Background: This was inspired by an article I saw somewhere about the declining and aging populations of Trappist monasteries. Trappists are known for brewing a style of beer that is unique to individual monasteries and made in extremely limited quantities. Trappist ales are renowned for their quality and prized for their rarity. Declining monastic populations threaten that ancient brewing tradition, and beers which are already extremely rare could go entirely extinct. I thought I could modify this into an Issue, changing the item in question from beer to cheese to be more "G-rated."
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I made some significant changes, but the structure is there and I think it's very nearly ready this time. The new title I'm very happy with, but except for 1 I think all the fallouts could be better/funnier. I'll have to submit "as-is" if I run out of time though.
Title: "Our Feta Which Art in Havarti..."
Description:
An ancient monastery in a remote part of @@NAME@@ is home to the Holy Order of St. Ilton. The monks of this Order are the only makers of Iltonian cheese, a unique variety beloved by many of your fellow @@DEMONYM_PLURAL_NOUN@@. However, with most of the monks getting on in years and very few novices entering the monastery, the Order is at risk of disappearing, and Iltonian cheese along with it.
Issue Validity:
Nation must allow religion. Nation must not have mandatory vegan diets. Nation must have a fixed, land-based location (i.e. not located underwater or in space).
Choice 1:
"Please respect our ancient beliefs," asks Father @@RANDOM_MALE_NAME_1@@, the indescribably elderly Abbott of the Holy Order of St. Ilton (via handwritten letter to avoid breaking his personal vow of silence). "The @@DEMONYM_ADJECTIVE@@ obsession with Iltonian cheese verges on most appalling idolatry. The brethren of the Order make and sell cheese only to provide for the upkeep of the monastery and other small financial necessities. We repudiate filthy lucre and all worldly fame. If God wills that our Order and traditional cheesemaking techniques die out, then let His will be done."
Choice 1 Validity: All
Fallout: cheese lovers in @@NAME@@ have a case of the bleus
Choice 2:
"This particular Abbot is an extreme conservative," explains @RANDOMNAME_2@@, chair of the Religion Department at @@RANDOM_LAST_NAME_3@@ College and a leading expert on the Holy Order of St. Ilton. "Only a few of the monks fully agree with him. If you declared Iltonian cheese to be a @@DEMONYM_ADJECTIVE@@ cultural treasure and granted the Order a permanent financial stipend, I'm confident a majority of the monks would be in favor of teaching non-members their techniques and allowing the production of Iltonian cheese outside the monastery."
Choice 2 Validity: All
Fallout: the once-obscure Feast Day of St. Ilton becomes the secular holiday of Cheesemas
Choice 3:
"Our top food scientists have been working on this problem for years! We could get Iltonian-Style Processed Cheese Product onto store shelves in less than six months," boasts @@RANDOMNAME_4@@, Director of Innovation at processed food conglomerate Frakt Zhein, makers of 'CHEEZ! In a Spray Can!(TM)'. "But we'll need the government to relax a few of their more draconian food safety regulations first," @@HE@@ adds. "You wouldn't believe all the additives we have to use in this stuff to get the flavor and texture right."
Choice 3 Validity: Nation must be capitalist.
Fallout: corporations stop printing ingredient lists on food packages. "We're not worried about what's in it, why should you be?"
Choice 4:
"Don't ask why the monks aren't making more cheese, ask why this country isn't making more monks!" writes prominent conservative cleric @@RANDOM_MALE_NAME_5@@ in a guest editorial for a leading right-wing newsmagazine. "The average @@DEMONYM_ADJECTIVE@@ young man is lazy, undisciplined, and directionless; a strict monastic life of fasting and prayer is the antidote to all of that! I call on our @@LEADER@@ and government to encourage more young men to enter monasteries! I do appreciate a nice wedge of Iltonian cheese, but the true benefit will be a more virtuous and morally upright society."
Choice 4 Validity: All
Fallout: popular youth apparel brands add monk's habits to their product lines
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