Suggested changes:
- Sortition should shadow Autocracy. Although the current description for Autocracy ("The nation does not hold democratic elections.") is applicable to Sortition, the common-language definition of "autocracy" does not include sortition, which is very different in intended goals. Additionally, the display of both policies is redundant, as there's no such thing as a sortition that does hold elections to contrast it with.
- Autocracy and Sortition should not shadow Devolution. There is no reason devolution would be limited to democratic societies. Autocratic devolution was a major aspect of medieval feudalism (though the policy actually called Feudalism on NationStates focusses on a different aspect), and while I don't believe any nation using sortition has historically been large enough for devolution to be an issue, but it seems entirely plausible for a sortition-based government to have policitians for local constituencies be selected from lotteries including only residents of those constituencies, and to give significant power to those randomly-selected local governments.
- Autocracy and Sortition should not shadow Native Representation, which should maybe be renamed. The current description explicitly applies only to democracies, but with a slight wording change, I think it would be just as relevant under Sortition. Autocracy is harder to pin down - particularly if you have hereditary leadership (or if your leader is just @@LEADER@@ and only @@LEADER@@ and nobody else), you could easily end up with a ruling caste limited to a particular ethnicity without explicitly saying that people of other ethnicities are banned, so it's hard to unambiguously describe such nations as either allowing or not allowing foreign politicians. (Though since the policy is actually about where you're born rather than what your ethnicity is, it could still be applied to a question of whether a noble family that moves to another nation should be stripped of its titles. In fact, I just remembered that we actually have an issue about something like this, so I'm moving this out of the "iffy" section, even though that's actually keyed off Feudalism rather than Autocracy.) It has also been suggested that Native Representation be renamed to Natural-Born Leaders, due to confusion over what "native" means.
- No Sex should be renamed. It does not actually describe nations where sex is banned, but rather ones where citizens are grown in vats. Some nations that grow citizens in vats still allow non-reproductive sex, whereas at least one issue in the game allows you to ban sex without instituting vats (instead favoring artificial insemination). Suggested alternatives include "Born in a Vat" or the plaintive "Vat-Grown Citizens".
- Banning reproductive sex should shadow No Contraception. This is a weird one. On one hand, such a policy can be interpreted as making contraception mandatory, which is obviously the opposite of making it illegal. On the other hand, if everyone is already supposed to be sterilized (as is the case when using vats) or if even non-reproductive sex is banned (as is the case in the option that advocates artificial insemination), then there would be no legal use for contraceptives, and so someone trying to buy them would certainly be a clue that (s)he's up to something illegal. Either way, standard contraception debate narratives would not be applicable in such a nation.
- More iffy: several other policies, such as No Abortion and Sex Education, are also of questionable relevance in nations where sex is banned and/or citizens are grown in vats (the vagaries of the several different ways NationStates has to do such things makes it more applicable to some than to others - abortion would still be an important issue when using artificial insemination, but not so much when using vats). It's slightly easier to come up with scenarios where these issues would come up in such nations than No Contraception, but they're still something of a stretch, and it wouldn't be any of the normal narratives.
Discussion:
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=33855870#p33855870
http://forum.nationstates.net/viewtopic.php?p=33850817#p33850817
And one or more backstage threads, but you'll need an editor to link you to those.