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Yugoturk
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Postby Yugoturk » Tue Mar 18, 2014 6:09 pm

Hey guys, I thought you all might like to check out my music. www.youtube.com/user/67libermusic
I've only got a couple of songs up at the moment but I wrote them both and there should be more to come! Leave some feedback :)

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Farnhamia
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Postby Farnhamia » Tue Mar 18, 2014 6:10 pm

You might fine a more receptive audience here in Arts & Fiction.
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El Bananistan
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Postby El Bananistan » Tue Mar 18, 2014 6:18 pm

you're good ese
Why do you think anyone gives a shit abot your descendancy, political opinions or religion? Really, you're not nearly as important as you think you are. Nobody cares. That's right. Nobody cares if your grandfather was from Rhodesia, Russia or Norway. You are not important. 'Deal with it'? The only thing I will have to deal with is you, being an overly euphoric, self-important and obnoxious as fuck teenager.

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Demen 2
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Postby Demen 2 » Tue Mar 18, 2014 7:29 pm

I actually really enjoy the sound of your music and the writing, with some actual production equipment and some tlc you could be on to something here man
'Cause music is bigger than words and wider than pictures

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The REAL Glasers
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Postby The REAL Glasers » Wed Mar 19, 2014 3:16 am

You're talented, but the chorus/hook/whatever you want to call it to Lucy's Lullaby is really rough. I don't know if it's a really unfamiliar song for you or if you're unsure of what you're doing because that's what it sounds like when you're singing. The melody for the verse is great, so it's kind of disappointing to hear it fall flat after that.

Love Letter is a lot better but it's kind of poppy for me, solid hook and lyrics though.
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