it wasn't.
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Postby Ameriganastan » Sat Apr 22, 2017 12:50 am

I'd be up for a story competition.
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Postby Lady Scylla » Sat Apr 22, 2017 2:06 am

USS Monitor wrote:
Lady Scylla wrote:
As long as we don't end up with the drama from the poetry competition. Volunteering to be a judge for that was a massive mistake.


I really don't know why the poetry one had so much drama. Every contest is a little different because people come and go and their moods change, but it seemed like it was going well, and then all of a sudden it wasn't.


I'm not sure what happened. An argument started about the method of critiquing and then it just exploded from there. Ruined the mood for me, so I didn't bother.

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Postby Lady Scylla » Sat Apr 22, 2017 2:07 am

Ameriganastan wrote:I'd be up for a story competition.


Once upon a time, there was an Ameri. The End.

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Postby Ameriganastan » Sat Apr 22, 2017 2:29 am

Lady Scylla wrote:
Ameriganastan wrote:I'd be up for a story competition.


Once upon a time, there was an Ameri. The End.

I am capable of writing stuff longer than that. I just did it yesterday.
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Force of nature.
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Edward Richtofen wrote:Ameri's so tough that he criticized an Insane Asylum and was promptly let out

Ameri does the impossible.
Fire the Ameri.
Sinovet wrote:Ameri's like Honey badger. He don't give a fuck.

Krazakistan wrote: He is a force of negativity for the sake of negativity

Onocarcass wrote:Trying to change Ameri, is like trying to drag a 2 ton block of lead with your d**k.

Immoren wrote:When Ameri says something is shit it's good and when Ameri says some thing is good it's great. *nods*

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Postby Lady Scylla » Sat Apr 22, 2017 2:32 am

Ameriganastan wrote:
Lady Scylla wrote:
Once upon a time, there was an Ameri. The End.

I am capable of writing stuff longer than that. I just did it yesterday.


I use my thread here to experiment a bit with my writing and explore things

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Postby Ameriganastan » Sat Apr 22, 2017 2:33 am

Lady Scylla wrote:
Ameriganastan wrote:I am capable of writing stuff longer than that. I just did it yesterday.


I use my thread here to experiment a bit with my writing and explore things

...I just use Tumblr and DeviantArt.
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Force of nature.
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Edward Richtofen wrote:Ameri's so tough that he criticized an Insane Asylum and was promptly let out

Ameri does the impossible.
Fire the Ameri.
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Krazakistan wrote: He is a force of negativity for the sake of negativity

Onocarcass wrote:Trying to change Ameri, is like trying to drag a 2 ton block of lead with your d**k.

Immoren wrote:When Ameri says something is shit it's good and when Ameri says some thing is good it's great. *nods*

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Postby Lady Scylla » Sat Apr 22, 2017 2:34 am

Ameriganastan wrote:

...I just use Tumblr and DeviantArt.


Well, this is for the RP side of what I do on NS. Tis a maintenance thread for short stories relating to my FT nation.

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Postby The Grene Knyght » Sat Apr 22, 2017 7:06 am

Would anyone else be interested in judging a flash fiction competition with me? I'd probably put the deadline at the end of may, maybe june, and have a soft limit of 400 words or so. The reason I'd do flash fiction is i think the length of the stories tends to turn people off judging (no one wants to judge 20 stories of they're all 2k words lol). The last few competitions didn't go too well from judges dropping out.
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Postby The first Galactic Republic » Sat Apr 22, 2017 7:08 am

The Grene Knyght wrote:Would anyone else be interested in judging a flash fiction competition with me? I'd probably put the deadline at the end of may, maybe june, and have a soft limit of 400 words or so. The reason I'd do flash fiction is i think the length of the stories tends to turn people off judging (no one wants to judge 20 stories of they're all 2k words lol). The last few competitions didn't go too well from judges dropping out.

I'd be interested, though mainly because I like the idea of a contest. If we suddenly get a lot more people wanting to be judges then I can step down.
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Postby Trotskylvania » Mon Apr 24, 2017 1:59 pm

I've been finding that the tedium of everyday is the hardest thing for me to write. Maybe it's my desire for economy, but I find it difficult to put a character in a normal everyday situation. I'm writing a scene which introduces the antagonist, a young naval intelligence officer returning the homeworld for a new assignment, which will see here drawn into a conspiracy she suspects exists but doesn't know for sure.

The scene seemed simple enough. She's returned home to find herself changed, and home changed too, and not for the better. She is meeting an old friend at a cafe, and they have it out about their now radically diverged world views. He's gone full bohemian and given up on all of the the deeply held beliefs they had once shared about justice and responsibility.

It's just going so frightfully slow, putting one word after the other. And I'm not sure why. Last week I blazed through several chapters that should, on face, be more complicate endeavours.
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Postby Anywhere Else But Here » Mon Apr 24, 2017 4:23 pm

Trotskylvania wrote:I've been finding that the tedium of everyday is the hardest thing for me to write. Maybe it's my desire for economy, but I find it difficult to put a character in a normal everyday situation. I'm writing a scene which introduces the antagonist, a young naval intelligence officer returning the homeworld for a new assignment, which will see here drawn into a conspiracy she suspects exists but doesn't know for sure.

The scene seemed simple enough. She's returned home to find herself changed, and home changed too, and not for the better. She is meeting an old friend at a cafe, and they have it out about their now radically diverged world views. He's gone full bohemian and given up on all of the the deeply held beliefs they had once shared about justice and responsibility.

It's just going so frightfully slow, putting one word after the other. And I'm not sure why. Last week I blazed through several chapters that should, on face, be more complicate endeavours.

Is it possible you're just burned out from last week?

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Postby Trotskylvania » Tue Apr 25, 2017 9:25 am

Anywhere Else But Here wrote:
Trotskylvania wrote:I've been finding that the tedium of everyday is the hardest thing for me to write. Maybe it's my desire for economy, but I find it difficult to put a character in a normal everyday situation. I'm writing a scene which introduces the antagonist, a young naval intelligence officer returning the homeworld for a new assignment, which will see here drawn into a conspiracy she suspects exists but doesn't know for sure.

The scene seemed simple enough. She's returned home to find herself changed, and home changed too, and not for the better. She is meeting an old friend at a cafe, and they have it out about their now radically diverged world views. He's gone full bohemian and given up on all of the the deeply held beliefs they had once shared about justice and responsibility.

It's just going so frightfully slow, putting one word after the other. And I'm not sure why. Last week I blazed through several chapters that should, on face, be more complicate endeavours.

Is it possible you're just burned out from last week?

Could be. But when I shift to other projects it doesn't seem as tedious.
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Postby Lady Scylla » Tue Apr 25, 2017 9:30 am

The Grene Knyght wrote:Would anyone else be interested in judging a flash fiction competition with me? I'd probably put the deadline at the end of may, maybe june, and have a soft limit of 400 words or so. The reason I'd do flash fiction is i think the length of the stories tends to turn people off judging (no one wants to judge 20 stories of they're all 2k words lol). The last few competitions didn't go too well from judges dropping out.


I'd be interested, as a writer, this time around.

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Postby Lady Scylla » Tue Apr 25, 2017 9:33 am

Trotskylvania wrote:I've been finding that the tedium of everyday is the hardest thing for me to write. Maybe it's my desire for economy, but I find it difficult to put a character in a normal everyday situation. I'm writing a scene which introduces the antagonist, a young naval intelligence officer returning the homeworld for a new assignment, which will see here drawn into a conspiracy she suspects exists but doesn't know for sure.

The scene seemed simple enough. She's returned home to find herself changed, and home changed too, and not for the better. She is meeting an old friend at a cafe, and they have it out about their now radically diverged world views. He's gone full bohemian and given up on all of the the deeply held beliefs they had once shared about justice and responsibility.

It's just going so frightfully slow, putting one word after the other. And I'm not sure why. Last week I blazed through several chapters that should, on face, be more complicate endeavours.


I try to think about what I'd do. After all, your characters are always an extension of you to a point, and putting yourself in their clothing can help. There's no harm in skipping detail -- focus on the unique parts of the scene, it may help relieve some of the stress.

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Postby USS Monitor » Tue Apr 25, 2017 11:46 pm

Trotskylvania wrote:
Anywhere Else But Here wrote:Is it possible you're just burned out from last week?

Could be. But when I shift to other projects it doesn't seem as tedious.


It's normal for some parts of the story to come faster than others.
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Postby Lady Scylla » Wed Apr 26, 2017 2:29 am

USS Monitor wrote:
Trotskylvania wrote:Could be. But when I shift to other projects it doesn't seem as tedious.


It's normal for some parts of the story to come faster than others.


I remember reading about an author that wrote ideas like that on notecards, and then moved them around to develop a plot.

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Postby USS Monitor » Wed Apr 26, 2017 2:45 am

Lady Scylla wrote:
USS Monitor wrote:
It's normal for some parts of the story to come faster than others.


I remember reading about an author that wrote ideas like that on notecards, and then moved them around to develop a plot.


That sounds odd.
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