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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2023 1:57 pm
by Ostrovskiy
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2023 4:03 pm
by Minskiev
"How dare they do this to @@DEMONYMPLURAL@@" in Option 1 doesn't sound like something a person would say

Also a bit strange how the Option 1 solution of "cheaper, more accessible repairs" has the effect line of "no repairs, oh and also things become less cheap". And I don't see why the status quo would make e-waste...explode, literally or figuratively. You could probably somewhat switch these effect lines, like:

Option 1: "The market for electronic repairs is e-xploding"

Option 2: "recently bought-out electronic repair shops now charge exorbitant prices for 'making' your phone look brand-new"

PostPosted: Sat Mar 18, 2023 7:42 pm
by Ostrovskiy
Minskiev wrote:"How dare they do this to @@DEMONYMPLURAL@@" in Option 1 doesn't sound like something a person would say

Also a bit strange how the Option 1 solution of "cheaper, more accessible repairs" has the effect line of "no repairs, oh and also things become less cheap". And I don't see why the status quo would make e-waste...explode, literally or figuratively. You could probably somewhat switch these effect lines, like:

Option 1: "The market for electronic repairs is e-xploding"

Option 2: "recently bought-out electronic repair shops now charge exorbitant prices for 'making' your phone look brand-new"

Thx, next draft up