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Compulsory Consumerist State description error?

PostPosted: Mon Aug 12, 2013 12:14 am
by Solomontaro
are rabid consumers, partly through choice and partly because the government tells them to and dissenters tend to vanish from their homes at night.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but wouldn't it read better if it said:

are rabid consumers, partly through choice and partly because the government tells them to, while dissenters tend to vanish from their homes at night.

PostPosted: Mon Jan 13, 2020 8:43 am
by Serbia-Macedonia
Old Dead pages!

:o

PostPosted: Mon Jan 13, 2020 10:39 am
by Sedgistan
Serbia-Macedonia wrote:Old Dead pages!

:o

That was a completely unnecessary gravedig. Consider yourself fortunate not to be warned. If it happens again, we won't be so lenient.