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by Darmen » Tue Apr 24, 2018 2:37 pm
by Jutsa » Tue Apr 24, 2018 2:52 pm
by Trotterdam » Tue Apr 24, 2018 3:20 pm
Jutsa wrote:3) But what caused the broken nail?
I suspect option 2 is a variant for nations which have banned cheese.Darmen wrote:1. "Symptom: fragile keratin. Diagnosis: calcium deficiency," confidently declares medically-untrained dairy industry marketing rep Wei Schmo. "You need to subsidise the dairies so we can increase supply of our products to the populace in order to treat this. Got milk? Yes, I have! You got money?"
by Trotterdam » Tue Apr 24, 2018 3:42 pm
#970 For Want of a NailInteresting that I got a male feminist. Actually, so did Darmen.
The Issue
A recent investigation into a near miss between two commercial airplanes revealed that it was due to an error on the part of an air traffic controller, who in turn was being distracted by his colleague chattering about how hungry he was, which in turn was caused by his colleague's missing packed lunch, which in turn was caused by his colleague's wife's temporary incapacity, in turn caused by a finger infection, in turn caused by a broken nail. Thus, the media are dubbing this "The Broken Nail Incident."
The Debate
1. "Symptom: fragile keratin. Diagnosis: calcium deficiency," confidently declares medically-untrained dairy industry marketing rep Sayid Keating. "You need to subsidise the dairies so we can increase supply of our products to the populace in order to treat this. Got milk? Yes, I have! You got money?"
3. "Wait? His WIFE made lunch for him?" complains avowed feminist Justin Reyes as he grumbles through mouthfuls of broccoli and dried figs. "This is a sign of the sickness of patriarchy in our society! The men of this nation must be made to make their own damn lunches!"
4. "His wife should have ignored the pain, and made the sandwich," admonishes Billy-Bob Yates, as his own wife timidly picks mud from his boots with her fingernails. "A wife should have to attend to her duties unless a doctor - a male doctor, mind - certifies her medically unfit to work."
5. "Call me Captain Obvious," says airline pilot Captain Tom Obvious, "but doesn't a near-miss air collision suggest we need to be spending more on air safety? We need more air traffic controllers working shorter shifts, and fewer night-time and bad weather flights. What? Someone has to be sensible here." His co-pilot, Jane Sensible, nods in agreement.
6. "This is Emergence at work," reverently whispers wild-eyed lepidopterometeorologist Professor Frank Benjamin. "For too long has national policy been set by simplistic cause and effect models, when the complexity of chaos and the beautiful madness of multiple interacting systems rule our lives! Fund my research into Chaos Socioeconomics, and together we'll learn to properly randomise government policy!"
7. "The only thing emerging here is the Hand of the Divine," counters dishevelled hermit monk Jiang English. "The world is indeed too complex for mere science to explain or predict. Dispense with air traffic control and fancy in-flight technology, and instead require all pilots and passengers to pray before takeoff and landing. Have faith in a higher power!"
Issue by Candlewhisper Archive
Edited by Candlewhisper Archive
#970 For Want of a NailMaybe male-only for the last option ("monk" is traditionally a male profession), but it's hard to say. I'm assuming the feminist is allowed to be female
The Issue
A recent investigation into a near miss between two commercial airplanes revealed that it was due to an error on the part of an air traffic controller, who in turn was being distracted by his colleague chattering about how hungry he was, which in turn was caused by his colleague's missing packed lunch, which in turn was caused by his colleague's wife's temporary incapacity, in turn caused by a finger infection, in turn caused by a broken nail. Thus, the media are dubbing this "The Broken Nail Incident."
The Debate
1. "Symptom: fragile keratin. Diagnosis: calcium deficiency," confidently declares medically-untrained dairy industry marketing rep @@RANDOMNAME@@. "You need to subsidise the dairies so we can increase supply of our products to the populace in order to treat this. Got milk? Yes, I have! You got money?"
3. "Wait? His WIFE made lunch for him?" complains avowed feminist @@RANDOMNAME@@ as @@HE/SHE@@ grumbles through mouthfuls of broccoli and dried figs. "This is a sign of the sickness of patriarchy in our society! The men of this nation must be made to make their own damn lunches!"
4. "His wife should have ignored the pain, and made the sandwich," admonishes @@RANDOMMALENAME@@, as his own wife timidly picks mud from his boots with her fingernails. "A wife should have to attend to her duties unless a doctor - a male doctor, mind - certifies her medically unfit to work."
5. "Call me Captain Obvious," says airline pilot Captain Tom Obvious, "but doesn't a near-miss air collision suggest we need to be spending more on air safety? We need more air traffic controllers working shorter shifts, and fewer night-time and bad weather flights. What? Someone has to be sensible here." His co-pilot, Jane Sensible, nods in agreement.
6. "This is Emergence at work," reverently whispers wild-eyed lepidopterometeorologist Professor Frank Benjamin. "For too long has national policy been set by simplistic cause and effect models, when the complexity of chaos and the beautiful madness of multiple interacting systems rule our lives! Fund my research into Chaos Socioeconomics, and together we'll learn to properly randomise government policy!"
7. "The only thing emerging here is the Hand of the Divine," counters dishevelled hermit monk @@RANDOMNAME@@. "The world is indeed too complex for mere science to explain or predict. Dispense with air traffic control and fancy in-flight technology, and instead require all pilots and passengers to pray before takeoff and landing. Have faith in a higher power!"
Issue by Candlewhisper Archive
Edited by Candlewhisper Archive
by Jutsa » Tue Apr 24, 2018 3:55 pm
by Jutsa » Tue Apr 24, 2018 3:59 pm
by Chan Island » Wed Apr 25, 2018 12:34 am
Conserative Morality wrote:"It's not time yet" is a tactic used by reactionaries in every era. "It's not time for democracy, it's not time for capitalism, it's not time for emancipation." Of course it's not time. It's never time, not on its own. You make it time. If you're under fire in the no-man's land of WW1, you start digging a foxhole even if the ideal time would be when you *aren't* being bombarded, because once you wait for it to be 'time', other situations will need your attention, assuming you survive that long. If the fields aren't furrowed, plow them. If the iron is not hot, make it so. If society is not ready, change it.
by Candlewhisper Archive » Wed Apr 25, 2018 1:06 am
Jutsa wrote:Is this based on something, or is this all your creation? I'm interested to know which. :3
by Trotterdam » Wed Apr 25, 2018 1:09 am
Having fun with homonyms, I seeCandlewhisper Archive wrote:Based on this:Jutsa wrote:Is this based on something, or is this all your creation? I'm interested to know which. :3
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/For_Want_of_a_Nail
by Jutsa » Wed Apr 25, 2018 7:57 am
by Drasnia » Wed Apr 25, 2018 12:07 pm
#971. Ambassadors Inextraordinary [Laeral; ed:Zwangzug]
The Issue
It was recently discovered that your predecessor had filled numerous ambassadorial positions with unqualified candidates and supporters. These include the ambassador to Wezeltonia, your predecessor’s personal masseuse, and the ambassador to Brancaland, a known crime lord. It’s clear to many that Drasnia could use a change in the ranks of its diplomats.
The Debate
1. “This is a splendid opportunity to put in our own, far superior, ambassador picks!” enthuses your Political Adviser, Ming Nagasawa. “It’s obvious that we can’t let those incompetents keep their positions any longer, so we sack them all and replace them with our own people. I’ve prepared a list for you to look at - we’ve got talented people like that first government official to endorse you, the Retail tycoon who donated millions to your campaign, and my younger brother. It’ll be wonderful!”
3. “We need to abolish the entire system of ambassadors as political appointees,” says Stephanie Thawne, who has worked in the Foreign Ministry for the past three decades. “Over my sixteen tours of duty in the Foreign Service, I’ve been posted to hellholes like Brasilistan, Marche Noire, and Maxtopia. And then I see some champagne-sipping flunky waltz on in to become the ambassador, despite having never worked a day in their life. Every ambassador should have as much diplomatic experience as I do before being considered for the job.”
4. “I spy an opportunity...” says your seldom-seen Minister of Whispers, who has somehow appeared beside you. “What our nation needs is for our ambassadors to be trained and equipped for - specialized operations - in foreign nations. Imagine our most elite black-ops agents, striking under cover of darkness to promote our nation’s goals. Think about it. I know you’ll make the right choice.”
5. Bella Chau, the sole survivor of the infamous embassy bombing in Marche Noire, limps into your office with a cane. “You bet I’m not qualified for these ordeals,” she yells. “The things I’ve seen, the horrible things I’ve had to do, the countless nights I’ve spent awake working on that free-trade agreement have left me a broken woman! End this misery, King Rhodar; shutter our embassies abroad and bring us all home.”
by Blargoblarg » Wed Apr 25, 2018 1:09 pm
by Candensia » Wed Apr 25, 2018 1:11 pm
The Free Joy State wrote:Time spent working on writing skills -- even if the draft doesn't work -- is never wasted.
by Jutsa » Wed Apr 25, 2018 2:28 pm
by Chan Island » Wed Apr 25, 2018 2:51 pm
Jutsa wrote:holy...
now that, that is one good ed: no, excellent issue.
Congratulations, Chan — especially for getting an unfunny 2-option issue in the game and pulling it off with flying colours.
Added.
Kinda surprised you aren't submitting these on Annihilators of Chan Island. Interesting.
Er... if anyone can confirm/deny name randomness. Thank you, Blargoblarg. :3
Conserative Morality wrote:"It's not time yet" is a tactic used by reactionaries in every era. "It's not time for democracy, it's not time for capitalism, it's not time for emancipation." Of course it's not time. It's never time, not on its own. You make it time. If you're under fire in the no-man's land of WW1, you start digging a foxhole even if the ideal time would be when you *aren't* being bombarded, because once you wait for it to be 'time', other situations will need your attention, assuming you survive that long. If the fields aren't furrowed, plow them. If the iron is not hot, make it so. If society is not ready, change it.
by Feria-Alkaline » Wed Apr 25, 2018 4:53 pm
by Jutsa » Wed Apr 25, 2018 5:40 pm
by Palos Heights » Thu Apr 26, 2018 5:26 am
by He Qixin » Thu Apr 26, 2018 5:50 am
jacknjellify wrote:Watch Battle For Dream Island or be eliminated.
by Candensia » Thu Apr 26, 2018 5:57 am
He Qixin wrote:Issue #974 has already been determined:
Title: Siren Song [Candesia; ed:Nation of Quebec]
Description: During a severe weather outbreak yesterday, weather sirens raised the alarm about the incoming danger. However, that didn’t seem to concern residents, who had grown all too used to constant tests and malfunctions associated with the aging system. Following dozens of fatalities, a discussion has arisen regarding the best method to warn the public about approaching weather threats.
Option 1: “I’m tired of weathering weather sirens!” shouts storm survivor Marjorie Elgar, still wearing her soggy raincoat. “I’m in my house, glued to my phone, when I thought I heard a train. Turns out, it was no train; it was a twister coming straight at me! Sure, I heard the sirens, but they go off all the time! Instead of listening out for old sirens, we should get official weather alerts through our phones. I mean, people definitely won’t ignore their cell phones!”
Option 2: “Well, not everyone has a cell phone, and what if its battery dies in the middle of a storm, what then?” questions @@NAME@@ Emergency Management spokesperson Silvio MacDonald. “The biggest advantage to sirens is that we can assure that they will always work... as long as they aren’t old, malfunctioning, or whatever. It should be clear that a refit of the siren system is on the radar. All we need to do is update them to be more... attention-grabbing. I’m sure citizens won’t ignore weather sirens if we replace the wail with, say, a blood-curdling scream!”"
Option 3: “Why is it the government’s responsibility to warn us of incoming life or death situations?” rants well-known libertarian political speaker Archibald Sims, failing to intervene as his infant picks up a nearby nail gun. “It’s the responsibility of the individual to ensure their own safety. We shouldn’t be wasting @@CURRENCY@@ maintaining a faulty, hardly-used system. I say we let the old siren system die, save ourselves some money, and call it a day. If the average @@DEMONYMNOUN@@ doesn’t have enough common sense to take caution when the weather gets bad, then I forecast that @@NAME@@ has a far bigger problem.”
Since the issue was taken straight from NSindex, I'm not sure whether the names are actually determined by the @@RANDOMNAME@@ macro rather than being arbitrary.
The Free Joy State wrote:Time spent working on writing skills -- even if the draft doesn't work -- is never wasted.
by Minoa » Thu Apr 26, 2018 6:36 am
Candensia wrote:He Qixin wrote:Issue #974 has already been determined:
Title: Siren Song [Candesia; ed:Nation of Quebec]
Description: During a severe weather outbreak yesterday, weather sirens raised the alarm about the incoming danger. However, that didn’t seem to concern residents, who had grown all too used to constant tests and malfunctions associated with the aging system. Following dozens of fatalities, a discussion has arisen regarding the best method to warn the public about approaching weather threats.
Option 1: “I’m tired of weathering weather sirens!” shouts storm survivor Marjorie Elgar, still wearing her soggy raincoat. “I’m in my house, glued to my phone, when I thought I heard a train. Turns out, it was no train; it was a twister coming straight at me! Sure, I heard the sirens, but they go off all the time! Instead of listening out for old sirens, we should get official weather alerts through our phones. I mean, people definitely won’t ignore their cell phones!”
Option 2: “Well, not everyone has a cell phone, and what if its battery dies in the middle of a storm, what then?” questions @@NAME@@ Emergency Management spokesperson Silvio MacDonald. “The biggest advantage to sirens is that we can assure that they will always work... as long as they aren’t old, malfunctioning, or whatever. It should be clear that a refit of the siren system is on the radar. All we need to do is update them to be more... attention-grabbing. I’m sure citizens won’t ignore weather sirens if we replace the wail with, say, a blood-curdling scream!”"
Option 3: “Why is it the government’s responsibility to warn us of incoming life or death situations?” rants well-known libertarian political speaker Archibald Sims, failing to intervene as his infant picks up a nearby nail gun. “It’s the responsibility of the individual to ensure their own safety. We shouldn’t be wasting @@CURRENCY@@ maintaining a faulty, hardly-used system. I say we let the old siren system die, save ourselves some money, and call it a day. If the average @@DEMONYMNOUN@@ doesn’t have enough common sense to take caution when the weather gets bad, then I forecast that @@NAME@@ has a far bigger problem.”
Since the issue was taken straight from NSindex, I'm not sure whether the names are actually determined by the @@RANDOMNAME@@ macro rather than being arbitrary.
Hehe. Thank you Nation of Quebec for editing this! Much obliged.
EDIT: the reporter on NSIndex went lax on the macros, I shall correct them momentarilly.
In option 3, @@CURRENCY@@ should be @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@, it is correct in the issue.
I wrote all names to be totally random, but option 1 might be fixed female, and option 3 might be fixed male. Life is tough for you, isnt it Jutsa?
by Trotterdam » Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:47 am
#971 Ambassadors Inextraordinary
The Issue
It was recently discovered that your predecessor had filled numerous ambassadorial positions with unqualified candidates and supporters. These include the ambassador to Wezeltonia, your predecessor's personal masseuse, and the ambassador to Brancaland, a known crime lord. It's clear to many that @@NAME@@ could use a change in the ranks of its diplomats.
The Debate
1. "This is a splendid opportunity to put in our own, far superior, ambassador picks!" enthuses your Political Adviser, @@RANDOMNAME@@. "It's obvious that we can't let those incompetents keep their positions any longer, so we sack them all and replace them with our own people. I've prepared a list for you to look at - we've got talented people like that first government official to endorse you, the @@MAJORINDUSTRY@@ tycoon who donated millions to your campaign, and my younger brother. It'll be wonderful!"
3. "We need to abolish the entire system of ambassadors as political appointees," says @@RANDOMNAME@@, who has worked in the Foreign Ministry for the past three decades. "Over my sixteen tours of duty in the Foreign Service, I've been posted to hellholes like Brasilistan, Marche Noire, and Maxtopia. And then I see some champagne-sipping flunky waltz on in to become the ambassador, despite having never worked a day in their life. Every ambassador should have as much diplomatic experience as I do before being considered for the job."
4. "I spy an opportunity..." says your seldom-seen Minister of Whispers, who has somehow appeared beside you. "What our nation needs is for our ambassadors to be trained and equipped for - specialized operations - in foreign nations. Imagine our most elite black-ops agents, striking under cover of darkness to promote our nation's goals. Think about it. I know you'll make the right choice."
5. @@RANDOMNAME@@, the sole survivor of the infamous embassy bombing in Marche Noire, limps into your office with a cane. "You bet I'm not qualified for these ordeals," @@HE/SHE@@ yells. "The things I've seen, the horrible things I've had to do, the countless nights I've spent awake working on that free-trade agreement have left me a broken @@MAN/WOMAN@@! End this misery,@@LEADER@@; shutter our embassies abroad and bring us all home."
Issue by Laeral
Edited by Zwangzug
#974 Siren Song
The Issue
During a severe weather outbreak yesterday, weather sirens raised the alarm about the incoming danger. However, that didn't seem to concern residents, who had grown all too used to constant tests and malfunctions associated with the aging system. Following dozens of fatalities, a discussion has arisen regarding the best method to warn the public about approaching weather threats.
The Debate
1. "I'm tired of weathering weather sirens!" shouts storm survivor @@RANDOMNAME@@, still wearing @@HIS/HER@@ soggy raincoat. "I'm in my house, glued to my phone, when I thought I heard a train. Turns out, it was no train; it was a twister coming straight at me! Sure, I heard the sirens, but they go off all the time! Instead of listening out for old sirens, we should get official weather alerts through our phones. I mean, people definitely won't ignore their cell phones!"
2. "Well, not everyone has a cell phone, and what if its battery dies in the middle of a storm, what then?" questions Trotterdam Emergency Management spokesperson @@RANDOMNAME@@. "The biggest advantage to sirens is that we can assure that they will always work... as long as they aren't old, malfunctioning, or whatever. It should be clear that a refit of the siren system is on the radar. All we need to do is update them to be more... attention-grabbing. I'm sure citizens won't ignore weather sirens if we replace the wail with, say, a blood-curdling scream!"
3. "Why is it the government's responsibility to warn us of incoming life or death situations?" rants well-known libertarian political speaker @@RANDOMNAME@@, failing to intervene as @@HIS/HER@@ infant picks up a nearby nail gun. "It's the responsibility of the individual to ensure their own safety. We shouldn't be wasting @@CURRENCYPLURAL@@ maintaining a faulty, hardly-used system. I say we let the old siren system die, save ourselves some money, and call it a day. If the average @@DEMONYMNOUN@@ doesn't have enough common sense to take caution when the weather gets bad, then I forecast that @@NAME@@ has a far bigger problem."
Issue by Candensia
Edited by Nation of Quebec
I also got a girl for 1 and a boy for 3, so I can't help you there.Candensia wrote:I wrote all names to be totally random, but option 1 might be fixed female, and option 3 might be fixed male. Life is tough for you, isnt it Jutsa?
by Candensia » Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:52 am
The Free Joy State wrote:Time spent working on writing skills -- even if the draft doesn't work -- is never wasted.
by Trotterdam » Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:56 am
by Jutsa » Thu Apr 26, 2018 10:57 am
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