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Classic Rockstars
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Re: For him...

Postby Classic Rockstars » Thu Jun 25, 2009 10:43 am

Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:Sweet nightfall
that unknowingly
places me between the sword and the wall
Prisioner
I wait for you until dawn

Sweet and warm
is the sweat
that I drink from your neck, love
And now, let me finally burn!

If at the edge of time
I lose my reason
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
devour your heart

Sweet and rough, that ocean
Gothic, the inferno that burnt
the thorns
the gardenias of this passion

Clawing at emotions
Under a treacherous sky
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
Devour your heart

If I try to
If I try to I know
That gambling I'll lose what I earned
Strong and immense
It's hard and hard to tell you that
that if I gamble at it
I will lose myself
Perhaps lose you
If you're not there

Overtake me
Consume me
and smoke me one last time
Bitter
Those sweet lips that I kissed!

I would devour
Devour your heart...


:bow: It's better than war...

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Nanatsu no Tsuki
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Re: For him...

Postby Nanatsu no Tsuki » Fri Jun 26, 2009 8:48 am

Classic Rockstars wrote:
Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:Sweet nightfall
that unknowingly
places me between the sword and the wall
Prisioner
I wait for you until dawn

Sweet and warm
is the sweat
that I drink from your neck, love
And now, let me finally burn!

If at the edge of time
I lose my reason
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
devour your heart

Sweet and rough, that ocean
Gothic, the inferno that burnt
the thorns
the gardenias of this passion

Clawing at emotions
Under a treacherous sky
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
Devour your heart

If I try to
If I try to I know
That gambling I'll lose what I earned
Strong and immense
It's hard and hard to tell you that
that if I gamble at it
I will lose myself
Perhaps lose you
If you're not there

Overtake me
Consume me
and smoke me one last time
Bitter
Those sweet lips that I kissed!

I would devour
Devour your heart...


:bow: It's better than war...


Hehe, thank you, thank you. :blush:
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Der Volksland
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Re: For him...

Postby Der Volksland » Sat Jun 27, 2009 8:20 am

These poems are simply stunning. Awesome work! :clap:

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:25 am

Der Volksland wrote:These poems are simply stunning. Awesome work! :clap:

I could do better.
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:43 am

Minnas wrote:
Der Volksland wrote:These poems are simply stunning. Awesome work! :clap:

I could do better.


Then do so. I await hearing it.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:44 am

Domminus wrote:
Minnas wrote:
Der Volksland wrote:These poems are simply stunning. Awesome work! :clap:

I could do better.


Then do so. I await hearing it.


And what is that to you, hm?
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:46 am

Minnas wrote:And what is that to you, hm?


There's a saying in my country, "Put up or shut up." I believe it applies.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:49 am

Domminus wrote:
Minnas wrote:And what is that to you, hm?


There's a saying in my country, "Put up or shut up." I believe it applies.


Ah, it's a dare then...

The moments hurt
Wounds without words
Wounds with words
And you say nothing at all
You hardly say something
And nothing is enough
Think that it's crazy to follow what people say

An you, if you're not here I don't know how to be

Forgive me if I've ever made you cry
Eyes of heaven...
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:53 am

Minnas wrote:The moments hurt
Wounds without words
Wounds with words
And you say nothing at all
You hardly say something
And nothing is enough
Think that it's crazy to follow what people say

An you, if you're not here I don't know how to be

Forgive me if I've ever made you cry
Eyes of heaven...


Anyone in particular that's addressed to?

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:53 am

Domminus wrote:
Minnas wrote:The moments hurt
Wounds without words
Wounds with words
And you say nothing at all
You hardly say something
And nothing is enough
Think that it's crazy to follow what people say

An you, if you're not here I don't know how to be

Forgive me if I've ever made you cry
Eyes of heaven...


Anyone in particular that's addressed to?


Why do you want to know? I backed my statement.
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:55 am

Minnas wrote:
Domminus wrote:
Minnas wrote:The moments hurt
Wounds without words
Wounds with words
And you say nothing at all
You hardly say something
And nothing is enough
Think that it's crazy to follow what people say

An you, if you're not here I don't know how to be

Forgive me if I've ever made you cry
Eyes of heaven...


Anyone in particular that's addressed to?


Why do you want to know? I backed my statement.

It's decent. I'm just wondering about the story. It seems like there's a story behind that.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:56 am

Domminus wrote:It's decent. I'm just wondering about the story. It seems like there's a story behind that.


Just decent? I thought it was better than hers.

And back-story... you don't need to know it.
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:58 am

Minnas wrote:
Domminus wrote:It's decent. I'm just wondering about the story. It seems like there's a story behind that.


Just decent? I thought it was better than hers.

And back-story... you don't need to know it.


Your call, of course.

I'm not a major poetry buff or even appreciator. I just don't care for it when someone stands on the sidelines saying "I can do better than that with one hand tied behind my back, eyes closed, standing on a basketball" and never provides any evidence of their supposed ability. Therefore, I wanted you to prove it for all to see.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 7:59 am

Domminus wrote:
Minnas wrote:
Domminus wrote:It's decent. I'm just wondering about the story. It seems like there's a story behind that.


Just decent? I thought it was better than hers.

And back-story... you don't need to know it.


Your call, of course.

I'm not a major poetry buff or even appreciator. I just don't care for it when someone stands on the sidelines saying "I can do better than that with one hand tied behind my back, eyes closed, standing on a basketball" and never provides any evidence of their supposed ability. Therefore, I wanted you to prove it for all to see.


What, are you another Nanatsu fan? :roll:
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:00 am

Minnas wrote:What, are you another Nanatsu fan? :roll:


Have no reason to be yet. I just don't care for armchair quarterbacks.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:01 am

Domminus wrote:
Minnas wrote:What, are you another Nanatsu fan? :roll:


Have no reason to be yet. I just don't care for armchair quarterbacks.


It seems that you, like many here, are a NnT fan.

And don't call me an armchair quaterback, I already showed you my poetry skills.
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:06 am

Minnas wrote:
Domminus wrote:
Minnas wrote:What, are you another Nanatsu fan? :roll:


Have no reason to be yet. I just don't care for armchair quarterbacks.


It seems that you, like many here, are a NnT fan.

And don't call me an armchair quaterback, I already showed you my poetry skills.


Indeed you did, but you weren't before, hence why you were an armchair quarterback.

Now, it turns out your poetry is actually decent, but you had to prove it before I can stand it if you critique others. It would be like me critiquing a brain surgeon during the procedure. I haven't prove that I know shit about brain surgery, so I have no business critiquing him until I go to medical school, do all that it takes to become a brain surgeon, and perform a couple myself. Then, I have the right to critique another brain surgeon's work.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:07 am

Domminus wrote:Indeed you did, but you weren't before, hence why you were an armchair quarterback.

Now, it turns out your poetry is actually decent, but you had to prove it before I can stand it if you critique others. It would be like me critiquing a brain surgeon during the procedure. I haven't prove that I know shit about brain surgery, so I have no business critiquing him until I go to medical school, do all that it takes to become a brain surgeon, and perform a couple myself. Then, I have the right to critique another brain surgeon's work.


I will not get into this discussion with you.
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Fson
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Re: For him...

Postby Fson » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:08 am

Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:Sweet nightfall
that unknowingly
places me between the sword and the wall
Prisioner
I wait for you until dawn

Sweet and warm
is the sweat
that I drink from your neck, love

And now, let me finally burn!

If at the edge of time
I lose my reason
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
devour your heart

Sweet and rough, that ocean
Gothic, the inferno that burnt
the thorns
the gardenias of this passion

Clawing at emotions
Under a treacherous sky
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
Devour your heart

If I try to
If I try to I know
That gambling I'll lose what I earned
Strong and immense
It's hard and hard to tell you that
that if I gamble at it
I will lose myself
Perhaps lose you
If you're not there

Overtake me
Consume me
and smoke me one last time
Bitter
Those sweet lips that I kissed!

I would devour
Devour your heart...




Thats the most disgusting thing ive ever read :meh:
Last edited by Fson on Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:10 am, edited 1 time in total.
by Wilgrove » Wed May 26, 2010 7:51 am

OMG, It's so obvious! Of course!! Science has lied to us!!!

It's time to abandon scientific progress and only look towards the Lord Jesus Christ (who is white of course) for guidance in all matters!

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:08 am

Fson wrote:
Nanatsu no Tsuki wrote:Sweet nightfall
that unknowingly
places me between the sword and the wall
Prisioner
I wait for you until dawn

Sweet and warm
is the sweat
that I drink from your neck, love

And now, let me finally burn!

If at the edge of time
I lose my reason
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
devour your heart

Sweet and rough, that ocean
Gothic, the inferno that burnt
the thorns
the gardenias of this passion

Clawing at emotions
Under a treacherous sky
-I hate it to be slow-
I would devour
Devour your heart

If I try to
If I try to I know
That gambling I'll lose what I earned
Strong and immense
It's hard and hard to tell you that
that if I gamble at it
I will lose myself
Perhaps lose you
If you're not there

Overtake me
Consume me
and smoke me one last time
Bitter
Those sweet lips that I kissed!

I would devour
Devour your heart...




Thats the most disgusting thing ive ever read :)


It is, isn't it?
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:10 am

Fson wrote:Thats the most disgusting thing ive ever read :)


That's a little disturbing, but if it's the most disgusting thing you've ever read, you've never been to the darker parts of the internet.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:11 am

Domminus wrote:
Fson wrote:Thats the most disgusting thing ive ever read :)


That's a little disturbing, but if it's the most disgusting thing you've ever read, you've never been to the darker parts of the internet.


See? Nanatsu fan.

It is disgusting. Devouring hearts and just... plain... nasty.
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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Fson
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Re: For him...

Postby Fson » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:11 am

Yea because first of all Sweat isnt sweet, its salty
secondly you wouldnt drink it more like lick it
and thirdly its just fucking sick
by Wilgrove » Wed May 26, 2010 7:51 am

OMG, It's so obvious! Of course!! Science has lied to us!!!

It's time to abandon scientific progress and only look towards the Lord Jesus Christ (who is white of course) for guidance in all matters!

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Domminus
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Re: For him...

Postby Domminus » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:11 am

Minnas wrote:
Domminus wrote:
Fson wrote:Thats the most disgusting thing ive ever read :)


That's a little disturbing, but if it's the most disgusting thing you've ever read, you've never been to the darker parts of the internet.


See? Nanatsu fan.

It is disgusting. Devouring hearts and just... plain... nasty.


Never had haggis, I see.

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Minnas
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Re: For him...

Postby Minnas » Mon Jun 29, 2009 8:13 am

Domminus wrote:Never had haggis, I see.


Bah.
Take your time to trust in me,
and you will find
Infinity...

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